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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lorett,
Pleasssssssssssseee tell me darling Draco is going to be ok, he\'s an absolute honey. Thanks for the well wishes for London, its not that far from us ( takes about 5 hours) I\'m sooooo envious of you living in California, I was there last Summer and ADORED it so much so im going back next year for a month. Im in rainy England just by the Lake District, its beautiful place but soooo wet! Ohhh and the wrist is coming along fine, how\'s the cough? If i manage to find the Leaky Couldron i\'ll be taking pikkies of it, and going in for a drink. Stay safe and well
thanks for adding me to your emailing list
tons of hugs
Silverdragon
Pleasssssssssssseee tell me darling Draco is going to be ok, he\'s an absolute honey. Thanks for the well wishes for London, its not that far from us ( takes about 5 hours) I\'m sooooo envious of you living in California, I was there last Summer and ADORED it so much so im going back next year for a month. Im in rainy England just by the Lake District, its beautiful place but soooo wet! Ohhh and the wrist is coming along fine, how\'s the cough? If i manage to find the Leaky Couldron i\'ll be taking pikkies of it, and going in for a drink. Stay safe and well
thanks for adding me to your emailing list
tons of hugs
Silverdragon
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya, well I guess that was a nice enough transitional chapter. It left me wanting, however, though I\'m sure that doesn\'t bother YOU as much as it bothers ME. Geez...Draco is so pathetic. Already so into Laurel that her name\'s the ONLY thing he says. Laurel is so...weird. Being all into Draco when there\'s Harry there.
I\'m sorry.
Did I forget to mention that I\'m in love with and rooting for your Harry?
Hahaha...okay, don\'t worry. I\'m okay with Draco too. It\'s just that he\'s been asleep for the last few chapters. Harry seems the most normal. He\'s got all that responsibility, yes, but he\'s all \"I want this girl, I\'ll take this girl.\" Draco\'s all weird and crying all the time in his room. Laurel\'s all whiny and teenagery and hormonal and looking-into-peoples\'-eyes-to-see-their-soul-y.
Why is there so much of Laurel\'s mom? Does she play an important part later? I guess they do need an adult after that ordeal.
I did like Draco\'s parents. Where\'d they go?
I\'m sorry.
Did I forget to mention that I\'m in love with and rooting for your Harry?
Hahaha...okay, don\'t worry. I\'m okay with Draco too. It\'s just that he\'s been asleep for the last few chapters. Harry seems the most normal. He\'s got all that responsibility, yes, but he\'s all \"I want this girl, I\'ll take this girl.\" Draco\'s all weird and crying all the time in his room. Laurel\'s all whiny and teenagery and hormonal and looking-into-peoples\'-eyes-to-see-their-soul-y.
Why is there so much of Laurel\'s mom? Does she play an important part later? I guess they do need an adult after that ordeal.
I did like Draco\'s parents. Where\'d they go?
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was both SWEET and incredibly funny when Draco started talking about using himself as a human shield. I especially liked Laurel\'s reaction. I could HEAR it. \"What? NO! Draco, I will most definitely not...\" ya, paraphrasing, but that was funny. In a sweet way.
Maybe it wasn\'t supposed to be funny. I wasn\'t really tuned into the whole Draco-being-hurt-nearly-to-death thing. I didn\'t really realize it until he was on the couch and Laurel\'s mom was having those thoughts. Maybe there needed to be some more drama in the actual part where he got hurt. Inject drama. Maybe make the Death Eater who did it someone we know.
ANYWAY!
Here\'s a fact for you:
I\'ve gotten about sixty percent of the hits for my A Real Edge story as you\'ve gotten for this one BUT I\'ve gotten LESS than ten percent of the reviews you\'ve gotten.
You have a very review-inspiring story here. Isn\'t that nice?
Maybe it wasn\'t supposed to be funny. I wasn\'t really tuned into the whole Draco-being-hurt-nearly-to-death thing. I didn\'t really realize it until he was on the couch and Laurel\'s mom was having those thoughts. Maybe there needed to be some more drama in the actual part where he got hurt. Inject drama. Maybe make the Death Eater who did it someone we know.
ANYWAY!
