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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girl
So far I am liking this story. NO Draco so far :( but you promised so I will take your word for it. You have a gift for details and it makes an enjoyable read. I especially liked this chapter. I hate girly girls who just cry and don\'t fight back. Your Laurel is a tough cookie and didn\'t go down without a fight. Even panicing and terrified she had a plan. Really shows a strong character. And Don was really evil!
So far I am liking this story. NO Draco so far :( but you promised so I will take your word for it. You have a gift for details and it makes an enjoyable read. I especially liked this chapter. I hate girly girls who just cry and don\'t fight back. Your Laurel is a tough cookie and didn\'t go down without a fight. Even panicing and terrified she had a plan. Really shows a strong character. And Don was really evil!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very late review, I know, but a review none the less!
So how are things?? My new job keeps me very busy but I still like to drop in and say hello! You know that this is my favorite chapter BY FAR so I can\'t wait to see what will out-do it in the near future! Quick question though... did you combine two chappies?? I remember the Harry/Draco scene being seperate from the Laurel/Draco scene... can\'t really remember though! Either way, it flows nicely!
So its about two more chapters to go??? Oh, and I know a hot little one that makes an appearance next chappie!! Ahh, Blaise walking down the street *sigh*
I better get going here but I can\'t wait for that new chappie! Keep it going! luv ya!
hugs:)
So how are things?? My new job keeps me very busy but I still like to drop in and say hello! You know that this is my favorite chapter BY FAR so I can\'t wait to see what will out-do it in the near future! Quick question though... did you combine two chappies?? I remember the Harry/Draco scene being seperate from the Laurel/Draco scene... can\'t really remember though! Either way, it flows nicely!
So its about two more chapters to go??? Oh, and I know a hot little one that makes an appearance next chappie!! Ahh, Blaise walking down the street *sigh*
I better get going here but I can\'t wait for that new chappie! Keep it going! luv ya!
hugs:)
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*peeks out from under a pillow* hi... i love it. im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that i haven\'t reviewed. like whoa. reallyreallyreally sorry. i love it tho!!!! i always do. hoping to be on more after finals, then i read and review all i like. two-ish weeks, and then i belong to the world of fanfiction again. so i apologize for not reviewing sooner. its great, as always. you\'re amazing. *muah*
.tiar.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, the chapters just get better and better, and that\'s pretty hard to do when you have over 30 chapters!!!! i DID like the harry/draco flirting, it was different, but interesting. i also liked how you built up the suspense btwn draco and Laurel, BUT you decided to save it for a later time, ay? anyway, keep up the GREAT writing, i get so excited when i see your e-mails and know that there\'s a new chapter to read!!! lol, kinda silly, but still, i LOVE reading your story, it\'s great! till next time!!!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW!! I know who the mystery person is! Haha, but only cuz I remember from FF.net.. *grin*
I REALLY like this chapter! (33) ESPECIALLY the part with Draco/Laurel..... YAY! I was SO happy to finally see a scene with JUST the two of them, both awake, hehe..
Whew! Somebody crank up the A/C, cuz it is HOT in here! Lol
I\'m just so excited - more and more excited for NEW chapters! Patience, I need patience, haha...
Anyway...Imma go to bed now, and have some NICE dreams... mmmm, haha.. 1am.....soooooooo tired.....need sleep......have stuff to do tomorrow......
Keep up good work....still LOVING the story, and can\'t wait for another chappie!!
Fonix *Yawn!*
I REALLY like this chapter! (33) ESPECIALLY the part with Draco/Laurel..... YAY! I was SO happy to finally see a scene with JUST the two of them, both awake, hehe..
Whew! Somebody crank up the A/C, cuz it is HOT in here! Lol
I\'m just so excited - more and more excited for NEW chapters! Patience, I need patience, haha...
Anyway...Imma go to bed now, and have some NICE dreams... mmmm, haha.. 1am.....soooooooo tired.....need sleep......have stuff to do tomorrow......
