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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The thought that is foremost in my mind: even in these chapters like 28 where there is less action and more exposition, you manage to maintain the humor and the darkness and the tension (sexual and otherwise) and you don\'t let these chapters get boring.
I am liking Laurel more and more. She\'s very believable as a teenager. I liked the jelousy over the pillow (me, too, sistah, me too!) and her list of things to do. So Harry is still having an effect on her, hmmm? Go Harry! And he turned on the charm, didn\'t he? I love it. Looking too good, leaning on the doorframe, flexing his muscles *faints* and his husky voice *faints again*. OH MY! That\'s all I can say... and the \"Malfoy look out , you\'ve got competition\" line made me growl...grrr Harry, about time you be assertive when it comes to girls! I like alpha-Harry. But it bums me out that he really had no future with Laurel. I hope you provide a nice girl for alpha-Harry. Pretty please?
Side note: I was grateful that Draco was curled up so she couldn\'t see the trail of blond hair again. I don\'t think my heart could have withstood another spate of rapid thumping like the last time you mentioned that...yummy...trail...mmmm.....
The Lucius\' wand discussion in the hall was excellent. I love cold and dangerous Harry, too! And poor Laurel not being able to wrap her head around the concept that a parent would be willing to murder his or her child. Little does she know, yet, how truly MESSED UP the Malfoy family is, and how many issues dear Draco must have as a result.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the delicious Draco exposition; I\'d missed hearing Draco\'s musings! The last section and the author note immediately following were perfect! THIS is the Draco I LOVE! The Draco that YOU write. He is just so, so, so swoon-worthy! *swoons* I had to laugh at \"so he decided to trust Potter. Draco snorted at the thought and hoped he COULD trust Potter with Laurel\" Can you say ironic? And I loved, absolutely loved, Draco\'s parting line! Brilliant!
And so I find myself wanting MORE! MORE I SAY! I want to hear Harry & Laurel\'s \"the talk\" talk, and how Draco schmoozes Maggie into letting him go to Gringotts and, for heaven\'s sake, Lorett, I want some groping and making out and snogging between Draco & Laurel! (Since I can\'t have my \"It Had to Be You\" fix. Which I am completely okay with, mind you, given your reasons) And...*looks around and leans in toward you with a whisper* I really wouldn\'t mind seeing that trail of dark blond hair again, despite what I said above.
My compliments to you, lovie, on another fine serving of KEYS. Lip-smacking good as usual! Hugs and smooches and the like to you! Have a wonderful week!
I am liking Laurel more and more. She\'s very believable as a teenager. I liked the jelousy over the pillow (me, too, sistah, me too!) and her list of things to do. So Harry is still having an effect on her, hmmm? Go Harry! And he turned on the charm, didn\'t he? I love it. Looking too good, leaning on the doorframe, flexing his muscles *faints* and his husky voice *faints again*. OH MY! That\'s all I can say... and the \"Malfoy look out , you\'ve got competition\" line made me growl...grrr Harry, about time you be assertive when it comes to girls! I like alpha-Harry. But it bums me out that he really had no future with Laurel. I hope you provide a nice girl for alpha-Harry. Pretty please?
Side note: I was grateful that Draco was curled up so she couldn\'t see the trail of blond hair again. I don\'t think my heart could have withstood another spate of rapid thumping like the last time you mentioned that...yummy...trail...mmmm.....
The Lucius\' wand discussion in the hall was excellent. I love cold and dangerous Harry, too! And poor Laurel not being able to wrap her head around the concept that a parent would be willing to murder his or her child. Little does she know, yet, how truly MESSED UP the Malfoy family is, and how many issues dear Draco must have as a result.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the delicious Draco exposition; I\'d missed hearing Draco\'s musings! The last section and the author note immediately following were perfect! THIS is the Draco I LOVE! The Draco that YOU write. He is just so, so, so swoon-worthy! *swoons* I had to laugh at \"so he decided to trust Potter. Draco snorted at the thought and hoped he COULD trust Potter with Laurel\" Can you say ironic? And I loved, absolutely loved, Draco\'s parting line! Brilliant!