Here\'s a fact for you:
I\'ve gotten about sixty percent of the hits for my A Real Edge story as you\'ve gotten for this one BUT I\'ve gotten LESS than ten percent of the reviews you\'ve gotten.
You have a very review-inspiring story here. Isn\'t that nice?
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! im SOOOOOOO sorry i couldn\'t review sooner! I have been away. so sorry! dude! woah definatly HAVE been hanging around my sister to much. dude i NEVER say dude. DARN IT! i did it again! dang. anywho...... well i am speechless. well im apparently NOT speechless but i am.... YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! lol. MUCH LOVE! KEEP WRITING!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Umm Umm *smacks her lips* Chapter 25 (I\'m not confused anymore) was so delicious! Lemony good!
Hold on a second, Miss Lorett!!! What makes you think that just because I read the fabulous sexy smut that is chapter 5 of \"It Had to Be You\" I would not appreciate a wonderfully hot \'n\' heavy fantastically juicy makeout session with gorgeous green-eyed Harry as the star stud muffin???!!! Just \'cause things didn\'t progress as far doesn\'t mean the Infamous Bathroom Scene wasn\'t HOT AS HELL! I had to take off my sweatshirt, turn on the ceiling fan and throw an ice pack around my neck, I was so hot and bothered reading this! That first kiss was as sexy as...oh, my brain is short-circuiting and I can\'t think of an appropriate metaphor...sexy as... aw heck! *throws in the towel, grabs the champagne flute from you, clinks it and tosses it back. Looks around the gutter and notes the fine company she is keeping*
The sound you are hearing is me, running the cold water in preparation...
Harry and Laurel have a lot in common...like the wallowing in guilt thing they both do. They know that \"with great power comes great responsibility\" (hee hee, I got to throw a Spider-man quote in...how often does THAT happen?) and of course, great guilt when bad stuff happens. But thank goodness they didn\'t wallow in guilt too long but were able to progress to the checking each other out with hearts a\'thumping and senses a\'tingling in a timely manner! I like how you\'ve made Laurel a reader of people\'s character and soul, but that sure can put one in some awkward situations when one is reading a gorgeous hottie who\'s got one thing on his mind. The bathroom scene being a good case in point. I like how she get\'s taken over by Harry\'s emotions.
The slight digression into Harry\'s musings about girls\' reactions to his scar was very funny.
Damn nipples and their ability to betray a girl! It\'s not like you can say \"Heh, heh...cold in here, no?\" when you are blushing and sweating, now can you?
The healing scene was just sensuous and yummy. Aww... the whole thing was sensuous and yummy, and just beautifully written! The exploring tongues, the groping, the hands in the hair...sigh...so damned fantastic.... *kicks back in the gutter for a little while* And the paragraph right before Ron interrupts (someone Avada him!) was just....OH MY! *sips champagne and grins happily at Lorett*
My poor Harry is shot down in the end. I\'m glad you mention he will get some other action later on. In the meantime, I gladly volunteer to comfort him! Poor poor raven-haired cutie, you just come here to RahNee and she will make it all better! Just give her a second to get out of Chapter 13 where she is comforting a naked, crying Draco...
Lorett, dearest, I must ask you not to use the words \"Draco\" \"sexy as hell\" and \"wouldn\'t that just be the best ride ever?\" near each other again. I will NOT be held responsible for my actions...
I am back in good standing with IFOLFA, you will be relieved to know...and I\'m getting to work on your jacket cover! I\'ll be your publicity agent anytime you want, hon. I love reading and reviewing your work: it makes me a happy, happy girl. Hugs and kisses and more hugs to you, and some \"get 100% well\" wishes to boot! *mwah*
BTW, I hope I made it clear that I LOVED this chapter?! Just checking!
