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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola, hola.
I liked this chapter very much. It was so tense. Not too much happened, but the whole explanation of Draco\'s thoughts as he surveyed the room was exquisite.
I do love the interaction between Draco and Harry... so different and yet, so alike.... jaja when they both roll their eyes at the shocked crowd when Draco mentions VOLDEMORT... (MUFASA!) jiji. Fun kids. Could be great friends, right?
And a very much deserved praise for Dumbledore\'s scene, when the last of the darkness is disappearing at the tip of his wand... very powerful, and exciting.
I kind of remember that you already told us Draco is going to Gringott\'s right? What I want to know is how?
Well, see you later, alligator.
Besos, comadrita y p
I liked this chapter very much. It was so tense. Not too much happened, but the whole explanation of Draco\'s thoughts as he surveyed the room was exquisite.
I do love the interaction between Draco and Harry... so different and yet, so alike.... jaja when they both roll their eyes at the shocked crowd when Draco mentions VOLDEMORT... (MUFASA!) jiji. Fun kids. Could be great friends, right?
And a very much deserved praise for Dumbledore\'s scene, when the last of the darkness is disappearing at the tip of his wand... very powerful, and exciting.
I kind of remember that you already told us Draco is going to Gringott\'s right? What I want to know is how?
Well, see you later, alligator.
Besos, comadrita y p
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Lorett honey!!!
How are you? Good I hope! I\'m ok. I didn\'t go too well with the whole auditioning thing. I went twice and they knocked me back both times! But I\'m not too bothered about it! I still love to sing and nothing is going to take that away from me! They\'re missing out not having me in their show! (It\'s their loss blah, blah, blah!) I\'m just sooooooo tired from the whole nerves excitement mix now. I mean I still have tons of work to do for University which is great! *sighs*
I\'m still really hyper about seeing the HP stars! I\'m chuffed (another british slang word. Means to be happy about something or with yourself) that they were there! It was just the best weekend! I\'m glad you like the pictures I put on the community. I haven\'t received the rest of the pictures from that weekend yet but as soon as I get my hands on them I\'ll send them straight over to you! I promise! I\'ll see if I can dig up some more Tom and Christian photo\'s especially for you!
Anyway, review... I love thhis chapter! Ron is sooooo sweet about Hermione and you just know that it\'s going to happen between them in the books! They\'re just destined to be together! I wonder if there will be arguements between Harry and Ron over our Hermy??!! I can\'t wait to see what you do with that! Awwww Ron wants her so much! It\'d break his heart if Hermione picked Harry instead of him. He\'d fall out with Harry big time!!! But then again if he doesn\'t tell Harry how he feels he wouldn\'t have any reason to be mad at him because Harry wouldn\'t have stepped on a \'no go zone\'. Ooohhhh... All the romances are intertwining and I love it! It makes for very interesting reading! Hee hee!
Anyway, must dash. I\'ll try and put a brittish slang word into every review I do from now on so that you might be able to use them in future chappies! Sorry it took me a while to review! I got here in the end though!!! Hee hee!
Hope you\'re ok and life is treating you well!!
hugs and kisses and stuff,
AnnieXxX
How are you? Good I hope! I\'m ok. I didn\'t go too well with the whole auditioning thing. I went twice and they knocked me back both times! But I\'m not too bothered about it! I still love to sing and nothing is going to take that away from me! They\'re missing out not having me in their show! (It\'s their loss blah, blah, blah!) I\'m just sooooooo tired from the whole nerves excitement mix now. I mean I still have tons of work to do for University which is great! *sighs*
I\'m still really hyper about seeing the HP stars! I\'m chuffed (another british slang word. Means to be happy about something or with yourself) that they were there! It was just the best weekend! I\'m glad you like the pictures I put on the community. I haven\'t received the rest of the pictures from that weekend yet but as soon as I get my hands on them I\'ll send them straight over to you! I promise! I\'ll see if I can dig up some more Tom and Christian photo\'s especially for you!
