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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigosh I am so late in writing this review for Chapter 34! I am so sorry...and I\'d feel worse if I hadn\'t already given you some feedback! What a fun chapter! I loved the reveal of Ginny as Laurel\'s partner in crime and as you know, I think having Ginny in the know about the bonding and Draco\'s reasoning for going to Diagon Alley is brilliant! I loved Laurel and Ginny doing the Scooby thing (but wait...that\'d make Ginny Daphne and Laurel Velma...so Draco as Fred and Ron as Shaggy and Harry...as Scoob? OK...scratch that analogy!)
LOL! Ginny getting an eyeful of Harry as she steals the cloak! Whee! What fun. And I liked the moment where Laurel gets all sappy and hugs Ginny, and Ginny doesn\'t know how to handle it. But being the practical girl she is, Ginny sees an ally in Laurel and is lining her up before Hermione even gets there. Good for you, Ginny!
I enjoyed Draco\'s inner thoughts about what an advantage it was to be so devastatingly hansome...he is so full of himself! I love it. And the conversation with Blaise was fantastic! Love those two \"men of action\" together. And I thoroughly enjoyed Blaise strutting down the street afterward.
Draco\'s handling of Ezra showcased the cool and calculating blueblood Draco so well. Haughty Draco is fun to read, too!
Ginny discovers that Laurel can do wandless magic. I just know that that will be important down the line...
Well, Lorett dear, another lovely chapter, I must say! I\'m enjoying the Ginny/Laurel dynamic and the Draco/Blaise dynamic a lot. I cant wait to see Harry\'s reaction to the whole affair. Oh, and Lucius\' reaction too. Hee hee. Wow! I can\'t wait for Chapter 35!!! But have you noticed how patient I have gotten lately? Oh, now stop it. Really Lorett, loud guffaws are not ladylike. Stop laughing at me. I really am getting more patient, really. OK...you can stop giggling like a hyena now...
(Grabs you in a big hug and twirls you around in The Gutter with me. Whoops! Almost knocked over the Lava Lamp!) Keep writing, darling! I continue to adore your story and can NOT wait to find out what happens next. Love you, sweets! MWAP!
LOL! Ginny getting an eyeful of Harry as she steals the cloak! Whee! What fun. And I liked the moment where Laurel gets all sappy and hugs Ginny, and Ginny doesn\'t know how to handle it. But being the practical girl she is, Ginny sees an ally in Laurel and is lining her up before Hermione even gets there. Good for you, Ginny!
I enjoyed Draco\'s inner thoughts about what an advantage it was to be so devastatingly hansome...he is so full of himself! I love it. And the conversation with Blaise was fantastic! Love those two \"men of action\" together. And I thoroughly enjoyed Blaise strutting down the street afterward.
Draco\'s handling of Ezra showcased the cool and calculating blueblood Draco so well. Haughty Draco is fun to read, too!
Ginny discovers that Laurel can do wandless magic. I just know that that will be important down the line...
Well, Lorett dear, another lovely chapter, I must say! I\'m enjoying the Ginny/Laurel dynamic and the Draco/Blaise dynamic a lot. I cant wait to see Harry\'s reaction to the whole affair. Oh, and Lucius\' reaction too. Hee hee. Wow! I can\'t wait for Chapter 35!!! But have you noticed how patient I have gotten lately? Oh, now stop it. Really Lorett, loud guffaws are not ladylike. Stop laughing at me. I really am getting more patient, really. OK...you can stop giggling like a hyena now...
(Grabs you in a big hug and twirls you around in The Gutter with me. Whoops! Almost knocked over the Lava Lamp!) Keep writing, darling! I continue to adore your story and can NOT wait to find out what happens next. Love you, sweets! MWAP!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! I SO love this chapter, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next......AND we\'re SO close to a brand spankin new chappie!
*Jumpin up and down* I\'m so excited, and I just can\'t hide it, lol!
ANywho, keep it up, you are so WICKED AWESOME!
*I\'m so hyper, haha.... ;-) I guess that\'s what happens when you have lots of sugar at 1am, haha.....*
Ok then Buh Bye! You\'re BLOODY BRILLIANT, girlie!
Smooches, love ya!
*Jumpin up and down* I\'m so excited, and I just can\'t hide it, lol!
ANywho, keep it up, you are so WICKED AWESOME!
