rate_review Reviews

Interesting, I only thought that the authors were college folk
and poeple who are just out on their own writting for the hell of
it, but know I\'m starting to grasp that the authors I like are married
and have young kids. Now I\'ve understood that the authors are much
older with teenagers, wow and I thought mothers were boring (now offense,
to my mother and you). I kind of like the dark look with the smanking, it
get\'s you\'re blood going. I know this is long, but I always write my reviews
like this just ask two authors that recongnized in their stories for them.
Try to kept going, it\'s incredibly excellent!

Age of consent. *rolls eyes and laughs* I love your story...For your first fan fiction I must say you captivate your audience well. Being that the whole idea is living in a fantasy world where rules can be broken...I see NOTHING wrong with what\'s going on. In real life, yes I\'d have issues...but for a juicy story where a bit of mischief is involved...I say bring it on.

This was a great chappie, update soon.

You can do no wrong in my book. Hot, hot, hot!!!

Oh my. This keeps getting better and better!

The age of consent thing really hasn\'t mattered for the last few chapters. I understand you not wanting Hermione to be 15, it works as it is. Don\'t worry about it, the whole story is fabulous!

I love it! I think you portray them perfectly! I hope you update soon :)

Ch 10 - ack! Severus and Hermione aren\'t the only ones upset about this cliffhanger! UPDATE! [Hmm, perhaps they can figure out a way to extend the potion??]

Oooh. That last chapter was exquisit. Beautifully written and such a great ending! Please update again soon.

*Fanning myself* Whew, this story gets better and better every chapter. Severus and Hermione have never been hotter together. Keep it up! =)

Oooh! Love love love it. Chapter 9 was so good. I have this listed on my recommended reading :-)