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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a briliiant chapter, if I was Lucius Malfoy I\'d run for the hills.
Poor Harry I get the feeling he\'s going to miss out.
Please update soon, I\'m really enjoying it now you\'ve caught up to where
I remember.
Poor Harry I get the feeling he\'s going to miss out.
Please update soon, I\'m really enjoying it now you\'ve caught up to where
I remember.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya...I think I reviewed this chapter but that was a very telling line at the end. About there being a lot ahead of them. Man...it feels like this story\'s only beginning but we\'re at chapter 26!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!
thanks for your awesome response to my review... you are too nice! i\'ve included my e-mail, as i would love to know when you update your chapters. i\'m also a big fan of draco/hermione... i can\'t wait to read your fic! keep up the great work with this story... the updates are such a nice break from the monotony of studying for exams :)
nnt
thanks for your awesome response to my review... you are too nice! i\'ve included my e-mail, as i would love to know when you update your chapters. i\'m also a big fan of draco/hermione... i can\'t wait to read your fic! keep up the great work with this story... the updates are such a nice break from the monotony of studying for exams :)
nnt
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! That\'s totally weird that you wrote the Harry scene first! Funny! You know, though...I wrote one of the last scenes of my Snape story before I wrote anything else, so I guess it makes sense. It gives you something to work towards.
You misspelled blond twice (I think) in this \"Staring at Draco\" chapter. You know the rule, right?
I love how Laurel\'s such a hormonal maniac. Just like the boys. Hm...I think Draco might actually be the LEAST hormonal of the three. Or at least he\'s got better control.
Also love the detail you went into about Draco\'s lips, their m shape, his smile. You\'re so into him. It\'s fun to read because you\'re so crazy into him.
Yes, I do think Laurel\'s a bit whiney. When she\'s sitting around the house with nothing to do. It\'s a very teenage type of whininess. However the heck you spell that. Whininess.
I thought Laurel\'s imaginary friend was just a little over the top. Maybe you could have her imagine a conversation with Draco about her \"slutiness\" (though what complete chaste and prudish virgin COULD resist your sexy, imperfect -- or not as perfect as Draco -- Harry?). Though I\'m sure she WILL be having that conversation with Draco sometime. Hm...
I will try to go back and take a look at the Draco-getting-wounded-nearly-to-death chapter sometime this next week. Already have an idea. Did he fall down? I think I remember that he didn\'t fall down. Falling down my help. Falling down and stumbling around is dramatic for someone as graceful as Draco.
Ya.
Okay, they stared at each other. Laurel likes Draco better even though Harry\'s hot. Next.
You misspelled blond twice (I think) in this \"Staring at Draco\" chapter. You know the rule, right?
I love how Laurel\'s such a hormonal maniac. Just like the boys. Hm...I think Draco might actually be the LEAST hormonal of the three. Or at least he\'s got better control.
Also love the detail you went into about Draco\'s lips, their m shape, his smile. You\'re so into him. It\'s fun to read because you\'re so crazy into him.
Yes, I do think Laurel\'s a bit whiney. When she\'s sitting around the house with nothing to do. It\'s a very teenage type of whininess. However the heck you spell that. Whininess.
I thought Laurel\'s imaginary friend was just a little over the top. Maybe you could have her imagine a conversation with Draco about her \"slutiness\" (though what complete chaste and prudish virgin COULD resist your sexy, imperfect -- or not as perfect as Draco -- Harry?). Though I\'m sure she WILL be having that conversation with Draco sometime. Hm...
I will try to go back and take a look at the Draco-getting-wounded-nearly-to-death chapter sometime this next week. Already have an idea. Did he fall down? I think I remember that he didn\'t fall down. Falling down my help. Falling down and stumbling around is dramatic for someone as graceful as Draco.
Ya.
Okay, they stared at each other. Laurel likes Draco better even though Harry\'s hot. Next.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t left you a pretty review in so long but as I\'m reading stories mostly from one of those handy sidekick devices from T-Mobile it doesn\'t have the option to leave a review *glares at it* but at least I can read from there.
Love the way the story is going. My mouth fell open into the widest \'o\' when I read the description of the wand that Laurel had captured!!! I couldn\'t believe it. I mean who else in the wide wizarding world has that same bloody wand.... anyways, enough out of my lame arse. Can\'t wait to read more and see how the little love triangle develops. Oh, and I\'m guessing there\'s a very large fist fight/duel involved when Draco finds out about the heated snog session between Laurel and Harry.
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
Love the way the story is going. My mouth fell open into the widest \'o\' when I read the description of the wand that Laurel had captured!!! I couldn\'t believe it. I mean who else in the wide wizarding world has that same bloody wand.... anyways, enough out of my lame arse. Can\'t wait to read more and see how the little love triangle develops. Oh, and I\'m guessing there\'s a very large fist fight/duel involved when Draco finds out about the heated snog session between Laurel and Harry.