Hold on a second, Miss Lorett!!! What makes you think that just because I read the fabulous sexy smut that is chapter 5 of \"It Had to Be You\" I would not appreciate a wonderfully hot \'n\' heavy fantastically juicy makeout session with gorgeous green-eyed Harry as the star stud muffin???!!! Just \'cause things didn\'t progress as far doesn\'t mean the Infamous Bathroom Scene wasn\'t HOT AS HELL! I had to take off my sweatshirt, turn on the ceiling fan and throw an ice pack around my neck, I was so hot and bothered reading this! That first kiss was as sexy as...oh, my brain is short-circuiting and I can\'t think of an appropriate metaphor...sexy as... aw heck! *throws in the towel, grabs the champagne flute from you, clinks it and tosses it back. Looks around the gutter and notes the fine company she is keeping*
The sound you are hearing is me, running the cold water in preparation...
Harry and Laurel have a lot in common...like the wallowing in guilt thing they both do. They know that \"with great power comes great responsibility\" (hee hee, I got to throw a Spider-man quote in...how often does THAT happen?) and of course, great guilt when bad stuff happens. But thank goodness they didn\'t wallow in guilt too long but were able to progress to the checking each other out with hearts a\'thumping and senses a\'tingling in a timely manner! I like how you\'ve made Laurel a reader of people\'s character and soul, but that sure can put one in some awkward situations when one is reading a gorgeous hottie who\'s got one thing on his mind. The bathroom scene being a good case in point. I like how she get\'s taken over by Harry\'s emotions.
The slight digression into Harry\'s musings about girls\' reactions to his scar was very funny.
Damn nipples and their ability to betray a girl! It\'s not like you can say \"Heh, heh...cold in here, no?\" when you are blushing and sweating, now can you?
The healing scene was just sensuous and yummy. Aww... the whole thing was sensuous and yummy, and just beautifully written! The exploring tongues, the groping, the hands in the hair...sigh...so damned fantastic.... *kicks back in the gutter for a little while* And the paragraph right before Ron interrupts (someone Avada him!) was just....OH MY! *sips champagne and grins happily at Lorett*
My poor Harry is shot down in the end. I\'m glad you mention he will get some other action later on. In the meantime, I gladly volunteer to comfort him! Poor poor raven-haired cutie, you just come here to RahNee and she will make it all better! Just give her a second to get out of Chapter 13 where she is comforting a naked, crying Draco...
Lorett, dearest, I must ask you not to use the words \"Draco\" \"sexy as hell\" and \"wouldn\'t that just be the best ride ever?\" near each other again. I will NOT be held responsible for my actions...
I am back in good standing with IFOLFA, you will be relieved to know...and I\'m getting to work on your jacket cover! I\'ll be your publicity agent anytime you want, hon. I love reading and reviewing your work: it makes me a happy, happy girl. Hugs and kisses and more hugs to you, and some \"get 100% well\" wishes to boot! *mwah*
BTW, I hope I made it clear that I LOVED this chapter?! Just checking!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I kept thinking Laurels mom or dad would walk in on her and Harry, I wasn\'t expecting Ron to interupt them. I know you said there wouldn\'t be no action between her and Harry, but just one more time , maybe at Hogwarts.
I felt so sorry for Draco. I know it\'s going to be a Draco/Laurel story, but I honostly thought you were going to write him out. I know it was a goofy thought....punish me later.
Ron and that poor leg of his, I can\'t remember which leg got hurt in Prisoner of Azkaban, thats what it reminded me of.
Wouldn\'t it be just like Harry, get in the middle of a big fight, and only come out of it with just scratches.
I love it, can;t wait to read more. I\'m your loyal reader forever.
I felt so sorry for Draco. I know it\'s going to be a Draco/Laurel story, but I honostly thought you were going to write him out. I know it was a goofy thought....punish me later.
Ron and that poor leg of his, I can\'t remember which leg got hurt in Prisoner of Azkaban, thats what it reminded me of.
Wouldn\'t it be just like Harry, get in the middle of a big fight, and only come out of it with just scratches.
I love it, can;t wait to read more. I\'m your loyal reader forever.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Still in love with the story (and Draco, of course), still reading avidely, still archiving!
Is Laurel\'s double attraction purely hormonal or has her soul-seeing ability something to do with it?
Hope to see Draco well and snarky soon!
Keep up the good work, I\'ll be awaiting the updates!
Ciao!
Still in love with the story (and Draco, of course), still reading avidely, still archiving!