Keep up good work....still LOVING the story, and can\'t wait for another chappie!!
Fonix *Yawn!*
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woosh!! That was INTENSE, darlin\'. HARDCORE ACTION THERE. (Hard in more ways than one, si? Heh heh heh...couldn\'t resist...I set myself up for that...) It was brilliant, as you said yourself, and just overflowing with these delicious little tidbits that seemed so much fun to write, let alone read. And you left us with a mystery! Who, I wonder, is her secret \"spy,\" \"playmate,\" whatever you called him/her.
The blood bonding ceremony was just amazing. It was such a beautiful ritual, and you carried off its significance - to Draco, especially - incredibly. I could feel his hesitation, Harry\'s anticipation, their determination, and, most of all, their pride. They refused to bow to the other. You worked in a bunch of other attributes earlier, too, such as Draco\'s smarts - love of books, you say? Ah...match made in heaven...I just love literate guys. So sexy in their intelligence... Harry\'s pride got petty here, too (his similarities to Draco are getting more obvious every day!) - his manners?? That truly made me roll on the floor. So like Harry to get offended over something like that, probably just because it\'s Draco telling him that. It\'s true, though - Harry\'s never been really tactful.
I still can\'t get over the rings. THEY SOUND SO COOL!! And to have the attitude of the Slytherins, even when bound to a Gryffindor.... So now Harry and Draco are brothers. Closer than brothers, really; that lust was welldone. I squirm to think what would happen if Draco WASN\'T prepared (but your little scene with Laurel more than made up for it....SHOWER HO!). Eeps, Harry and Draco (shudders). Not exactly what you\'d call a perfect match. Afterwards, when Harry felt jealous that his intimacy with Draco had been shared with Blaise, it reminded me a little of PUPPET MASTER. Obviously, this is in quite diffferent circumstances, but Harry must have felt just as bewildered as Herms and Drakes did after the Fates messed with \'em. Now, here\'s a question for you: So if Draco bonded with Blaise, he\'s using the same ring, right? So what happens if BOTH Harry and Blaise are in mortal peril (such as a huge Death Eater/Order battle) - is Draco torn in two? (Now THAT\'S an easy way to share our hot babe.) Or maybe both of them are pulled to Draco\'s side? Yeah, that would at least get \'em out of the way, though it might be a little wierd if Harry\'s in the middle of the confrontation with Voldemort. \"Oy, Voldemort, you killed my fathe---ack!\" And more innocent lives are lost, all because of that stupid ring thing. Now, I also assume that Harry and Draco are no longer permitted to hurt each other. Meaning, no more bouncing ferret. It seems that emotional hurt is still okay (though it essentially betrays the trust they put in each other), based on Harry\'s refusal to agree not to touch Laurel. I fear that there may be a battle of egos concerning the ladies (Ginny included), but it seems pretty obvious where Draco plans on ending up. (That is, right in Laurel\'s pants.)
Speaking of Laurel...the playmate. While I was reading it, I thought it might be Willow. We hadn\'t heard from her in awhile, and I know she\'s pretty powerful. Of course, I changed my mind seeing as this person seemed to have intimate knowledge of Hogwarts\' inter-workings, not to mention that Laurel said, \"I didn\'t hear you come in.\" THEN I thought it was maybe Harry, seeing as she said \"Wanna have a go at friendship, then?\" (after the infamous bathroom scene, he seemed fairly hostile at her attempts to end any developing affection), but then you implied that this person had just gotten there. Actually, scratch that. I still think its Harry.
Okee dokee...must run, m\'love. Beautiful chapter, as always. And I expect you to update soon, young lady! Only two more chapters till the acclaimed chapter 36!!
~Me.
