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for The Three Keys

by lorettcopeland

person dragon34
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the obsessed Ron, it suits him. Just like being a control freak suits Hermione. Can\'t wait to read more
person ali aka ginny-rules-the-world
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *hugs*! im so excited! one month until my birthday! u know whwat gives me nightmares? the koolaid man! i mean, he just crashes right through your wall like its cool! well using the front door is cool too! i will kick u in the tights if u don\'t fix that wall before my dad gets home Mr. Koolaid. \"oh yeah?\" oh no! naughty naughty koolaid! HAHAHAHAHA! sry. i love Dane Cook. he\'s so funny. ok LOL! (lots of luv)

ME!

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person dragon34
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok who are the ones working for Lucius, I really hope Draco doesn\'t get punish to severely for helping the one he is suppose to kill. I really love your story. I\'ll be sad when it ends.
person Annie
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello there Lorett!!!

How are you hunny? Good I hope! I\'m feeling very chirpy today as the sun is out and it\'s shining all over the place. It makes me feel all cheerful and content like nothing can go wrong. Yet here I am, in the University library distracting myself from the tons of work that I have to do! *sobs* I should be outside enjoying the sunshine! *cries louder* It\'s not fair!! Since I\'ve got that bit of a rant out of the way I can talk to you normally now! Hee hee!

Me having a cell phone hasn\'t really got me to go to more parties. Sometimes people just don\'t invite me but they\'re the people who don\'t mean that much to me really! I don\'t miss out on much. I always have someone there making sure I don\'t miss out on any gossip!! Hee hee! Awwww it\'s a shame you don\'t get ITV where you are! I would have loved it if you could have watched the programme if I get on it! But I absolutely promise you I\'ll keep you updated on what\'s happening as it happens. I\'ve always got your e-mail and the yahoo group to let you know!

Right, onto the review...

I love the way you write Lorett! It\'s so descriptive! I can actually feel the tension between the characters. I loved the arguement between Harry and Laurel. He can be a bit self-centred sometimes but then again everyone is shelfish at one time or another. she put him in his place though didn\'t she?! It was good of her not to carry on arguing because I think that could have turned in to a full blown barny (a UK slang word for arguement!), and everyone would have heard, and oh... the consequences could have been bad for Laurel and Harry when I come to think of it! Draco is going to tear him appart when he hears about their little... erm... affair!! The action between Ginny and Draco was great too! I love the way you write Ginny. It\'s just the way I see her in my mind when she\'s older (think I\'ve already told you that!). The way I see it she has some very overpowering brothers so she has to create a personality for herself to stand out. I can believe the whole love at first sight thing. I suppose when you find your soul mate then you just know instantly. But having not found mine yet I couldn\'t really say for sure! I like the idea of it though. I\'m a hopeless romantic and would like to think it could happen. So just keep going the way you are! I love it!

Oh by the way... I\'ll be meeting Tom Felton in 3 days!!! ARRRGGGHHH!!! Didn\'t realise it was so soon! Hee hee! EXCITEMENT!!!! I will definitely get some pics and post them on the yahoo site so you can see what his hair is like. I think he has it short and spikey at the moment but I\'ll let you know for sure on Sunday. I promise I\'ll make an apperance at the yahoo community soon. It\'s a bit overwhelming for me at the moment with all the messages being put up there. I can\'t make it through them all. But I have read \'The Lions of December\' and I\'m all ready to have a good chat about it with you all!

Hope life is treating you well!
Love and hugs,
AnnieXxX

P.S - Wow! That was a long review!!!
person Alison/Blood Rust/Your Adoring Fan
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whatda we want?? A girl worth fighting for!!! Whatda we want? A girl worth fighting for!! Ahhhhh....good old Mulan. One of the TOP Disney movies, following Lion King and the Little Mermaid, of course. Whee!! I love Disney - at least the old, nice animated ones. No more of those these days though...sigh.