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
First of all, let me say I\'m soo flattered! I\'ve just got my first mail ever that harasses me to review! I feel so important now! *blushing* I\'m so sorry, dear that I hadn\'t reviewed sooner. Had a busy week and although I read the chapters, I hadn\'t had the time to sit down and review. That, and the fact that I got confused last time on the Y!messenger, by giving you a little review on the chapter, remember? Everything messed up my mind and it\'s not until now that you so kindly asked for my whereabouts that I decided to put some things apart and tell you I\'m OK, thank you very much. *hugging you*
As for the story.
I\'m so full of questions. Why didn\'t Ron\'s wand work like Draco\'s and Harry\'s? Two reasons I\'ve thought about: 1. they are some kind of rare and very powerful wizards (or wands); 2. they\'re both connected to Laurel and her wand as well in a deeper way than we think.
Whose wand Laurel has in her room? Is it Lucius\'? Should be interesting if Lucius himself found Draco at the club and furthermore, SAVING HARRY.
On a lighter note ... \"Imagine what he could do if he put his mind to it?\" ...... I\'ll leave that for later. No more \"When Harry met Sally\" scenes in the office. You do know what I\'m talking about, right?
The imaginary friend dialoge was hilarious. \"No, kinda slutty if you really want to know\"...LOL With such friends, what does she need enemies for?
And I never got to tell you (I think) I almost cried at the end of \"the infamous bathroom scene\", when Laurel decides not to tell the world about it and Harry has to lower his head to hide his hurt. Poor baby. I do agree with Laurel, but it is so sweet that so early on, he is feeling hurt for being kept as a secret. Whatever you\'ve got in store for Laurel and company, this scene with Harry should never, NEVER *slamming table with both hands* be considered a mistake. The world needed it. I know I did.
I also have to point out that Laurel isn\'t very original.... \"She wanted to get to know him, get inside his head ... inside his heart.\" And who doesn\'t, may I ask??
The pajama scene is also so good. Poor Draco trying to control himself and getting kissed! Thinking of sex before he had even had the time to realize what a miracle it was for him to be alive! Such a teenager.... yummie.
Again, I\'m sorry I neglected you for so long and promise to review faster next time. My reviews are so highly-rated now that I just find it hard to take the time *head inflating, inflating, inflatin, ....... BURSTING!*
Just kidding. You did kind of make my day. It\'s lovely to know that my comments (even if they\'re not all good) are so much appreciated.
Love you BIG TIME.
oh! And about the previous chapter (this is 27, should have been 26). I\'ll repeat: I love Laurel caressing Draco\'s scar. Sent actual shivers through my body.
First of all, let me say I\'m soo flattered! I\'ve just got my first mail ever that harasses me to review! I feel so important now! *blushing* I\'m so sorry, dear that I hadn\'t reviewed sooner. Had a busy week and although I read the chapters, I hadn\'t had the time to sit down and review. That, and the fact that I got confused last time on the Y!messenger, by giving you a little review on the chapter, remember? Everything messed up my mind and it\'s not until now that you so kindly asked for my whereabouts that I decided to put some things apart and tell you I\'m OK, thank you very much. *hugging you*
As for the story.
I\'m so full of questions. Why didn\'t Ron\'s wand work like Draco\'s and Harry\'s? Two reasons I\'ve thought about: 1. they are some kind of rare and very powerful wizards (or wands); 2. they\'re both connected to Laurel and her wand as well in a deeper way than we think.
Whose wand Laurel has in her room? Is it Lucius\'? Should be interesting if Lucius himself found Draco at the club and furthermore, SAVING HARRY.
On a lighter note ... \"Imagine what he could do if he put his mind to it?\" ...... I\'ll leave that for later. No more \"When Harry met Sally\" scenes in the office. You do know what I\'m talking about, right?
The imaginary friend dialoge was hilarious. \"No, kinda slutty if you really want to know\"...LOL With such friends, what does she need enemies for?
And I never got to tell you (I think) I almost cried at the end of \"the infamous bathroom scene\", when Laurel decides not to tell the world about it and Harry has to lower his head to hide his hurt. Poor baby. I do agree with Laurel, but it is so sweet that so early on, he is feeling hurt for being kept as a secret. Whatever you\'ve got in store for Laurel and company, this scene with Harry should never, NEVER *slamming table with both hands* be considered a mistake. The world needed it. I know I did.
I also have to point out that Laurel isn\'t very original.... \"She wanted to get to know him, get inside his head ... inside his heart.\" And who doesn\'t, may I ask??
The pajama scene is also so good. Poor Draco trying to control himself and getting kissed! Thinking of sex before he had even had the time to realize what a miracle it was for him to be alive! Such a teenager.... yummie.