The blood bonding ceremony was just amazing. It was such a beautiful ritual, and you carried off its significance - to Draco, especially - incredibly. I could feel his hesitation, Harry\'s anticipation, their determination, and, most of all, their pride. They refused to bow to the other. You worked in a bunch of other attributes earlier, too, such as Draco\'s smarts - love of books, you say? Ah...match made in heaven...I just love literate guys. So sexy in their intelligence... Harry\'s pride got petty here, too (his similarities to Draco are getting more obvious every day!) - his manners?? That truly made me roll on the floor. So like Harry to get offended over something like that, probably just because it\'s Draco telling him that. It\'s true, though - Harry\'s never been really tactful.
I still can\'t get over the rings. THEY SOUND SO COOL!! And to have the attitude of the Slytherins, even when bound to a Gryffindor.... So now Harry and Draco are brothers. Closer than brothers, really; that lust was welldone. I squirm to think what would happen if Draco WASN\'T prepared (but your little scene with Laurel more than made up for it....SHOWER HO!). Eeps, Harry and Draco (shudders). Not exactly what you\'d call a perfect match. Afterwards, when Harry felt jealous that his intimacy with Draco had been shared with Blaise, it reminded me a little of PUPPET MASTER. Obviously, this is in quite diffferent circumstances, but Harry must have felt just as bewildered as Herms and Drakes did after the Fates messed with \'em. Now, here\'s a question for you: So if Draco bonded with Blaise, he\'s using the same ring, right? So what happens if BOTH Harry and Blaise are in mortal peril (such as a huge Death Eater/Order battle) - is Draco torn in two? (Now THAT\'S an easy way to share our hot babe.) Or maybe both of them are pulled to Draco\'s side? Yeah, that would at least get \'em out of the way, though it might be a little wierd if Harry\'s in the middle of the confrontation with Voldemort. \"Oy, Voldemort, you killed my fathe---ack!\" And more innocent lives are lost, all because of that stupid ring thing. Now, I also assume that Harry and Draco are no longer permitted to hurt each other. Meaning, no more bouncing ferret. It seems that emotional hurt is still okay (though it essentially betrays the trust they put in each other), based on Harry\'s refusal to agree not to touch Laurel. I fear that there may be a battle of egos concerning the ladies (Ginny included), but it seems pretty obvious where Draco plans on ending up. (That is, right in Laurel\'s pants.)
Speaking of Laurel...the playmate. While I was reading it, I thought it might be Willow. We hadn\'t heard from her in awhile, and I know she\'s pretty powerful. Of course, I changed my mind seeing as this person seemed to have intimate knowledge of Hogwarts\' inter-workings, not to mention that Laurel said, \"I didn\'t hear you come in.\" THEN I thought it was maybe Harry, seeing as she said \"Wanna have a go at friendship, then?\" (after the infamous bathroom scene, he seemed fairly hostile at her attempts to end any developing affection), but then you implied that this person had just gotten there. Actually, scratch that. I still think its Harry.
Okee dokee...must run, m\'love. Beautiful chapter, as always. And I expect you to update soon, young lady! Only two more chapters till the acclaimed chapter 36!!
~Me.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again. Decided I changed my mind to Ginny. Makes much more sense with the whole friendship line, not to mention the \"YOU!\" at the beginnig. Didn\'t have friendly ring to it. Ah, indecision galore!!
But this time, I mean it. I really do. Like, IT\'S GINNY! kind of mean-it.
That is...unless....
But this time, I mean it. I really do. Like, IT\'S GINNY! kind of mean-it.
That is...unless....
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lorett!!!
How are you hun? Good I hope! I\'m ok. I\'m soooooo sorry I haven\'t posted at the community for ages, I have been extra busy with all kinds of different things. First it was all the assignments I had to do. I had about 10 assignments that all had to be in over 4 days and of course me being... well me left everything to the last minute. So there was some late night library stays and early starts. I managed to get everything in on time. (Just about!) Then I had my chillout phase which consisted of nothing but watching telly (TV) and eating rubbish! And then I got home and went straight back to work at the supermarket I work at. I desperately need the money so I\'m not really complaining but it does make me absolutely cream crackered (rhyming slang for the word Knackered which in the UK we use for the word tired. We\'re weird, I know!). But, I do have a bit of time spare sometime soon so I\'ll pop over and leave a message!