Anyway, review... I love thhis chapter! Ron is sooooo sweet about Hermione and you just know that it\'s going to happen between them in the books! They\'re just destined to be together! I wonder if there will be arguements between Harry and Ron over our Hermy??!! I can\'t wait to see what you do with that! Awwww Ron wants her so much! It\'d break his heart if Hermione picked Harry instead of him. He\'d fall out with Harry big time!!! But then again if he doesn\'t tell Harry how he feels he wouldn\'t have any reason to be mad at him because Harry wouldn\'t have stepped on a \'no go zone\'. Ooohhhh... All the romances are intertwining and I love it! It makes for very interesting reading! Hee hee!
Anyway, must dash. I\'ll try and put a brittish slang word into every review I do from now on so that you might be able to use them in future chappies! Sorry it took me a while to review! I got here in the end though!!! Hee hee!
Hope you\'re ok and life is treating you well!!
hugs and kisses and stuff,
AnnieXxX
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grin* I\'m so excited about the upcoming chapters! Haha, I can\'t wait to see what happens. I so love your story, it always just sucks me in, I don\'t want to stop reading it.
I like this chapter (31). It\'s all about Ron, and Ron is is one of my favorite characters - BUT, he\'s got nothin\' on Draco, lol!
Anywho, I love it, I love it! You\'re so awesome!
**Hugs!**
:-D
I like this chapter (31). It\'s all about Ron, and Ron is is one of my favorite characters - BUT, he\'s got nothin\' on Draco, lol!
Anywho, I love it, I love it! You\'re so awesome!
**Hugs!**
:-D
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Lorett, dear...I am sooooo glad that you put in this short chapter so we could get a deeper glance at Ron. (I know, I know...hard to believe I am not greedily demanding a 2-fur anymore...) Poor Ron: never has a moments peace to himself! And when he does...he dreams of a Hermione he can\'t even be sure really exists because he is so insecure about himself. That made me so sad! And his jealousy! He almost can\'t bring himself to admit that he is jealous of Harry, and he fears so much that Hermione only has feelings for Harry...
OH IT IS SO ANGSTY! I love this line: it captures all the anguish: \"He would rather his love went unrequited, than have her out of his life.\" Oh GAWWWWL! Poor baby, always been overshadowed by brothers, then Harry, so insecure, self esteem is shot...I just want to take him in my arms and comfort him. Well, you did it. That\'s the 3rd of your boys I\'ve hungered to do the comforting thing to.
This was certainly a fabulous little interlude, a nice foray into the inner workings of Ron. But don\'t think it gets you off the hook on answering any of my questions, Missy! And when the hell do we get some snogging?!!! I must have my snogging fix! Aw heck, I\'ll just go re-read \"It Had to Be You\" and stop pestering you about that! SMIRK! I SURE will! Hee hee!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU! Now, what are you waiting for? Off you go to write chappie 36! shoo! shoo! If you need me, I\'ll be hanging out in the usual spot in The Gutter, eating warm chocolate chip cookies, drinking Dr. P and chillin\' the champagne. Drop in any time!
Big squeezy hugs and muchas smooches to you, Lovie!
Love, Ronnie
OH IT IS SO ANGSTY! I love this line: it captures all the anguish: \"He would rather his love went unrequited, than have her out of his life.\" Oh GAWWWWL! Poor baby, always been overshadowed by brothers, then Harry, so insecure, self esteem is shot...I just want to take him in my arms and comfort him. Well, you did it. That\'s the 3rd of your boys I\'ve hungered to do the comforting thing to.
This was certainly a fabulous little interlude, a nice foray into the inner workings of Ron. But don\'t think it gets you off the hook on answering any of my questions, Missy! And when the hell do we get some snogging?!!! I must have my snogging fix! Aw heck, I\'ll just go re-read \"It Had to Be You\" and stop pestering you about that! SMIRK! I SURE will! Hee hee!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU! Now, what are you waiting for? Off you go to write chappie 36! shoo! shoo! If you need me, I\'ll be hanging out in the usual spot in The Gutter, eating warm chocolate chip cookies, drinking Dr. P and chillin\' the champagne. Drop in any time!
Big squeezy hugs and muchas smooches to you, Lovie!
Love, Ronnie
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sprints red-faced into the room*
Can\'t stop, gotta do tons of work, but loved the chapter!
*hugs Ron fiercely* she loves you too, just you wait Ronnie boy!