*I\'m so hyper, haha.... ;-) I guess that\'s what happens when you have lots of sugar at 1am, haha.....*
Ok then Buh Bye! You\'re BLOODY BRILLIANT, girlie!
Smooches, love ya!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter, not too much action, but u made up for it by puttin in a lot of details. i still liked it!!! i didn\'t get exactly how ginny went with laurel instead of harry, buh it\'s ok. can\'t wait for more laurel/draco moments.....oooh i wonder wats gunna happen when lucius gets to gringotts!!!! i\'m looking forward to the next chapter!!!
til then, TOODLES!
til then, TOODLES!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aha! i got you! i SWITCHED the ginny-rules-the-world and ali!!! HA! lol, i have issues. n e who, my fav. part, in this chap: A shudder ran through him,
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still following the story, really enjoying it, unfortunately it\'s tax form receipt time so I\'m
really busy. Loved your Blaize, sexy lovable rogue he is. Best wishes hope you\'re o.k.
really busy. Loved your Blaize, sexy lovable rogue he is. Best wishes hope you\'re o.k.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lorett,
Awww poor you! Staying up late to write a chapter and shout-outs and having the shout-outs deleted! I would be pissed as well! I always do stuff like that! Like when I\'m sending out an e-mail or something and it deletes itself... STRESS!!! I posted on the community! I got a quick chance yesterday before I went to work so thought I\'d come to say Hi! I went to see Destiny\'s Child on Sunday night and they were amazing! I don\'t think I\'ve ever been to a better concert! I mean we (me and my mates) didn\'t have the best of seats but I still had a blast! They really are brilliant performers and Beyonce has one of the best voices I\'ve ever heard in my life!... The cow!!! Hee hee!
Anyway, review time...
I knew it was Ginny who was with Laurel! I can see that their friendship is going to be quite solid as they have similar personalities. That\'s like me and my best friend Jess, we get on so well because we\'re do similar, well, we\'re both crazy and no one else understands our crazyness so I think that\'s why! It was a nice touch adding Ginny to the mix in the whole Library thing! I think that she\'s going to be one of my absolute favourite characters in this story! She\'s so firey and sarcastic! I\'m loving it! And her seeing Harry in the shower *giggles* that\'s naughty, but so funny! Hee hee! I mean any sane girl would perve on a sexy guy in the shower if she could right?... or is that just me?! Hee hee!
Just so you know, you\'ve added my total and utter idea of a dream guy into this chapter! Blaise sounds like the guy I would go for in real life! (except for the whole magic thing!... Actually, thinking about it, a real life Blaise with magic powers sounds good to me too! Hee hee!) I\'m a sucker for bright blue eyes and dark hair and the fact that in this story they belong to a bad boy is all the better for me!! I think I have always told you that I go for bad boys without concious(sp?) thought. I hope that he\'ll be involved in the story some more and very soon hopefully! And maybe he\'ll have a nice Annie character draped on his arm...???!!! Hee hee! I loved the relationship that he and Draco seem to have. They seem to be the Slytherin version of Harry and Ron in that they know eachothers thoughts since they know eachother so well. It\'s nice that Draco has a best friend just like everyone else and that he\'s not been on his own before he found \'the golden group\'.
I loved Draco\'s arrongance in Gringotts. It\'s just like him to look down his nose at the people who are intended on serving him! (Look at me talking as if I know him personally! Hee hee! I\'m a geek!) I\'m glad that you\'ve kept his character similar to what it is in the books because so many fics that feature Draco seem to loose the whole essence of him that is captured in the books. You, however, are true to his original personality and make his changes and progressions believeable!
Anyway, I\'m going to stop babbling now before I go into the land of Annie and start writing utter nonsense that you won\'t understand! Hee hee! I loved this chapter and can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next! (Oooohhh... Lucius is coming and he\'s going to be pissed... I\'m scared!!) Please write soon!
Hope you\'re ok and that life is treating you well!!
Hugs and kisses,
AnineXxX
(P.S - Wow look at me go! It\'s such a long review! I hope I haven\'t bored you hun!)
