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for The Three Keys

by lorettcopeland

person mrs_accio_firebolt
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, hello. I\'m back.

And I feel like killing you.

What a chapter! Wonderful... or very close to that.

You know me. I do love slash. And you almost gave it to me... but didn\'t see fit to.

I know a gay or even bisexual Draco wouldn\'t work in this story... but he came so close. And as I understand it, he even at least kissed with Blaise. Yummie! But not with Harry WHYYY?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!??!

I loved, absolutely loved the interaction between them in this chapter. The whole bonding thing. Veeery good, muchachita. It made me so hot. I\'m not kidding. The force irradiating from them, the depth of the feelings, the emotions running almost absolutely free.. Oh, how much would I have liked a kiss.......

But never mind.

As for the last part.... Hot again. And yet again, you\'ve left me hanging.... Damn you! LOL. I just can\'t wait till they\'re alone, together, in a bedroom ( or bathroom, I don\'t really mind ), naked.... hmmmm. (Damn it, I\'m so horny this Monday).

My guess is that it\'s Ginny who was in the library. Am I right? Yes, I am. And I do look forward to the interaction between Ginny and Laurel. Two rough girls, right?

Anyways, see you later aligator.

Muchos besos y abrazos,
accio
person dragon34
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is her play date either Hermione or Ginny ? I almost wanted to see Harry and Draco kiss and grope each other, ( been watching Queer as Folk all day today ) Nothing wrong with watching or reading about two or more hot guys getting it on.
Or maybe her play date is Ron. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter.

my beta has chapters for two of my stories, so hopefully soon, thanks for reading, and liking.
person Alison
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve got about two seconds before I have to leave, but I thought I\'d pop in and say hello - which is probably about I\'ll I\'m going to have time for in the next couple weeks. My English teacher is piling on these STUPID projects, and I have two more (big ones, too) due in the next two weeks, not to mention all the other work I\'ll have to deal with. I hope your swamped-ness is over with. (Thanks so much for reviewing, by the way!! I haven\'t heard from Ally or Accio yet.)

THAT was an action-packed chapter. The tension and drama is very well done, and you leave us wondering exactly what\'s going to happen next. Let\'s see...I remember you mentioning that Laurel thinks Draco is dead at one point, and you also had Harry call Draco \"the-Boy-Who-Died-to-Save-the-Boy-Who-Lived\". Big hint there, I think. And I have a feeling Harvey and Hazel are going to be back with the bloodlust soon, too.

Oh, man, I have to leave!! I was hoping for more time than THAT, but didn\'t want you to update without hearing from me. I\'ll try to find my way back and do some disecting soon...but I may not get around to it. Much love, dearest!!

~Me
person Lindsey
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really love your story. I haven\'t read such a good story in a VERY long time. I usually don\'t like stories with other characters in it, but this one is so different. The plot is THE BEST....you are a great writer, i REALLY wanna kno what Draco is up to, so please update ASAP!!!!
person RahNee
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, darling, I LOVED chapter 32! I really enjoyed seeing Laurel pushed to the edge and her reaction to Harvey. She was ready to show everyone and give them what for! Go Laurel! I really like her.

The scene where Draco is trying to get Harry to come over by jerking his head was funny. A nice bit of humor in a tough situation. And the Harry/Draco interaction throughout was terrific. Especially the dismal failure of the life insurance policy joke.

I enjoyed being in Draco\'s head as he surveyed the room and schemed. And the funniest line: \"God he loved dramatic entrances.\" Love that dramatic Draco! The scene between Draco and Harvey was fantastic: I could feel the tension. I loved it when Draco gave him his comeuppance.

The best line of all in the chappie:
person Annie
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lorett!

How are you hunny bunches? Good I hope! I\'m feeling cheerful, because the sun is out YAY, but stressed because I have tons and tons of work to do! *sighs* I wish I could be out basking myself in the beautiful weather and sipping on an ice cold drink but I\'m in the university library again working like a trooper to get everything done! It\'s my own fault for being a procrastinator and leaving everything to the last minute! But I\'m sure I\'m not the only one who has done it... at least I hope not! It\'s ok about the whole audition thing. I mean, I was a bit disheartened at first because it\'s a big blow to your confidence. But then I thought I still love to sing and nothing can take that away from me! Not even mean producers of TV shows who think they know everything about the music biz! Thanks for supporting me Honey! You\'re an absolute star and I love you right back!

This chapter was amazing! It totally took my mind off my stressful live from which I really needed a break! Except that my friend, who I\'d brought with me to motivate me to do something, kept saying \"Stop reading those silly stories and get on with your work!\" to which I replied \"Get Lost!\". The interaction between Draco and Laurel melted my insides! It was sooooo romantic and you know I love that stuff! Draco is so gentle with her and so protective. He is definitely a smitten kitten! Ahhh... he\'s so dreamy! *puts on whiny kids voice* I want a Draco!!! That spell that Harvey put on the room was frightening! I was actually scared for my own safety when I was reading that because it felt so real! It was like the effect the Dementors have on people but much much worse! He\'s a nasty piece of work that Harvey is! And now Draco\'s father will know that he\'s turned to the good side and that he has his eyes on Laurel! Oh NO!!! Dun dun duhhhh! That Lucius is a dirty piece of work! Awww and Harry saw the interaction between Laurel and Draco and was jealous. Bless him! But he was thinking about Ginny and Hermione aswell! Wow! He definitely has girls on the brain! Hee hee!

Anyway, I\'d better go because I\'m just procrastinating again! You know I love you and what you do so update soon please!!!

Lots of hugs and smooches,
AnnieXxX
person Huked On Fonix (too lazy to log in, haha)
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, you dedicated this chapter to ME!! Well, partly, haha.. I feel so special!! *grin*

Anyway, LOVE this chapter! Great chemistry between the characters. Action packed chapter, just leaves me wanting more!

:-D
person dragon34
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was great, I can\'t wait to see what Draco is going to do, before his father does.

I\'m getting ready to update two of my stories, I will send you the updates, so be on the look out.

After you finish this story, i really hope you come up with another tantilizing story.
person ali aka ginny-rules-the-world
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! i feel special!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you dedicated the chpater to me! *o*!!!!!!!!! lol. my other friend, Rachel, helped my solve the problem with my bf (best friend) and she kept telling my bf that she knew how she felt, and blah blah blah, and so the next day, my bf said, \"Rachel know\'s everything,\" and that just did it. well anywho, on to more important things. AWSOME CHAPTER! (chap 32) OMG! I REMEMBERED TO TELL YOU WHAT CHAPTER IT WAS! *faints* ahahaha. ok im good. LUV U! TTYL!



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person Narcissa Black
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Statler and Waldorf, and yes, Waldorf did admit once that his wife\'s name was Astoria. You do have excellent Harry/Draco, and they\'re both actually straight in this. Usually excellent Harry/Draco involves lubrication spells. Are you sure there\'s only a few chapters left? Do all three couples get a happy ending, and is there much suffering, and I get tears on my keyboard? No cemetary, all right?