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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY THERE GIRLFRIEND! ITS BEEN AGES SINCE I\'VE BEEN HERE, BUT I WANTED TO SAY HI AND LET YOU KNOW I\'M SITLL KEEPING TRACK AND CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEW CHAPTER.
YAY! FINALLY!
I\'LL BE SURE TO CHECK IN WITH YOU THEN.
CAN\'T WAIT!
M
YAY! FINALLY!
I\'LL BE SURE TO CHECK IN WITH YOU THEN.
CAN\'T WAIT!
M
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really awesome story. I just finished reading the whole thing and I can\'t wait for the next chapter. It\'s great. I love your Draco, he\'s captured my heart so completely. I\'ve never been a big Draco fan, but damn, you got me to fall for him.
Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story.....update soon!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey lorett! Great story! I love the whole romance coonfusion especially between Harry, Draco and Laurel.
Can\'t wait till eery one gets to Hogwarts. I feeling that\'ll be myy favorite part. Please hurry and update the next chapter!
P.S. I have to tell my sister about this fic, her name is Laurel!
Can\'t wait till eery one gets to Hogwarts. I feeling that\'ll be myy favorite part. Please hurry and update the next chapter!
P.S. I have to tell my sister about this fic, her name is Laurel!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! i Am sooooooo sorry i havnt reviewed all your chapters i feel absolutely awful! because they are all soo wonderful and i didnt review them again!grrrrrr im so annoyed i have absolutely no idea what happened with my interent my computer and my bloody parents! lol first i it just broke and didnt work at all and then the interent wouldnt work but for some annoying reason all the computers at school are restricted from the website! gah it sucks and my parents banned me because i spent too much time on it? i mean wtf? grrrrr but anyway im hear to praise your work as it is just a masterpiece and i love your story it just brilliant, good plot good new character good way of describin jk\'s characters! again im soooooooooooooooooooo sorry for leaving this soo late and i hope i can continue to keep a connection with you! luv ya hun xxxxxxxx
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. I hope Draco gets out before Lucius gets down there. I can\'t help but to think that Blaise will turn on Draco. He just kind of gave that vibe, when he was talking about the death eaters. I honostly thought Laurel was talking to Hermione, instead of Ginny.I was surprised. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY INTERESTING. The Heir Privilege, huh? Not bad, I say. Not bad at all.
The interaction with Yummie Blaise... yummie. You know me and triggered this: I could easily picture them kissing, and hugging and doing all the kinds of things you won\'t write about, but i LOVE reading about.
I\'m also glad that Laurel and Ginny will become friends...however, Hermione will be all by herself now.... and fighting over Yummie Harry.
The whole chapter is quite nice because it deals with important matters, it is filled with danger and yet, you managed to keep it flowing. They are aware of the danger, but act like adults. Cool.
Besos, peque
The interaction with Yummie Blaise... yummie. You know me and triggered this: I could easily picture them kissing, and hugging and doing all the kinds of things you won\'t write about, but i LOVE reading about.
I\'m also glad that Laurel and Ginny will become friends...however, Hermione will be all by herself now.... and fighting over Yummie Harry.
The whole chapter is quite nice because it deals with important matters, it is filled with danger and yet, you managed to keep it flowing. They are aware of the danger, but act like adults. Cool.
Besos, peque
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an AMAZINGLY long chapter...how do you do that? I can barely pull of 3000 words in two weeks! And you covered so much this time, too. Which brings me to my review: Let\'s see, where to begin, where to begin??
Ah...Blaise. So THIS is the Blaise you\'ve been talking about. Yet another talent secured for the Light (score!). You know, I don\'t remember whether you\'ve given us a reason for Draco\'s (and Blaise\'s, too, if it\'s different) betrayal towards Voldemort. All I remember was that he was keeping an eye on his father (for what I assume were personal reasons), and then the nightclub, where Laurel gave him an even greater incentive to switch his allegiences. So what is it just because he\'s a suave, cunning little bastard who saw which side was winning? Or does the guy actually have morals (I suppose he does - I mean, he put his life down for Harry twice)?
