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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lorett Darling!
How you feeling? I have a couple of suggestions for ites if you need to move your stories. The sites themselves are good sites and well maintained, forgive me if you know about them already but here goes.
http://pureblood.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site dedicated to only the Malfoys
http://lumos.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site for general Harry Potter stories
there are some other sites within the family of sycophanthex which deals with Severus Snape, Remus Lupin and a few others. Hope these come in handy if you do need to move, dont worry if you do though, i\'ll move with you.
Anyway yes I am a brit, and of course I will look over your lingustic skills, but your doing ok at the moment. However if you feel like you need to know anything in particular then just drop me an email and i\'ll happily do what I can for you.
I did lOVE california, but being a brit I HAD to do the while tourist thing, and do Disney, Universal and everything else that you do on Vacation ( see im learning, vacations are called holidays in the UK) We stayed in Anaheim for 3 weeks. However i can\'t come back this year owing to he fact I spent
How you feeling? I have a couple of suggestions for ites if you need to move your stories. The sites themselves are good sites and well maintained, forgive me if you know about them already but here goes.
http://pureblood.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site dedicated to only the Malfoys
http://lumos.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site for general Harry Potter stories
there are some other sites within the family of sycophanthex which deals with Severus Snape, Remus Lupin and a few others. Hope these come in handy if you do need to move, dont worry if you do though, i\'ll move with you.
Anyway yes I am a brit, and of course I will look over your lingustic skills, but your doing ok at the moment. However if you feel like you need to know anything in particular then just drop me an email and i\'ll happily do what I can for you.
I did lOVE california, but being a brit I HAD to do the while tourist thing, and do Disney, Universal and everything else that you do on Vacation ( see im learning, vacations are called holidays in the UK) We stayed in Anaheim for 3 weeks. However i can\'t come back this year owing to he fact I spent
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t think i\'m going to update my story until my birthday... June 3rd. NO ONE ASIDE FROM YOU IS REVIEWING/READING MY STORY!!!!!! that makes me sad :((((((((. *sigh* KEEP WRITING!
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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, once again another chapter that I LOVE. Oddly enough this chapter is so simple in context but helps to bind the underlying feelings and emotions that exist. I forgot that you had Laurel remember about the gold light from Harry\'s, Draco\'s and her wand.
I really enjoy the adjectives you use. Sometimes I don\'t really notice it b/c of all the fast-action your dishing out, but in this chapter i really noticed it when Draco was being analysed by Laurel. Especially the whole \"explosion of of white blond....\" Like HONESTLY, who thinks to use those words??!!! And thats exactly why I love reading your stories, its a fresh look on things.
I really hope that AFF doesn\'t close down just b/c you\'ve been through enough! Honestly, why can\'t a site just stay around for once. Its a good thing that you have the backup (which I *ahum* must start posting at.....) But of course I would follow you back to FF if need be. I need to know what happens to the happy couple! GOD FORBID if you ever stopped writing, I think I would become a zombie without the smart, cool intelect of my DEAR LORETT!!!
Hmm, I\'ve had a whole day of good news!! I moved back home recently and its been a struggle to find a good job *note to self, never work in fast food AGAIN* But I had a wicked interview today, got my tax return, AND you posted another chapter of KEYS. I think this may be my lucky day. How are things down in sunny cal right now??? The west coast of good ol\' British Columbia is sad and wet. I\'m really sick of the rain... if I want water I\'LL HAVE A SHOWER!!!! lol, just some issues I have there.
*Still dreaming about lying in bed next to Draco*..... but aren\'t we all??
Oh! I read some of your links to some stories off of AFF, TOTALLY in love with the one where Hermoine learns to masterbate, lol, I was blushing the whole time. I was raised Christian, so I think reading stories like this is my rebelious self, even though I only go to church like twice a year.... lol, bad me. But don\'t we all need a little smut once and awhile????? I must know how you come up with these amazing, sexy, tension-like scenes???!!! All I can say is KEEP IT COMING!!!
So my dear, I think this is enough of a review for now before I tell you my life story, lol. Hope to here from you soon!
MUAH!!!!!! hugs ~Jenn
I really enjoy the adjectives you use. Sometimes I don\'t really notice it b/c of all the fast-action your dishing out, but in this chapter i really noticed it when Draco was being analysed by Laurel. Especially the whole \"explosion of of white blond....\" Like HONESTLY, who thinks to use those words??!!! And thats exactly why I love reading your stories, its a fresh look on things.