Bbyyyyeeeeeeeeee
*sprints back out of the room*
Can\'t stop, gotta do tons of work, but loved the chapter!
*hugs Ron fiercely* she loves you too, just you wait Ronnie boy!
Bbyyyyeeeeeeeeee
*sprints back out of the room*
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola COMADRE (compadre is for a man)! I love your Ron, I have already told you. I\'ve never thought he\'s soo clueless, but certainly this depth of feelings for Hermione, wasn\'t expected. I always perceived that he wasn\'t aware of loving Hermione. But here, he knows and is willing to keep his love quiet in order to not lose her. So very tender ... and stupid. I did that once, and ended up losing both the love and the friendship. He must go get her. If he doesn\'t, it means she\'s not meant for him. And he should move on. But nothing good has ever come out from hiding one\'s emotions toward another person. It is hard, yes. Specially when said person has already given his/her heart to somebody else, but nevermind. It is harder to live in the shadow, I think. So, my dear Ron, so fragile, so intense should get over it and tell her. And see what happens.
Much love, lady for this insightful Ron-packed chapter. All your boys are yummie. And if you could make them real, OMG you should keep it quiet or else.... you could end up very badly beaten, I think. See you next chapter. Portate bien mientras tanto.....
Much love, lady for this insightful Ron-packed chapter. All your boys are yummie. And if you could make them real, OMG you should keep it quiet or else.... you could end up very badly beaten, I think. See you next chapter. Portate bien mientras tanto.....
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew!!! Well, I was SO worried I would miss one of your updates, but I got to it on the second day!! Whoop!! You see, the DAY after I left you that review (thanks so much for the praise, by the way - heh heh...made me blush) all my ties to the outside world were cut. (Your cue to faint.) I had no phone service OR internet service. It was killing me, it was. It was just put up - let\'s see - maybe five minutes ago. But man, I was mad. AND THEN, I finished writing my next chap - I struggled with a wee case of writer\'s block with this \'un - and the FILE GOT CORRUPTED. Tell me about it. So it WOULD have been up today, now I\'ll be lucky if I get it up by Friday.
Right. Enough complaining. Your turn for absolute flattery and praise - all deserved, of course. Well, I personally thought this chapter was AMAZING. Let\'s see, what\'d you say to Mrs-Accio-Firebolt?? \"That he\'s a tad more complex than the big, grumbly oaf we usually associate with him.\" Took the words right out of my mouth. What really astounds me is how you picked up on all these little points in the book, and incorporated them to build up a really strong case for Ron\'s ...er... affection. Let me be a bit more specific.
The defense. His insecurities are most definitely the type that are hidden - or revealed, in this case - by his tendency to jump on other people. I suppose it was all those years with brothers, fighting jealousy (a recurring problem, it seems) and his desire for fame and greatness. It\'s his main weakness, as was revealed by the Mirror of Erised. He wants to rise above his brothers, to become the greatest and best of them all. Because he was juggling these strong emotions, he learned to deal with them by beating his brothers to the punch. Not by labeling these insecurities, but by beginning to fight - physically - before THEY labeled them. A weakness in every last one of us, I suppose. Nobody wants to hear the worst things about them put in words.
And his love for Hermione....I ADORED the line that you used to descirbe his fall into this forbidden pool of emotion: \"somewhere along the way, over these past 6 years Ronald Weasley had fallen madly, totally, achingly in love with Hermione Granger.\" Beautifully put. Huh, it\'s funny. The jealousy you mention about Hermione and his reaction towards those who tempt this jealousy - it reminds me how he reacts on behalf of Ginny. So defensive. (Sorry, guess defense is on the brain tonight.) It\'s almost as if he, in a way. considers her his sister. And for awhile, I suppose he did. Until she became much, much more than that, in a way that he couldn\'t ignore any longer.
Ah, shoot. I\'ve got to run...Damn!! I was really thrilled about the opportunity to rattle on about the (startling) depth of Ron Weasley. Darn. Well, know that I sympathize for Ron and respect him for knowing the worst deep in the core of his body, even if he doesn\'t have the courage to accept it. In a way I had never considered before, it\'s almost cowardly to continue fighting. But valiant. Sigh...another knight in shining armour. Hopefully, I\'ll talk to you soon!! I swear I\'ll update MASTER by this weekend. I need your feedback.