It\'s funny. I wonder what fuels this desire to change, to point in the other direction. In novels and books, it\'s always a bright, noble cause, one that seems almost sacrificial. But one who is \"dark\" usually has ambition as a leading quality, which is obviously entirely related to the self. \"Good\" is usually defined as \"protecting the whole\" or \"leaving egotistical thoughts behind to further the growth of the human race.\" It seems a bit outrageous to me to say that a person who is selfish and self-preserving will suddenly be ready to sacrifice themselves for a glorious cause, one that they fought just days or months or moments before. It doesn\'t seem possible. What could the Light have to offer agents of egotism? Of course, that\'s not to say that Draco was - or is - selfish. In fact, he seems just the opposite; you\'ve shown he was ready to die for Harry, the key to Voldemort\'s downfall. But again, nature vs. nurture. Draco was taught the ideas and hopes of the Death Eaters. Perhaps it wasn\'t labeled quite so glaringly, but Lucius essentially preached duty and cowardice (selfish in nature) and cunning. When you\'re young, innocence blinds you, and I\'m sure Draco took to these values as \"normalcy.\" He didn\'t know any better. So how did he find right from wrong? When did he evaluate his own definitions of good and evil, and decide which side to take? I can\'t believe that one is simply born \"good.\"
Sigh. Well, there I\'ve gone again, and completely ignored the plot points. My thoughts just run away with me sometimes - can\'t help it. Heh heh, oops. On another note, I KNEW IT WAS GINNY! After long and inconsistant thought, that is. I figured it out! She seems like a pretty spunky girl, and fun to be around. Her and Laurel\'s chemistry is great. Actually, I have a question about one of their conversations: \"I
Ah...Blaise. So THIS is the Blaise you\'ve been talking about. Yet another talent secured for the Light (score!). You know, I don\'t remember whether you\'ve given us a reason for Draco\'s (and Blaise\'s, too, if it\'s different) betrayal towards Voldemort. All I remember was that he was keeping an eye on his father (for what I assume were personal reasons), and then the nightclub, where Laurel gave him an even greater incentive to switch his allegiences. So what is it just because he\'s a suave, cunning little bastard who saw which side was winning? Or does the guy actually have morals (I suppose he does - I mean, he put his life down for Harry twice)?
It\'s funny. I wonder what fuels this desire to change, to point in the other direction. In novels and books, it\'s always a bright, noble cause, one that seems almost sacrificial. But one who is \"dark\" usually has ambition as a leading quality, which is obviously entirely related to the self. \"Good\" is usually defined as \"protecting the whole\" or \"leaving egotistical thoughts behind to further the growth of the human race.\" It seems a bit outrageous to me to say that a person who is selfish and self-preserving will suddenly be ready to sacrifice themselves for a glorious cause, one that they fought just days or months or moments before. It doesn\'t seem possible. What could the Light have to offer agents of egotism? Of course, that\'s not to say that Draco was - or is - selfish. In fact, he seems just the opposite; you\'ve shown he was ready to die for Harry, the key to Voldemort\'s downfall. But again, nature vs. nurture. Draco was taught the ideas and hopes of the Death Eaters. Perhaps it wasn\'t labeled quite so glaringly, but Lucius essentially preached duty and cowardice (selfish in nature) and cunning. When you\'re young, innocence blinds you, and I\'m sure Draco took to these values as \"normalcy.\" He didn\'t know any better. So how did he find right from wrong? When did he evaluate his own definitions of good and evil, and decide which side to take? I can\'t believe that one is simply born \"good.\"
Sigh. Well, there I\'ve gone again, and completely ignored the plot points. My thoughts just run away with me sometimes - can\'t help it. Heh heh, oops. On another note, I KNEW IT WAS GINNY! After long and inconsistant thought, that is. I figured it out! She seems like a pretty spunky girl, and fun to be around. Her and Laurel\'s chemistry is great. Actually, I have a question about one of their conversations: \"I
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I feel so bad for poor Draco. I wonder what good deeds he has been up to. Some kind of muggle underground thing? Rebellous Draco, emm, delicious. I also liked
the part about him being pale and sickly as a child because of his awful environment. But it\'s so sad about his mother, loyal but unloving. So sad.
Rain
the part about him being pale and sickly as a child because of his awful environment. But it\'s so sad about his mother, loyal but unloving. So sad.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome as always!!!! i love it. update soon!!!! my exams are over on tuesday, and i hafta help with freshie orientation on wednesday, but after that i am FREE!!!! yay. so yea. update soon!!!! *muah*
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