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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great story please continue.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! As people have already pointed out, 17 is adult age in JK\'s wizarding world and in Britain 16 is the age of consent for sex, so, apart from the teacher-pupil standards of conduct, it is legally ok for Snape to lust after Hermione!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahhahahhaah. i dont think i\'ve ever laughed so hard when reading a severus/hermione fic. that was awesome :) hehehe. really good fic in general though. totttttttally hot :)
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Update soon please.
How about now?
How about now?
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good, I like the part about the hickey, it was
funny. I\'m most wondering what will happen in the mext chapter
about what Hermione will do to Severus and his body. Also what
will Severus do in return? Please update soon!!!
funny. I\'m most wondering what will happen in the mext chapter
about what Hermione will do to Severus and his body. Also what
will Severus do in return? Please update soon!!!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do realize, this means war? I love the terrified Snape, and I love the fact that he thinks of Albus first. And sneaky! Pinching her was a stroke of genius. Can\'t wait to see him limping through the next day: Hermione has the bit in her teeth, so to speak. I have a feeling it\'s going to be a bumpy ride.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - I love the way they both think they\'re so smart - he marks her with a hickey, and she\'s still sneaking in even after she knows that he\'s suspicious enough to confront Dumbledore. I hope they both win with a happy ending!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, simply fabulous update! You outdid yourself. I love the end of the last chapter. Poor confused Severus. Hehe. I can\'t wait to read what happens next. :)
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do believe I\'m blushing. That Was So Hot. And well written - you\'re rushing through the 2nd and 3rd chapters though aren\'t you? But still, I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE. HURRY UP AND FINISH WRITING IT. I need to go find my boyfriend, now, if you\'ll excuse me.
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful and HOT story! I enjoyed it very much.
There is as Nescafe (?) writes an age problem, wich disturbs a bit. Not only with Hermione turning 18, but also in canon a witch is of age when 17...
But except for that, I love Hermiones rather annoying personality, when it comes to goading SS into doing what she wants...
There is as Nescafe (?) writes an age problem, wich disturbs a bit. Not only with Hermione turning 18, but also in canon a witch is of age when 17...
But except for that, I love Hermiones rather annoying personality, when it comes to goading SS into doing what she wants...