And so I find myself wanting MORE! MORE I SAY! I want to hear Harry & Laurel\'s \"the talk\" talk, and how Draco schmoozes Maggie into letting him go to Gringotts and, for heaven\'s sake, Lorett, I want some groping and making out and snogging between Draco & Laurel! (Since I can\'t have my \"It Had to Be You\" fix. Which I am completely okay with, mind you, given your reasons) And...*looks around and leans in toward you with a whisper* I really wouldn\'t mind seeing that trail of dark blond hair again, despite what I said above.
My compliments to you, lovie, on another fine serving of KEYS. Lip-smacking good as usual! Hugs and smooches and the like to you! Have a wonderful week!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey darling,
another great chapter as per usual. Eagerly awaiting the new one. I read your wee note and noticed you have read God of The Lost. You found the Draco disturbing eh? Well yes he is. That fic is truly my favourite Fan-fiction fic. I have read it numerous times and am pained at how long it takes her to update, but it is worth waiting for. The war at Hogwarts is just so intriguing and I am dieing to see how Draco and Hermione\'s relationship will progress. You can already begin to see the signs from him. The overprotectiveness and all that is starting to show through. Okay I realize this review is meant to be about your fic so I shall stop! Haven\'t talked to you in a while. I apologize. Kevin left this morning and I am left to my lonesome for a wee while. I do not know how I will occupy myself, though your yahoo group and my fic should take up some of that. I am alright besides all that. ANYWAY, totally got off topic here didn\'t I. Ramble ramble ramble! I am taking a page out of your book.
Okay again, great chapter and well because I know what is coming in the next few chapters I am eagerly awaiting your next update my dear! Lots of love,
Ally
another great chapter as per usual. Eagerly awaiting the new one. I read your wee note and noticed you have read God of The Lost. You found the Draco disturbing eh? Well yes he is. That fic is truly my favourite Fan-fiction fic. I have read it numerous times and am pained at how long it takes her to update, but it is worth waiting for. The war at Hogwarts is just so intriguing and I am dieing to see how Draco and Hermione\'s relationship will progress. You can already begin to see the signs from him. The overprotectiveness and all that is starting to show through. Okay I realize this review is meant to be about your fic so I shall stop! Haven\'t talked to you in a while. I apologize. Kevin left this morning and I am left to my lonesome for a wee while. I do not know how I will occupy myself, though your yahoo group and my fic should take up some of that. I am alright besides all that. ANYWAY, totally got off topic here didn\'t I. Ramble ramble ramble! I am taking a page out of your book.
Okay again, great chapter and well because I know what is coming in the next few chapters I am eagerly awaiting your next update my dear! Lots of love,
Ally
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say that you still aren\'t making it any easier to choose. I mean, Draco is so incredibly awesome, especially since we can see what he\'s really thinking, but then you turn around and continue to make Harry so, well, yummy! Most Draco stories make Harry seem like a loser, for some reason, but your Harry is so good. But then, so is your Draco. AHHHH! :) I hope something great comes out of this for Harry. Anyway, story is going great, I\'m liking Draco\'s plan of attack. I can\'t wait till he hears about Laurel and Harry. Is there gonna be a huge blow up? (Hope so:-) ) Well, I will be sitting on the edge of my seat till the next chapter. Bye!
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this Draco !!!!!!!! Hell I really love Harry in this too, He\'s too hot, they both are. I can\'t wait to see what they do with Lucius\'s wand, please keep me posted when you update.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.
I hurried up this time, huh? I\'ll just say my students really appreciated having a class-free hour. We just had the exam last saturday, and today they started asking me not to teach today. So, I was like \"MHH, I could read and review Keys.... OK, NO CLASS TODAY\". And such a very good idea it was, too.