I really hope that AFF doesn\'t close down just b/c you\'ve been through enough! Honestly, why can\'t a site just stay around for once. Its a good thing that you have the backup (which I *ahum* must start posting at.....) But of course I would follow you back to FF if need be. I need to know what happens to the happy couple! GOD FORBID if you ever stopped writing, I think I would become a zombie without the smart, cool intelect of my DEAR LORETT!!!
Hmm, I\'ve had a whole day of good news!! I moved back home recently and its been a struggle to find a good job *note to self, never work in fast food AGAIN* But I had a wicked interview today, got my tax return, AND you posted another chapter of KEYS. I think this may be my lucky day. How are things down in sunny cal right now??? The west coast of good ol\' British Columbia is sad and wet. I\'m really sick of the rain... if I want water I\'LL HAVE A SHOWER!!!! lol, just some issues I have there.
*Still dreaming about lying in bed next to Draco*..... but aren\'t we all??
Oh! I read some of your links to some stories off of AFF, TOTALLY in love with the one where Hermoine learns to masterbate, lol, I was blushing the whole time. I was raised Christian, so I think reading stories like this is my rebelious self, even though I only go to church like twice a year.... lol, bad me. But don\'t we all need a little smut once and awhile????? I must know how you come up with these amazing, sexy, tension-like scenes???!!! All I can say is KEEP IT COMING!!!
So my dear, I think this is enough of a review for now before I tell you my life story, lol. Hope to here from you soon!
MUAH!!!!!! hugs ~Jenn
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww Poor you Lorreta!! *hugs*
I don\'t believe that AFF might be closing down! And you\'ve had enough of peopl messing about with your fan fics to last you a lifetime I\'m sure! Well I will do everything I can for you hunny! I will donate money to this site first and foremost. Don\'t worry though, I\'ll follow you wherever you may go! I love you and your stories too much to just not read them because they\'ve been moved somewhere different. Let me take this opportunity to offer up my FF account if everything else doesn\'t work out. You could e-mail me your stuff and I could host it on my account but don\'t worry, you have a lot of faithful readers that I\'m sure will think of something to sort out this situation. Let me know if you need any help or a chat or anything. You can e-mail me anytime!!!
Anyway, onto the review! I\'m loving the sexual tension between Laurel and Draco!!! And Draco is just oh so cocky!!! Hee hee! Just how I imagine him to be! Even when he\'s quite seriously injured he\'s still thinking about the laydees! And poor Laurel with her situation with Harry. I agree with her that she needs to talk to him and get it out of the way. (Not that I\'d do that! I\'m too much of a coward when it comes to guys!!!) But I can see that he\'s not going to be best pleased when Laurel tells him her feelings for Draco! And I\'m sure the whole sordid(sp?) affair will come out later on when Harry is mad at Draco or something! Ooohhhh... it\'s all set for tension and action! And I can\'t wait! I can relate to Laurel aswel for going through everything that has happened with the guys in her head. I do that all the time thinking \'I wish I would have done this\' or \'I really wish I hadn\'t done that\'. I think it\'s just a girls way! I\'m sure every girl does it!!!
As for the community, I\'ve posted a couple of messages and I think I\'ve done it right! At least I hope I have! Let me know if I\'ve done something wrong!!! Hee hee!
Update soon and don\'t forget, if you need me you can call on me anytime!
Lots of Love & Huggles
AnnieXxX
I don\'t believe that AFF might be closing down! And you\'ve had enough of peopl messing about with your fan fics to last you a lifetime I\'m sure! Well I will do everything I can for you hunny! I will donate money to this site first and foremost. Don\'t worry though, I\'ll follow you wherever you may go! I love you and your stories too much to just not read them because they\'ve been moved somewhere different. Let me take this opportunity to offer up my FF account if everything else doesn\'t work out. You could e-mail me your stuff and I could host it on my account but don\'t worry, you have a lot of faithful readers that I\'m sure will think of something to sort out this situation. Let me know if you need any help or a chat or anything. You can e-mail me anytime!!!