Ok, review time...
I can see why this chapter is your favourite! I think it has to be one of my favourites too!!! You\'ve got everything in there like love, jealousy, passion, bonding, quipy remarks, suspense, tension and trouble brewing... what more could a girl ask for?!?! (A real life Draco I suppose... *ponders* but I won\'t go into that!! Hee hee!) I think the whole bonding thing with Harry and Draco, the snakes and the rings was very ingenious! They hate eachother yet they\'re bound to eachother for the rest of their lives!! That\'s going to be interesting... (Harry is soooooo lucky! *is jealous*) can\'t wait to see what happens with that. Just one thing about that though, I think the bonding went on for a bit too long. It\'s great that you put all the detail into it but it just seemed to go on for a while. I loved the interaction between Draco and Laurel. It just made me melt inside!!! They are sooooo made for eachother! I bet the last person Laurel was thinking about during that little encounter was Harry!!! I don\'t think he could compare to Draco in the whole tenderness, passion way.
Anyway, I can\'t wait for you to update! I sense trouble afoot! And that\'s always good for a read! I think Laurels play mate is Ginny... or Harry... I can\'t decide at the moment! But I guess I\'ll see for myself soon enough! I will most certainly get my friend hooked onto your story. I\'ve just introduced her to the whole fan fiction thing and she loves it!
Hope all is good in the world of Lorett!
Love ya lots,
AnnieXxX
How are you hun? Good I hope! I\'m ok. I\'m soooooo sorry I haven\'t posted at the community for ages, I have been extra busy with all kinds of different things. First it was all the assignments I had to do. I had about 10 assignments that all had to be in over 4 days and of course me being... well me left everything to the last minute. So there was some late night library stays and early starts. I managed to get everything in on time. (Just about!) Then I had my chillout phase which consisted of nothing but watching telly (TV) and eating rubbish! And then I got home and went straight back to work at the supermarket I work at. I desperately need the money so I\'m not really complaining but it does make me absolutely cream crackered (rhyming slang for the word Knackered which in the UK we use for the word tired. We\'re weird, I know!). But, I do have a bit of time spare sometime soon so I\'ll pop over and leave a message!
Ok, review time...
I can see why this chapter is your favourite! I think it has to be one of my favourites too!!! You\'ve got everything in there like love, jealousy, passion, bonding, quipy remarks, suspense, tension and trouble brewing... what more could a girl ask for?!?! (A real life Draco I suppose... *ponders* but I won\'t go into that!! Hee hee!) I think the whole bonding thing with Harry and Draco, the snakes and the rings was very ingenious! They hate eachother yet they\'re bound to eachother for the rest of their lives!! That\'s going to be interesting... (Harry is soooooo lucky! *is jealous*) can\'t wait to see what happens with that. Just one thing about that though, I think the bonding went on for a bit too long. It\'s great that you put all the detail into it but it just seemed to go on for a while. I loved the interaction between Draco and Laurel. It just made me melt inside!!! They are sooooo made for eachother! I bet the last person Laurel was thinking about during that little encounter was Harry!!! I don\'t think he could compare to Draco in the whole tenderness, passion way.
Anyway, I can\'t wait for you to update! I sense trouble afoot! And that\'s always good for a read! I think Laurels play mate is Ginny... or Harry... I can\'t decide at the moment! But I guess I\'ll see for myself soon enough! I will most certainly get my friend hooked onto your story. I\'ve just introduced her to the whole fan fiction thing and she loves it!
Hope all is good in the world of Lorett!
Love ya lots,
AnnieXxX
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lorett darling! (Breezing in and kissing you on each cheek. MWAP! MWAP!) So sorry I am rather late in this review of chappie 33. It is not because I didn\'t love it: you know I did! It was the best birthday gift, I must say!