This chapter was very very very very very nice. Interesting, well-written (as always), exciting, informative, long enough, had Draco, had Harry... Good!
I just love the way you describe Draco. I just regret that I\'ll never find him around here. The part when he touches his scar....god! I could just picture him doing so..... and found my finger trailing something in mid-air. Nothing sexier than a nice scar. NICE SCAR, I said, huh?
And Harry! \"You\'re looking at my arms, and I\'m flexing them for you\"... So cute. It must be kind of weird to him that he usually makes quite an impression without any effort and now, he just has to get to work. Even though he doesn\'t know Draco is already winning! Will you confront them openly? From one of your A/N, we know Draco will find out about the BATHROOM SCENE... I\'m guessing he will not be happy at all. But will Harry take the challenge? I think he will. Damn, damn, damn Laurel.
Have I ever told you that I have a Draco-nephew? He\'s so damn cute. Can\'t help but think of Draco when I look at him.. though it\'s definitely illegal. Howcome he is family???
About Lucius, I\'m sorry. I absolutely love how you\'re handling him but I can\'t bring myself to think that he would do such a terrible thing to his own son. As for the consequences, Draco has already told us that there will be some for him.... and Lucius as well. BTW, where is Narcissa? What about Draco\'s bargain? Who was he suppossed to kill? Don\'t think I have forgotten, lady!
Anyways, great chapter. Great story! Your imagination never ceases to surprise me. Has creado una bellisima historia, sexy, interesante, entretenida... una verdadera joya.
Besos,
I hurried up this time, huh? I\'ll just say my students really appreciated having a class-free hour. We just had the exam last saturday, and today they started asking me not to teach today. So, I was like \"MHH, I could read and review Keys.... OK, NO CLASS TODAY\". And such a very good idea it was, too.
This chapter was very very very very very nice. Interesting, well-written (as always), exciting, informative, long enough, had Draco, had Harry... Good!
I just love the way you describe Draco. I just regret that I\'ll never find him around here. The part when he touches his scar....god! I could just picture him doing so..... and found my finger trailing something in mid-air. Nothing sexier than a nice scar. NICE SCAR, I said, huh?
And Harry! \"You\'re looking at my arms, and I\'m flexing them for you\"... So cute. It must be kind of weird to him that he usually makes quite an impression without any effort and now, he just has to get to work. Even though he doesn\'t know Draco is already winning! Will you confront them openly? From one of your A/N, we know Draco will find out about the BATHROOM SCENE... I\'m guessing he will not be happy at all. But will Harry take the challenge? I think he will. Damn, damn, damn Laurel.
Have I ever told you that I have a Draco-nephew? He\'s so damn cute. Can\'t help but think of Draco when I look at him.. though it\'s definitely illegal. Howcome he is family???
About Lucius, I\'m sorry. I absolutely love how you\'re handling him but I can\'t bring myself to think that he would do such a terrible thing to his own son. As for the consequences, Draco has already told us that there will be some for him.... and Lucius as well. BTW, where is Narcissa? What about Draco\'s bargain? Who was he suppossed to kill? Don\'t think I have forgotten, lady!
Anyways, great chapter. Great story! Your imagination never ceases to surprise me. Has creado una bellisima historia, sexy, interesante, entretenida... una verdadera joya.
Besos,
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Salut!
(Bonjour is good too, though a little more formal. Salut would be our version of Hi)
Still reading your story, and still loving it! I think you have a perfect view of Draco, with the whole \'I might be on the good side but I\'m still a bad boy\' thing. I agree that those are the best! (I got a thing for bad boys, but like you, I hate psychos)
I also like the fact that Harry is not a perfect little boy, but that he has hormones like everyone and that he is willing to do what he can to get Laurel. I think perfect Harry stories end up boring most of the time (unless it\'s humour fics)
As for the 13 inches, I do not think (and I surely hope) that such membres exist. If they do, they will either be classified as a (I don\'t know how to say this in english) misformation, (like someone who is born with three breast or eleven fingers) or the person will make great money as a pervert porn actor (I think 13 inches is not kinky anymore, it\'s perverted, like those women who like horses - shudder-)
I like the fact that Laurel\'s mother is somewhat aware about what happens between her daughter and Harry (and Draco) I think that makes her a great advice-giver (I don\'t know (again!!!) the correct word in english) and shows that she and laurel are close.