Again, I\'m sorry I neglected you for so long and promise to review faster next time. My reviews are so highly-rated now that I just find it hard to take the time *head inflating, inflating, inflatin, ....... BURSTING!*
Just kidding. You did kind of make my day. It\'s lovely to know that my comments (even if they\'re not all good) are so much appreciated.
Love you BIG TIME.
oh! And about the previous chapter (this is 27, should have been 26). I\'ll repeat: I love Laurel caressing Draco\'s scar. Sent actual shivers through my body.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27 was just so funny! Light, hormonal and hilarious. So I LOVED it, naturally. But for a brief second there I had a \"heart-stopping moment\" when Laurel found the Death Eater\'s wand and put it in her jewlery box. You know how in the horror movies the stupid teenagers position themselves in exactly the right spot to get axed, hacked, strangled, whatever and you just are compelled to yell at the screen \"Don\'t do that, you idiot\" right before you have to cover your eyes? (Bear with me, I\'ve got a point here, eventually) Well, I had a moment where I just KNEW that wand was going to be responsible for something REALLY BAD happening and I yelled \"Laurel, don\'t do that you idiot!\" and had that horror flick anxiety for a moment. I can hear the psycho music in the background even as I write this. I am SURE this will turn out to be a bad judgement call on her part later on. Mark my words...
Laurel\'s reflections on Harry: HYSTERICAL! If I started quoting every line I loved, well I\'d just end up retyping the story here! The conversation with the imaginary friend had me rolling on the floor! \"Kinda slutty if you really want to know.\" OMG! ROTFL! Excuse me while I regain control... and it was followed by the check list. I hit the floor again. I think I may end up with bruises from reading this chapter...
Once again, Lorett, you dragged me to that place my mind goes when I read your descriptions of Draco (I think we labeled that place \"The Gutter\" did we not?) and Laurel\'s checking out Draco via flashback in her mind\'s eye was muy delicioso. There! It was so hot it caused me to start speaking in tongues! And speaking OF tongues...hold it! Can\'t go there. Got a review to write and a story to post. Keep moving, keep moving, nothing to see here, folks... But, but, what about the trail of dark blonde hair running from his navel teasingly below the waist band of his boxers...GROAN! *makes herself comfortable in The Gutter \'cause she\'s gonna be there for a while!* HECK YEAH you\'re gonna drop down and ravage him on the spot, sistah! Did you not read the description of him Lorett just wrote? Oh dear. I\'m yelling at characters in the story again. But this time I\'m saying \"Laurel, DO it, you idiot!\" \"Injury and virginity be damned!\" Excellent motto for this particular moment.
More bruises as a result of Draco thinking \"Hot chick in skimpy PJs...\" ROTFL AGAIN!
Thank goodness you put in Draco\'s musings on the events of the evening to help me settle down and crawl from the Gutter.
Lorett darling, we\'re doing that freaky twin mind-reading, x-ray vision thing again: I read your email about the AFF stuff and wondered how I could get the bottle of TWO BUCK CHUCK merlot (that is sitting on my kitchen counter, I swear, as I write this) through cyberspace to you. And then, you mention it in your A/N up top! (That sound you hear is the \"Twilight Zone\" theme song...) And yea for Trader Joe\'s, my favorite grocery in the whole world, and their fabulous yet cheap wines! (I\'m doing the broke thing too.)
And sweetie, don\'t fret! You have your back-up plan ready, you have your loyal fans who will follow you wherever you go (I\'m the one with the goofy smile on her face, BTW) and EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE FINE! If AFF doesn\'t make it, we will find a home for your wonderful stories, I AM SURE OF IT! You are a STRONG WOMAN and you will come out of this on top. In the meantime, vent all ya want. You don\'t want to keep this in...bad for you, you know. And in a Lupin-like gesture, I now break out the chocolate and hand you a piece. Eat it, it\'ll make you feel better after dealing with all the dementors today.
Wanna know what\'s the other best thing about this chappie? It was here, at this moment that I found out via your shout-out that you are a ROMANCE NOVEL ADDICT!!! (Not that I hadn\'t had my suspicions by this point!) And yet, I am sad because it may be a strike against the separated-at-birth theory b/c they are not so much my cup of tea.
Lorett, you are a sparkling jewel of a girl, I love you tons, and IFOLFA is 100% behind you all the way, baby! HUGS! SMOOCHES! MORE HUGS! Gotta run... posting to do and all (thanks to you, I have the guts to do it). LOVE YA!
Laurel\'s reflections on Harry: HYSTERICAL! If I started quoting every line I loved, well I\'d just end up retyping the story here! The conversation with the imaginary friend had me rolling on the floor! \"Kinda slutty if you really want to know.\" OMG! ROTFL! Excuse me while I regain control... and it was followed by the check list. I hit the floor again. I think I may end up with bruises from reading this chapter...
