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for The Tutor

by rboothe

person greer
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM

That slap at the end was cute. I really enjoyed this fic!
person mamorucat
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
puurrfect. Nice. Extrordinary. Intriguing. Turns at every corner and very good use of magic knowledge. A+. btw THANK YOU for a new perspective on magic use and for this wonderfully good read.
person sorynliv
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story. I look forward to your next.
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely.
person Reikon
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha! That was great fun! Read it all in one sitting, I did! Oh great, that made me sound like Yoda.

Anyway, I loved it; you should write another like it. Unless, of course, you already have. Wait... it doesn\'t matter. Write another one anyway!

There were some minor grammar errors, but I love your syntax; specifically their dialogue. You\'re brilliant! Content overpowers grammar! Hooray! You make me happy. ^_^ Thanks for the uplift; I wasn\'t feeling so happy yesterday and I desperately wanted something to bring my moods up to their unnaturally high level again. I\'m going to go see if you have anything else.

Peace.

~Rei~
person Robin
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!! thank you so much for updating! I was literally starving. I not one who reviews often, but I have a review evening today. I think I just do that to make you write and post faster (*hint hint* - as you would put it) and don\'t worry, not every man doesn\'t see Snape and Hermione together ;-))
person LASAIR69
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED THIS STORY SOOO MUCH!!!
I AGREE WITH YOU, IT\'S BETTER WITH THE \"MINOR\'S\" NOT REALLY BEING MINOR BECAUSE IT\'S JUST TOO ICKEY, URGH, YUCK TO THINK ABOUT!!! ALSO BEXCAUSE SHE IS LEGAL SEXUALLY AND STILL AT SCHOOL THE TEACHER-STUDENT FRISSON IS STILL THERE. ONE OF NY UNI LECTURERS WAS SACKED COS HE WAS 55 AND HAS RELATIONS WITH A 30 YEAR OLD STUDENT, SO THE TENTIONS STILL THERE.
person LadyTigresa
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! Its over! Oh well...I really enjoyed this story, maybe you can make another one? Hehe just wondering...
person june
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... This is the first time I\'ve read smut that didn\'t dissapoint in one way or another. I\'m so sad that there isn\'t any more.

Brilliant work!
person Dawn
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is one of the best that I\'ve encountered in a long long while. It actually made me feel something for the way you portrayed Hermione and Severus. Continue writing other fanfics.