Hope to read you soon!
Ciao!
(Bonjour is good too, though a little more formal. Salut would be our version of Hi)
Still reading your story, and still loving it! I think you have a perfect view of Draco, with the whole \'I might be on the good side but I\'m still a bad boy\' thing. I agree that those are the best! (I got a thing for bad boys, but like you, I hate psychos)
I also like the fact that Harry is not a perfect little boy, but that he has hormones like everyone and that he is willing to do what he can to get Laurel. I think perfect Harry stories end up boring most of the time (unless it\'s humour fics)
As for the 13 inches, I do not think (and I surely hope) that such membres exist. If they do, they will either be classified as a (I don\'t know how to say this in english) misformation, (like someone who is born with three breast or eleven fingers) or the person will make great money as a pervert porn actor (I think 13 inches is not kinky anymore, it\'s perverted, like those women who like horses - shudder-)
I like the fact that Laurel\'s mother is somewhat aware about what happens between her daughter and Harry (and Draco) I think that makes her a great advice-giver (I don\'t know (again!!!) the correct word in english) and shows that she and laurel are close.
Hope to read you soon!
Ciao!
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THUMP! *faints from Draco\'s hottness* Grr, why can\'t he BE REAL?! I want your Draco, though, not the Phycho Draco, haha
Golly, I can\'t get over how ABSO-BLOODY-LUTELY fantastic this story is!
It\'s great to hear that AFF is still running, for the time being, anyway.. you won\'t have to uproot and move again. :-)
Keep up the GREAT work, I can\'t wait for more!
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Golly, I can\'t get over how ABSO-BLOODY-LUTELY fantastic this story is!
It\'s great to hear that AFF is still running, for the time being, anyway.. you won\'t have to uproot and move again. :-)
Keep up the GREAT work, I can\'t wait for more!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Lorett!
I\'m so glad that AFF.net got enough money to pay their fees!!! I was worried for you for a moment. I just had a thought... couldn\'t you post your chapters as a message on the yahoo site?? Anyway, theres no need to think about that right now. You\'re welcome for the offer hunny! I just thought if they kicked you off FF.net again with your new pen-name and this site closed down then that was another option. The offer is still there if you ever need it, all you need to do is ask! I haven\'t read any of the stories that you suggested. I will do though thanks for the hint. Oh, by the way, I\'ve started reading Saving Draco Malfoy and I love it so far! It\'s so intense and angsty... I have a few link suggestions to add to the group so I think I\'ll go over to the yahoo site in a moment and put those links up. (If I can figure out how to do it! I might need to e-mail either you or Ally to figure it out.)
Anyway, onto the review (I now write that everytime I review your story! If you get bored of the phrase please let me know and I\'ll cease from using it! Hee hee!!). I definitely love your Draco! He is soooooo the bad boy type that I go for in actual real life it\'s scary. (except the ones I go for in real life haven\'t got magical powers! And don\'t have hearts of Gold!!!) I thought the comment on how Draco trusted Harry with Laurel was well placed. I can see him getting really angry about the whole Harry/Laurel affair. But then again I suppose she isn\'t Draco\'s girlfriend and he has no right to tell her what to do... I can\'t wait to see what you do with that! I had a feeling that the wand would belong to Lucius and I think Draco may have an inckling too. I don\'t think he\'d be too shocked at first when he hears his Father tried to kill him, because he\'s prepared himself for it for a while right?! But I bet when he thinks about it he\'ll be devistated. Poor him! I just wanna give him a big squish and kiss it all better!!! (wink, wink! Hee hee!) But I suppose he has Laurel to do that for him... *sighs* Oh well a girl can dream! And Laurel has got herself into such a predicament with the boys!! How will she get herself out of that one?? *ponders*
Right, I\'m off to post my recomendations on the yahoo site. I\'ll probably speak to you on there sometime. Update soon!
