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for The Tutor

by rboothe

person snailexpress
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hrm...interesting... (In a good way, of course!) I don\'t think it\'s quite the type of situation I\'d ever be able to get Hermione into in my own head, but I was actually quite intrigued. I\'m curious - is this a one-shot? I\'d be most interested in seeing how this moment ends up affecting them afterwards - how they respond to each other in the corridors and in classes and such. Would he be a total bastard and use the power he now knows he has over her or would it turn into something more meaningful? How would she respond to having to come back for more tutoring later or if he *did* make some sort of advance? Or would *she* take the first steps, mortified or no? Anyway. Liked it. :)
person Jilly
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good please write more soon
I loved the end, I would have been horrified if it had suddenly been remorceful-snape at the end, but his last words were perfect
*shiver*
person pinkyheather
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, can\'t wait to read more of this. wickedly good.