Is Laurel\'s double attraction purely hormonal or has her soul-seeing ability something to do with it?
Hope to see Draco well and snarky soon!
Keep up the good work, I\'ll be awaiting the updates!
Ciao!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again!
Just a little P.S. after I read the review about the \'well endowed\' part. A tip, actually:
All sex gods do not need to have big penises. I\'ve met regular endowed men who were kings in bed and big guys who needed constant instructions. There is an expression in french about those kinds of guys : \'He\'s hung like a stallion but he shags like a donkey.\'
And often, it\'s true. Actually, often enough, well endowed men have this misconception that their size alone will drive girls to ecstasy.
And there is also the women\'s size to consider. Not all women are equipped to accomodate ten inches inside of them. I\'ve met girls who only liked them big, girls who preferred them small and one girl who loved them crooked!
So many fanfics make Draco (and for some reason Ron also, most of the time) huge, that it becomes a boring common fact.
Hope to read you soon, ciao!
Just a little P.S. after I read the review about the \'well endowed\' part. A tip, actually:
All sex gods do not need to have big penises. I\'ve met regular endowed men who were kings in bed and big guys who needed constant instructions. There is an expression in french about those kinds of guys : \'He\'s hung like a stallion but he shags like a donkey.\'
And often, it\'s true. Actually, often enough, well endowed men have this misconception that their size alone will drive girls to ecstasy.
And there is also the women\'s size to consider. Not all women are equipped to accomodate ten inches inside of them. I\'ve met girls who only liked them big, girls who preferred them small and one girl who loved them crooked!
So many fanfics make Draco (and for some reason Ron also, most of the time) huge, that it becomes a boring common fact.
Hope to read you soon, ciao!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya!!
Hmph. You bet you can\'t forget me on that ride. I\'ve been strapped in since Day 1. Lovely update, my dear. Simply gorgeous. Just enough action to turn me on....which reminds me. It Had to Be You. Don\'t worry, I went right over there to read it after I reviewed last time, but as I think I mentioned, I have LIMITED COMPUTER TIME (partly due to my mother\'s paranoia of technology. SHe\'s afraid it\'ll turn me into a vegetable. She doesn\'t realize I\'m doing something CONSTRUCTIVE. Hmph), SO I WASN\'T ABLE TO FINISH THE CHAPPIE!! HOW UNFAIR IS THAT, EH? I was so mad. But then, I figured I had never really read (soaked in, really) OR reviewed for the other four chapters, so I\'m going to go slow and review each one in detail. Heh heh, bear with me. It may take me a couple weeks or so, but it will be well worth the wait. I hope. School does get in the way (oh, and by the way, I\'m in ninth grade. Cringes. I know, I know, young, immature, naive....eek. We\'ll ignore all that though. Hem hem...).
Okay, now onto your ...er... delicious story. I, at least, get to read the smut in the right order. Yay!! Wow, Harry is sooooooooo dreamy. My favorite line in your whole description of him was...hold on...let me find it....ah. Here it is (don\'t mind the lengthy quote): \"This was very unlike Harry; he was anything but forward when it came to women. He
Hmph. You bet you can\'t forget me on that ride. I\'ve been strapped in since Day 1. Lovely update, my dear. Simply gorgeous. Just enough action to turn me on....which reminds me. It Had to Be You. Don\'t worry, I went right over there to read it after I reviewed last time, but as I think I mentioned, I have LIMITED COMPUTER TIME (partly due to my mother\'s paranoia of technology. SHe\'s afraid it\'ll turn me into a vegetable. She doesn\'t realize I\'m doing something CONSTRUCTIVE. Hmph), SO I WASN\'T ABLE TO FINISH THE CHAPPIE!! HOW UNFAIR IS THAT, EH? I was so mad. But then, I figured I had never really read (soaked in, really) OR reviewed for the other four chapters, so I\'m going to go slow and review each one in detail. Heh heh, bear with me. It may take me a couple weeks or so, but it will be well worth the wait. I hope. School does get in the way (oh, and by the way, I\'m in ninth grade. Cringes. I know, I know, young, immature, naive....eek. We\'ll ignore all that though. Hem hem...).