Anyway, onto the review! I\'m loving the sexual tension between Laurel and Draco!!! And Draco is just oh so cocky!!! Hee hee! Just how I imagine him to be! Even when he\'s quite seriously injured he\'s still thinking about the laydees! And poor Laurel with her situation with Harry. I agree with her that she needs to talk to him and get it out of the way. (Not that I\'d do that! I\'m too much of a coward when it comes to guys!!!) But I can see that he\'s not going to be best pleased when Laurel tells him her feelings for Draco! And I\'m sure the whole sordid(sp?) affair will come out later on when Harry is mad at Draco or something! Ooohhhh... it\'s all set for tension and action! And I can\'t wait! I can relate to Laurel aswel for going through everything that has happened with the guys in her head. I do that all the time thinking \'I wish I would have done this\' or \'I really wish I hadn\'t done that\'. I think it\'s just a girls way! I\'m sure every girl does it!!!
As for the community, I\'ve posted a couple of messages and I think I\'ve done it right! At least I hope I have! Let me know if I\'ve done something wrong!!! Hee hee!
Update soon and don\'t forget, if you need me you can call on me anytime!
Lots of Love & Huggles
AnnieXxX
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ello ello!
My God. They CANNOT shut the site down. I won\'t let them. I will beat them until they reopen it. And until that time of beating comes, I will keep my hopes up that I won\'t have to exercise my brute strength, and that I can keep my superpowers hidden. RAWRRRRRRRR! Me Alison! Me Big Mad!!! Okay, that said and done, how\'s it going with you, my dear? Ah, unfortunately I\'m sick again......went home from school early yesterday and stayed home today. I\'m looking forward to that Starbucks coffee my mom went to go get and a good, light-hearted movie that doesn\'t require any concentration. Unfortunately, that means that my head is pounding, so I may not be able to say as much as I want to.
Hm. God, Draco is so sexy. WHY CAN\'T HE BE NEXT TO MY ROOM?? Poor *ahem* little fella. Hurt and broken and gorgeous and needing some EXTREME comforting....well, honey, I\'m ALWAYS available for you. Let Laurel go have Harry. Who needs her when there\'s an even sexier girl panting after your BEEEEA-UTIFUL body? Sigh...yeah, I suppose you\'re right. The story wouldn\'t be quite the same if I became your sex slave, and Laurel fell for Harry.
Whew. Okay, calming down now...hem hem. Well, one thing that you mentioned that I hadn\'t noticed was the fact that Ron\'s wand DIDN\'T unite with theirs. I probably knew that at one point, but it didn\'t stick, that\'s for sure. Guess that\'s a big flashing arrow that says \"Three Keys: Laurel, Harry, Draco!!\" Heh, I mean, I knew it was the three of them, but this just makes it a wee bit more obvious. (Changing subjects here...but I really want a garter. I do, I do. Like, I have suspenders, but I NEED A GARTER. Oh, and that wand in it.....where will that lead us? I can\'t believe I forgot about that. I remember making a point of remembering it, too.)
Okay, I think I\'m hallucinating apostrophes. I\'m going to take my tissues, my aspirin, my coffee, and my Draco to the couch where I can have as much fun with them as I want. Ick....I\'m feeling so horrible. I wasn\'t THIS bad before. Wow, enough complaining. This chapter was pure fun, my dear, and put many ... er ... naughty thoughts in my brain. Maybe the only thing that\'s keeping it from melting, though the thoughts ARE making me sweat....or is that the fever? GAHHHH! DIE, SICKNESS! WE DON\'T LIKE YOU! ....urgle. Wait, I was supposed to leave AGES ago, so I wouldn\'t plague you with these rather odd thoughts.
Talk to you soon, dearie. (Oh, and I\'m glad to hear that you\'ll review soon!!!!! I was looking forward to you and Mrs-Accio-Firebolt\'s comments....the cha[ter finally has some ACTION! Not like yours, but a little.) Right. So like I said, I\'ll hear from you/talk to you soon. Big bear hug to your brilliant story and brilliant self!!!!
~Me.
My God. They CANNOT shut the site down. I won\'t let them. I will beat them until they reopen it. And until that time of beating comes, I will keep my hopes up that I won\'t have to exercise my brute strength, and that I can keep my superpowers hidden. RAWRRRRRRRR! Me Alison! Me Big Mad!!! Okay, that said and done, how\'s it going with you, my dear? Ah, unfortunately I\'m sick again......went home from school early yesterday and stayed home today. I\'m looking forward to that Starbucks coffee my mom went to go get and a good, light-hearted movie that doesn\'t require any concentration. Unfortunately, that means that my head is pounding, so I may not be able to say as much as I want to.