Once again, Lorett, you dragged me to that place my mind goes when I read your descriptions of Draco (I think we labeled that place \"The Gutter\" did we not?) and Laurel\'s checking out Draco via flashback in her mind\'s eye was muy delicioso. There! It was so hot it caused me to start speaking in tongues! And speaking OF tongues...hold it! Can\'t go there. Got a review to write and a story to post. Keep moving, keep moving, nothing to see here, folks... But, but, what about the trail of dark blonde hair running from his navel teasingly below the waist band of his boxers...GROAN! *makes herself comfortable in The Gutter \'cause she\'s gonna be there for a while!* HECK YEAH you\'re gonna drop down and ravage him on the spot, sistah! Did you not read the description of him Lorett just wrote? Oh dear. I\'m yelling at characters in the story again. But this time I\'m saying \"Laurel, DO it, you idiot!\" \"Injury and virginity be damned!\" Excellent motto for this particular moment.
More bruises as a result of Draco thinking \"Hot chick in skimpy PJs...\" ROTFL AGAIN!
Thank goodness you put in Draco\'s musings on the events of the evening to help me settle down and crawl from the Gutter.
Lorett darling, we\'re doing that freaky twin mind-reading, x-ray vision thing again: I read your email about the AFF stuff and wondered how I could get the bottle of TWO BUCK CHUCK merlot (that is sitting on my kitchen counter, I swear, as I write this) through cyberspace to you. And then, you mention it in your A/N up top! (That sound you hear is the \"Twilight Zone\" theme song...) And yea for Trader Joe\'s, my favorite grocery in the whole world, and their fabulous yet cheap wines! (I\'m doing the broke thing too.)
And sweetie, don\'t fret! You have your back-up plan ready, you have your loyal fans who will follow you wherever you go (I\'m the one with the goofy smile on her face, BTW) and EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE FINE! If AFF doesn\'t make it, we will find a home for your wonderful stories, I AM SURE OF IT! You are a STRONG WOMAN and you will come out of this on top. In the meantime, vent all ya want. You don\'t want to keep this in...bad for you, you know. And in a Lupin-like gesture, I now break out the chocolate and hand you a piece. Eat it, it\'ll make you feel better after dealing with all the dementors today.
Wanna know what\'s the other best thing about this chappie? It was here, at this moment that I found out via your shout-out that you are a ROMANCE NOVEL ADDICT!!! (Not that I hadn\'t had my suspicions by this point!) And yet, I am sad because it may be a strike against the separated-at-birth theory b/c they are not so much my cup of tea.
Lorett, you are a sparkling jewel of a girl, I love you tons, and IFOLFA is 100% behind you all the way, baby! HUGS! SMOOCHES! MORE HUGS! Gotta run... posting to do and all (thanks to you, I have the guts to do it). LOVE YA!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* yay!!!!!!!!!!!!! can\'t wait you gota updates again. tiar\'s too lazy to log in and too bloody tired to think of good things to say. yepyep. *muah* good stuffs. updates sooooooooooooooons.
.tiar.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Oh, Draco. . . my dream guy. . . too bad he doesn\'t exist. . . *dejected sigh* ah, well. .
Anywho, I like this chapter (27) - the intensity of their connection. . (oh, what I wouldn\'t give to be Laurel, hehe)
Hugs! Keep up the GREAT work!
Don\'t get discouraged - we\'ll follow you anywhere. You\'ve got some very loyal fans.
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Anywho, I like this chapter (27) - the intensity of their connection. . (oh, what I wouldn\'t give to be Laurel, hehe)
Hugs! Keep up the GREAT work!
Don\'t get discouraged - we\'ll follow you anywhere. You\'ve got some very loyal fans.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me smile loads! Laurel is so damn horny! Hah! I think she scared herself slightly, cos she has such a mahoosive weakness for the gorgeous Draco (and who wouldn\'t I hear you ask).
And I have indignant for you and the whole fanfiction and adultfanfiction not really working out thing. Damn ff.net really don\'t deserve such an amazing story as this if they\'re gonna keep chucking you out! I didn\'t know that AFF.NET might be closing until you said something and it\'s a real shame :( HUGS AND KISSES
At least you know that all of us adore your story and will follow it around the whole internet (tee hee hee), from domain to domain etc etc etc
xx princessgreta xx
And I have indignant for you and the whole fanfiction and adultfanfiction not really working out thing. Damn ff.net really don\'t deserve such an amazing story as this if they\'re gonna keep chucking you out! I didn\'t know that AFF.NET might be closing until you said something and it\'s a real shame :( HUGS AND KISSES
At least you know that all of us adore your story and will follow it around the whole internet (tee hee hee), from domain to domain etc etc etc
xx princessgreta xx