Okay, now onto your ...er... delicious story. I, at least, get to read the smut in the right order. Yay!! Wow, Harry is sooooooooo dreamy. My favorite line in your whole description of him was...hold on...let me find it....ah. Here it is (don\'t mind the lengthy quote): \"This was very unlike Harry; he was anything but forward when it came to women. He
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Lorett!
I hate those kinds of crazy, non-ending, harsh coughs that you\'re talking about! They\'re so irritating and annoying! Poor you! I hope it stops soon and that you\'ll be all better a.s.a.p! Because being ill is no fun! I\'m feeling better that I was last week. I\'ve been having trouble sleeping because I\'m stressing out about too many things (lack of money, lack of men, too much work etc etc) so I think that might be why! But it just made me feel so... eugh (not really a very discriptive word but I think you\'ll understand what I mean) that it got me down. But I\'m feeling better and less hormonal. Thanks for your concern and your cheer up hugs! *hugs Lorrett back*
Anyway onto my review... Well what can I say... I think WOW just about covers it! So much emotion in there that I was finding it hard to breathe whist reading it! Hee hee! That\'s me getting caught up in everything as per usual! I can see Harry as this vibrant, full of energy kind of guy. He\'s just been through so much for a person so young that he has to have all this energy pouring out of him. I\'d find it very attractive. As for Laurel, I\'m not mad at her. I don\'t really blame her! A good looking guy with so much to give like Harry... Well lets just say I wouldn\'t say no!!! Hee hee! But I can see how this will complicate things with the whole Draco/Laurel thing. But it\'s a very clever twist and totally understandable! I could imagine needing to get rid of some emotions after going through an ordeal like they did and what a way to do that!!!! Can\'t wait to see your take on the heat between Draco and Laurel! I agree with how you think he is and *sigh* I can\'t wait to read it all!!! I was right there in the gutter with you hunny!!!
I\'ve read the new chapter of YOU but I haven\'t had chance to review (ooohhh I\'m a poet and I didn\'t know it!) but I promise I will soon! I love the fluffy sweetness of it all but I\'ll save that for my review!
Anyway, must dash (how british of me!) because its 4.13am and I should really be in bed! Update soon but make sure you concentrate on getting better first!
Lots of huggles and smooches
Annie!
I hate those kinds of crazy, non-ending, harsh coughs that you\'re talking about! They\'re so irritating and annoying! Poor you! I hope it stops soon and that you\'ll be all better a.s.a.p! Because being ill is no fun! I\'m feeling better that I was last week. I\'ve been having trouble sleeping because I\'m stressing out about too many things (lack of money, lack of men, too much work etc etc) so I think that might be why! But it just made me feel so... eugh (not really a very discriptive word but I think you\'ll understand what I mean) that it got me down. But I\'m feeling better and less hormonal. Thanks for your concern and your cheer up hugs! *hugs Lorrett back*
Anyway onto my review... Well what can I say... I think WOW just about covers it! So much emotion in there that I was finding it hard to breathe whist reading it! Hee hee! That\'s me getting caught up in everything as per usual! I can see Harry as this vibrant, full of energy kind of guy. He\'s just been through so much for a person so young that he has to have all this energy pouring out of him. I\'d find it very attractive. As for Laurel, I\'m not mad at her. I don\'t really blame her! A good looking guy with so much to give like Harry... Well lets just say I wouldn\'t say no!!! Hee hee! But I can see how this will complicate things with the whole Draco/Laurel thing. But it\'s a very clever twist and totally understandable! I could imagine needing to get rid of some emotions after going through an ordeal like they did and what a way to do that!!!! Can\'t wait to see your take on the heat between Draco and Laurel! I agree with how you think he is and *sigh* I can\'t wait to read it all!!! I was right there in the gutter with you hunny!!!
I\'ve read the new chapter of YOU but I haven\'t had chance to review (ooohhh I\'m a poet and I didn\'t know it!) but I promise I will soon! I love the fluffy sweetness of it all but I\'ll save that for my review!
Anyway, must dash (how british of me!) because its 4.13am and I should really be in bed! Update soon but make sure you concentrate on getting better first!
Lots of huggles and smooches
Annie!