~ME
Right. Enough complaining. Your turn for absolute flattery and praise - all deserved, of course. Well, I personally thought this chapter was AMAZING. Let\'s see, what\'d you say to Mrs-Accio-Firebolt?? \"That he\'s a tad more complex than the big, grumbly oaf we usually associate with him.\" Took the words right out of my mouth. What really astounds me is how you picked up on all these little points in the book, and incorporated them to build up a really strong case for Ron\'s ...er... affection. Let me be a bit more specific.
The defense. His insecurities are most definitely the type that are hidden - or revealed, in this case - by his tendency to jump on other people. I suppose it was all those years with brothers, fighting jealousy (a recurring problem, it seems) and his desire for fame and greatness. It\'s his main weakness, as was revealed by the Mirror of Erised. He wants to rise above his brothers, to become the greatest and best of them all. Because he was juggling these strong emotions, he learned to deal with them by beating his brothers to the punch. Not by labeling these insecurities, but by beginning to fight - physically - before THEY labeled them. A weakness in every last one of us, I suppose. Nobody wants to hear the worst things about them put in words.
And his love for Hermione....I ADORED the line that you used to descirbe his fall into this forbidden pool of emotion: \"somewhere along the way, over these past 6 years Ronald Weasley had fallen madly, totally, achingly in love with Hermione Granger.\" Beautifully put. Huh, it\'s funny. The jealousy you mention about Hermione and his reaction towards those who tempt this jealousy - it reminds me how he reacts on behalf of Ginny. So defensive. (Sorry, guess defense is on the brain tonight.) It\'s almost as if he, in a way. considers her his sister. And for awhile, I suppose he did. Until she became much, much more than that, in a way that he couldn\'t ignore any longer.
Ah, shoot. I\'ve got to run...Damn!! I was really thrilled about the opportunity to rattle on about the (startling) depth of Ron Weasley. Darn. Well, know that I sympathize for Ron and respect him for knowing the worst deep in the core of his body, even if he doesn\'t have the courage to accept it. In a way I had never considered before, it\'s almost cowardly to continue fighting. But valiant. Sigh...another knight in shining armour. Hopefully, I\'ll talk to you soon!! I swear I\'ll update MASTER by this weekend. I need your feedback.
~ME
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello!!!
I know its been a long time, I\'m hardly on the computer anymore! But I still read all the updates from the site and read the chappies! I like to call it \"lurking\" lol
So I totally love this chapter and love RON!!! He is such a little cutie! I just want to hug him or set him and Hermoine up IMEDIATELY!! I love how descriptive this chapter is, it really gives deeper character depth to Ron which I think is needed cause he is a key character.
Anywho, just wanted to drop a quick note and I can\'t wait for 4 chappies from now!
Luv ya! Muah
Jenn
I know its been a long time, I\'m hardly on the computer anymore! But I still read all the updates from the site and read the chappies! I like to call it \"lurking\" lol
So I totally love this chapter and love RON!!! He is such a little cutie! I just want to hug him or set him and Hermoine up IMEDIATELY!! I love how descriptive this chapter is, it really gives deeper character depth to Ron which I think is needed cause he is a key character.
Anywho, just wanted to drop a quick note and I can\'t wait for 4 chappies from now!
Luv ya! Muah
Jenn
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite apologizing for good writing. Sure there are some errors and areas that you could work on, but smut isn\'t the only part of a story. If flows well and isn\'t the inmature porn in almost all of these stories.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea why Ron would make me \"long.\" He doesn\'t really make me sad. I have no sympathy for people who don\'t get up off their pathetic, shy ass and ask someone out if they want to. He\'s such a pussy! But on the other hand, this whole jealousy thing is interesting. You should make him just go totally nuts with jealousy, go into a flying rage when someone breathes in Hermione\'s direction, or looks at her, or heaven forbid, actually say her name.
Good chapter. Good Ron. I\'m not one to feel sad for this kind of character, but I do find him interesting.
Good chapter. Good Ron. I\'m not one to feel sad for this kind of character, but I do find him interesting.