Hm. God, Draco is so sexy. WHY CAN\'T HE BE NEXT TO MY ROOM?? Poor *ahem* little fella. Hurt and broken and gorgeous and needing some EXTREME comforting....well, honey, I\'m ALWAYS available for you. Let Laurel go have Harry. Who needs her when there\'s an even sexier girl panting after your BEEEEA-UTIFUL body? Sigh...yeah, I suppose you\'re right. The story wouldn\'t be quite the same if I became your sex slave, and Laurel fell for Harry.
Whew. Okay, calming down now...hem hem. Well, one thing that you mentioned that I hadn\'t noticed was the fact that Ron\'s wand DIDN\'T unite with theirs. I probably knew that at one point, but it didn\'t stick, that\'s for sure. Guess that\'s a big flashing arrow that says \"Three Keys: Laurel, Harry, Draco!!\" Heh, I mean, I knew it was the three of them, but this just makes it a wee bit more obvious. (Changing subjects here...but I really want a garter. I do, I do. Like, I have suspenders, but I NEED A GARTER. Oh, and that wand in it.....where will that lead us? I can\'t believe I forgot about that. I remember making a point of remembering it, too.)
Okay, I think I\'m hallucinating apostrophes. I\'m going to take my tissues, my aspirin, my coffee, and my Draco to the couch where I can have as much fun with them as I want. Ick....I\'m feeling so horrible. I wasn\'t THIS bad before. Wow, enough complaining. This chapter was pure fun, my dear, and put many ... er ... naughty thoughts in my brain. Maybe the only thing that\'s keeping it from melting, though the thoughts ARE making me sweat....or is that the fever? GAHHHH! DIE, SICKNESS! WE DON\'T LIKE YOU! ....urgle. Wait, I was supposed to leave AGES ago, so I wouldn\'t plague you with these rather odd thoughts.
Talk to you soon, dearie. (Oh, and I\'m glad to hear that you\'ll review soon!!!!! I was looking forward to you and Mrs-Accio-Firebolt\'s comments....the cha[ter finally has some ACTION! Not like yours, but a little.) Right. So like I said, I\'ll hear from you/talk to you soon. Big bear hug to your brilliant story and brilliant self!!!!
~Me.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! sigh if i had a gorgeous man lying in the room next to mine like that?...hmm no willpower whatsoever...and i am not responsible for my actions...i just love how witty malfoy is...its hilarious...and pretty much wut every 17 yr old boy is thinking...am i right?
sigh cant wait for new chapters!!!!
thanks for the happy birthday!!! it was a good birthday dont you worry....
sigh cant wait for new chapters!!!!
thanks for the happy birthday!!! it was a good birthday dont you worry....
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, the plot thickens. I can\'t help feeling sorry for Harry though, he\'s kinda getting the raw end of the deal, but I know I\'d have a hard time choosing between the two of them, whew!! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting to figure out where the heck this is all going, so keep these chapters coming. Hopefully we won\'t have to worry about the site going down, but if it does, I\'ll follow. I now have a vested interest in what happens to these characters. :)
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could always use death-curse.com
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the cookie, and I put my star on my refridgerater. Draco must really have a good soul, if Laurel is yelling at her mother over a Malfoy. I couldn\'t help but think if there was a past between Maggie and Lucius. There was something in the way Maggie questioned her daughter. I know Maggie know that Lucius is a Death Eater, now. But were they friends in the past ? Can\'t wait to read more of this fantasicly written story, keep up the great work.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh ok im sry im back now...birthday weekend you know how it is...so anyway back to the story:
ahhh the bathroom scene...how wonderful...i love how she had no control...but since i know the rest of the story im just not going to say much else but i love draco more so i cant be a fan of harry...at least not where laurel is concerned...
and i love the spells you make up!!! very creative god knows i couldnt do it!!!
haha well i hope you missed be ill be sure to review asap from now on!!!
ahhh the bathroom scene...how wonderful...i love how she had no control...but since i know the rest of the story im just not going to say much else but i love draco more so i cant be a fan of harry...at least not where laurel is concerned...
and i love the spells you make up!!! very creative god knows i couldnt do it!!!
haha well i hope you missed be ill be sure to review asap from now on!!!