Lots of Love,
AnnieXxX
P.S - I\'m loving being the Brit Star! I actually could be one in the near future because I\'m auditioning on a talent contest that we have on TV here called \'X-Factor\'. It\'s like American Idol but it allows anyone to enter over the age of 16 and groups. I hope I get on!!!
I\'m so glad that AFF.net got enough money to pay their fees!!! I was worried for you for a moment. I just had a thought... couldn\'t you post your chapters as a message on the yahoo site?? Anyway, theres no need to think about that right now. You\'re welcome for the offer hunny! I just thought if they kicked you off FF.net again with your new pen-name and this site closed down then that was another option. The offer is still there if you ever need it, all you need to do is ask! I haven\'t read any of the stories that you suggested. I will do though thanks for the hint. Oh, by the way, I\'ve started reading Saving Draco Malfoy and I love it so far! It\'s so intense and angsty... I have a few link suggestions to add to the group so I think I\'ll go over to the yahoo site in a moment and put those links up. (If I can figure out how to do it! I might need to e-mail either you or Ally to figure it out.)
Anyway, onto the review (I now write that everytime I review your story! If you get bored of the phrase please let me know and I\'ll cease from using it! Hee hee!!). I definitely love your Draco! He is soooooo the bad boy type that I go for in actual real life it\'s scary. (except the ones I go for in real life haven\'t got magical powers! And don\'t have hearts of Gold!!!) I thought the comment on how Draco trusted Harry with Laurel was well placed. I can see him getting really angry about the whole Harry/Laurel affair. But then again I suppose she isn\'t Draco\'s girlfriend and he has no right to tell her what to do... I can\'t wait to see what you do with that! I had a feeling that the wand would belong to Lucius and I think Draco may have an inckling too. I don\'t think he\'d be too shocked at first when he hears his Father tried to kill him, because he\'s prepared himself for it for a while right?! But I bet when he thinks about it he\'ll be devistated. Poor him! I just wanna give him a big squish and kiss it all better!!! (wink, wink! Hee hee!) But I suppose he has Laurel to do that for him... *sighs* Oh well a girl can dream! And Laurel has got herself into such a predicament with the boys!! How will she get herself out of that one?? *ponders*
Right, I\'m off to post my recomendations on the yahoo site. I\'ll probably speak to you on there sometime. Update soon!
Lots of Love,
AnnieXxX
P.S - I\'m loving being the Brit Star! I actually could be one in the near future because I\'m auditioning on a talent contest that we have on TV here called \'X-Factor\'. It\'s like American Idol but it allows anyone to enter over the age of 16 and groups. I hope I get on!!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats pretty awsome. you know what bothers me? i can NEVER write a long review. they\'re always short *mumbles* ok well anywho, great chapter, KEEP WRITING, and if there are any chapters in my story that you could help me make better, that would be INCREADIBALLY wonderful. tootles!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i would so be jealous of that damn pillow as well!!!! sry that was like my favorite part hahaha
sigh i love this draco, hes so charming but at the same time so sarcastic and will do anything to get what he wants...sigh...how can you resist someone who would do anything adn everything to protect you? not to mention anything and everything to sleep with you...sigh...i think i need a moment to make up my dream guy...haha
8 chapters to go!!!! ahhh cant wait!!!!
sigh i love this draco, hes so charming but at the same time so sarcastic and will do anything to get what he wants...sigh...how can you resist someone who would do anything adn everything to protect you? not to mention anything and everything to sleep with you...sigh...i think i need a moment to make up my dream guy...haha
8 chapters to go!!!! ahhh cant wait!!!!