Well, my dear, I think after a long conference, the fans of Draco and Lorett everywhere have finally come to a concensus (or however you spell it): Draco\'s got it bad. REAL bad. But, of course, there\'s the famous question that is impossible to answer at this present time: Is it love? Draco\'s pondering, hormonal teenage mind really put words to issues that every young girl asks herself in the privacy of the dark and the shadows of dreams. I, too, have wondered whether such things exist, whether it\'s possible for me to fall in love. Obviously, it\'s a wee bit early yet for me to truly fall in love (I mean, the mentality of the guys at this age is simply appalling). But for Draco.... Mentality does not seem an issue. What DOES seem an issue is his own self-doubt. The doubt about the nature of his affection turns the truth transparent, invisible and hidden under so many assumptions and anxious thoughts. Personally, I\'ve always thought that labeling the feelings inside us is dangerous; once we put words to it, the sacred halo of its undignified existance is erased. Emotions always seem more private and beautiful to me when I keep them a secret from myself, when I refuse to put a name to what I\'m feeling. It feels wrong when I attach a noun to a feeling, for it\'s far more complex than the simple word.

Tonight, for example. I had to go play my violin for a group of people (we have \"group practices\" every month or so), and had to perform a solo. Well, to be honest, I\'m a complete ham; I LOVE the spotlight and the feeling of everybody\'s eyes on me and only me. Of course, tonight had to be the night which I fucked up EXTREMELY badly. Ick. Hurts to remember. Anywho, my teacher kept telling me that it was because I was \"nervous\" - far too general a word - and I WASN\'T. She needed a better word that\'s all, and it was offensive to me to name it.

Ah, more comments were coming, but I now need to go to sleep. GAH!! I\'ll talk to you soon, darling - I\'ll be back in the discussions tomorrow or Thurs night!!

~Me.
person mrs_accio_firebolt
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

This was a nice start for my day. Good chapter, setting things up for what is to come next, huh? So, Draco and Ginny? I have to disagree. I like your Ginny and I think she would be just fine for Draco. However, I don\'t think it would work between real Draco and real Ginny. Somehow, I just don\'t see it happening.

The kiss? Poor Draco! having to restrain himself. BUT, he just let her do her thing... He didn\'t want it to happen or did he? Men! Of course he\'s a healthy 17 years old male and would be an absolute idiot to deny himself of such an easy prey... but.... I actually think he stopped it because HE hadn\'t started it. Anyways... He\'ll always like her? You\'re soo mean. But soo firm as well. It\'s funny to think of all the love figures you\'re preparing for the characters.... knowing that in the end, you\'ll make decisions (you\'ve probably already make them) as to who gets to keep who. Right now, I\'m in love with all of them, I wonder if I could make those decisions.... Don\'t think so! Give me all of them!!!!!!!

And Draco being in love so soon? I definitely buy it. I do beleive in love at first sight. And.... they do have some sort of connection, right? I mean, in the non-physical world?

See you later, darling, I\'ve gotta start working..... damn........

Besos,
yo merita
person Huked On Fonix
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you describe the feelings Draco and Laurel have for each other, and their reactions to one another. And I LOVE the idea of Draco in love.

We\'re getting CLOSER to a brand, spankin\', NEW chapter! And I can\'t wait! I\'m so excited, haha.. I love this chapter as well (30) - but now that I think of it,
I love pretty much EVERY chapter you write!!

Lol, keep up the great work!!!

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person Erin
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! 5 more chapters!!...but yes i do believe in love at first sight...and it just makes sense he d fall for her so quickly since technically they have met before..
hmm...interesting feelings between draco and ginny....lots of tension....cant wait to see where that may lead...but hopefully no where...and im kinda curious to see where hermione comes in...or if she does at all....welll keep updating...im waiting patiently!!!
person RahNee
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now, I must say, Ginny and Draco in chapter 30...yum yum...they must have been amazing when they were together, cause even now the sparks are flying! I definitely like your Draco/Ginny dynamic. It doesn\'t even bother me that I don\'t know what happened between them... you give plenty of info to feed my imagination! Ginny and Draco share some similarities, don\'t they? And she can dish the cockiness and arrogance right back at him. I love that she\'s figured out how hard he has fallen for Laurel. \"Your secret\'s safe with me\" was priceless. Oooh, I LIKE your Ginny, a lot!

The Laurel/Harry talk, er...brawl, was great. My favorite line:
person ali aka ginny-rules-the-world
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi again! my birthday is in a month a week and a day. but whose counting? i am! lol good chapter. oh and i\'m writing my next chapter now.... so it should be done soon! *hugs* i have a knew name for myself... its i-need-a-hug or giv-me-a-hug just because i love hugs! yay! lol KEEP WRITING!