Enough chit chat. Let\'s get down to business. My first fav moment is the \"hero complex\" dialogue when Draco pushes all of Harry\'s buttons. And then Draco backpedaling. That was fantastic. And then Harry getting more wound up and Draco making the mental note to push that button again when he had more time to see the results. I laughed!
Next: The money discussion. Draco wants to finance the Order? Well, sure, because he\'s got to back the good guys now that he has cut the ties with Daddy Death and Moldy Voldy. And Harry questioning if money was worth risking his life was very Harry-like. Harry having to grudgingly admit that with THAT much money, Draco could have been much more of a spoiled brat than he was. I could just imagine Harry\'s eyes bugging out at the 7000 vaults figure.
All of the Draco/Harry dialogue was great. I enjoyed watching Draco manipulate Harry into the bonding ritual. But I also liked Harry\'s thoughts on Draco trusting him with Laurel.
The whole Slytherin ring bonding ritual scene was FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC! I loved the visual imagery. I loved the almost slashy-thing going on. (As you know, that\'s as close to slash as I like to get: \"almost slashy\") I loved those lascivious little snakes twining together. I loved the sensuality of the power going through Harry. Well done! Well done! (stands up, gives standing ovation, tosses roses at your feet, wolf whistles, claps some more...)
Hee hee! Harry was maliciously glad that Draco saw how Laurel responded to Harry! Oh, what typical teenaged male posturing. That \"I had her first\" kind of mentality.
I\'d forgotten that Laurel still thought she was in danger from Don! She\'s got some secrets, too, then. Oh, the Harry/Draco/Laurel stuff is so rife with opportunities for miscommunication and angst! Yum yum yum!
YAY! I FINALLY get some Draco/Laurel snogging! It is about time, lady! And it was so nice and HOT! I swear my heart did flip-flops at the following lines:
Enough chit chat. Let\'s get down to business. My first fav moment is the \"hero complex\" dialogue when Draco pushes all of Harry\'s buttons. And then Draco backpedaling. That was fantastic. And then Harry getting more wound up and Draco making the mental note to push that button again when he had more time to see the results. I laughed!
Next: The money discussion. Draco wants to finance the Order? Well, sure, because he\'s got to back the good guys now that he has cut the ties with Daddy Death and Moldy Voldy. And Harry questioning if money was worth risking his life was very Harry-like. Harry having to grudgingly admit that with THAT much money, Draco could have been much more of a spoiled brat than he was. I could just imagine Harry\'s eyes bugging out at the 7000 vaults figure.
All of the Draco/Harry dialogue was great. I enjoyed watching Draco manipulate Harry into the bonding ritual. But I also liked Harry\'s thoughts on Draco trusting him with Laurel.
The whole Slytherin ring bonding ritual scene was FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC! I loved the visual imagery. I loved the almost slashy-thing going on. (As you know, that\'s as close to slash as I like to get: \"almost slashy\") I loved those lascivious little snakes twining together. I loved the sensuality of the power going through Harry. Well done! Well done! (stands up, gives standing ovation, tosses roses at your feet, wolf whistles, claps some more...)
Hee hee! Harry was maliciously glad that Draco saw how Laurel responded to Harry! Oh, what typical teenaged male posturing. That \"I had her first\" kind of mentality.
I\'d forgotten that Laurel still thought she was in danger from Don! She\'s got some secrets, too, then. Oh, the Harry/Draco/Laurel stuff is so rife with opportunities for miscommunication and angst! Yum yum yum!
YAY! I FINALLY get some Draco/Laurel snogging! It is about time, lady! And it was so nice and HOT! I swear my heart did flip-flops at the following lines:
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! no i listen to Dane Cook, a comidian. he\'s hillarius. 11 days until my birthday! not including today. i will be 19. it\'s wierd, there is this big difference between 19 and 20. i mean come on, 19 ur still kind of a teenager, and 20, ur like an adult. n e who, onto more important things, this is my favorite chapter too! :0! lol. ok well, im going to go now. i luv u!
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