Awww poor you! Staying up late to write a chapter and shout-outs and having the shout-outs deleted! I would be pissed as well! I always do stuff like that! Like when I\'m sending out an e-mail or something and it deletes itself... STRESS!!! I posted on the community! I got a quick chance yesterday before I went to work so thought I\'d come to say Hi! I went to see Destiny\'s Child on Sunday night and they were amazing! I don\'t think I\'ve ever been to a better concert! I mean we (me and my mates) didn\'t have the best of seats but I still had a blast! They really are brilliant performers and Beyonce has one of the best voices I\'ve ever heard in my life!... The cow!!! Hee hee!
Anyway, review time...
I knew it was Ginny who was with Laurel! I can see that their friendship is going to be quite solid as they have similar personalities. That\'s like me and my best friend Jess, we get on so well because we\'re do similar, well, we\'re both crazy and no one else understands our crazyness so I think that\'s why! It was a nice touch adding Ginny to the mix in the whole Library thing! I think that she\'s going to be one of my absolute favourite characters in this story! She\'s so firey and sarcastic! I\'m loving it! And her seeing Harry in the shower *giggles* that\'s naughty, but so funny! Hee hee! I mean any sane girl would perve on a sexy guy in the shower if she could right?... or is that just me?! Hee hee!
Just so you know, you\'ve added my total and utter idea of a dream guy into this chapter! Blaise sounds like the guy I would go for in real life! (except for the whole magic thing!... Actually, thinking about it, a real life Blaise with magic powers sounds good to me too! Hee hee!) I\'m a sucker for bright blue eyes and dark hair and the fact that in this story they belong to a bad boy is all the better for me!! I think I have always told you that I go for bad boys without concious(sp?) thought. I hope that he\'ll be involved in the story some more and very soon hopefully! And maybe he\'ll have a nice Annie character draped on his arm...???!!! Hee hee! I loved the relationship that he and Draco seem to have. They seem to be the Slytherin version of Harry and Ron in that they know eachothers thoughts since they know eachother so well. It\'s nice that Draco has a best friend just like everyone else and that he\'s not been on his own before he found \'the golden group\'.
I loved Draco\'s arrongance in Gringotts. It\'s just like him to look down his nose at the people who are intended on serving him! (Look at me talking as if I know him personally! Hee hee! I\'m a geek!) I\'m glad that you\'ve kept his character similar to what it is in the books because so many fics that feature Draco seem to loose the whole essence of him that is captured in the books. You, however, are true to his original personality and make his changes and progressions believeable!
Anyway, I\'m going to stop babbling now before I go into the land of Annie and start writing utter nonsense that you won\'t understand! Hee hee! I loved this chapter and can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next! (Oooohhh... Lucius is coming and he\'s going to be pissed... I\'m scared!!) Please write soon!
Hope you\'re ok and that life is treating you well!!
Hugs and kisses,
AnineXxX
(P.S - Wow look at me go! It\'s such a long review! I hope I haven\'t bored you hun!)
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is awesome! I\'m in luv with your version of Draco. Hes so totally hot. Hes still a bad-boy but god is he goooood! keep going, can\'t wait for more.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy fricking cow, that chapter was h.o.t.
i already love to read about harry/draco teasings but this took it to a whole new level. i really like your laurel she\'s a cool cucumber and i like how she handels draco and harry so well.
this is a fun read, i\'ll be looking for new updates.
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i already love to read about harry/draco teasings but this took it to a whole new level. i really like your laurel she\'s a cool cucumber and i like how she handels draco and harry so well.
this is a fun read, i\'ll be looking for new updates.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice writing so far. Very enjoyable. I\'m glad I took the time to read this story finally. I\'m really digging it. I\'m off to read your other one now.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lorett,
I\'ve been lurking at your group the last couple of days, the thing you guys have going with the Ferret is hilarious. I like to lurk awhile before I jump in. But you\'ve def got some good discussions going on there. I havn\'t had as much time as I would like to read lately but I like the look of some of the recs too. Thanks for turning me onto it.
About this chapter I especially liked this line: \'if he had the proper mix, he could stave death, at least for now
I\'ve been lurking at your group the last couple of days, the thing you guys have going with the Ferret is hilarious. I like to lurk awhile before I jump in. But you\'ve def got some good discussions going on there. I havn\'t had as much time as I would like to read lately but I like the look of some of the recs too. Thanks for turning me onto it.
About this chapter I especially liked this line: \'if he had the proper mix, he could stave death, at least for now