rate_review Reviews

cliffhanger for ch 11's ending!
i really hope u'd continue.
it'd be too sad to not see Harry & Draco's lives be beta.
i like Eien n Severus, despite him being so harsh always.

Wait wait wait, I don't quite understand... first, where does Eien come from really? What is he?? Second, I thought that Harry and Draco were togheter during 7th year? So surely, Harry had nightmares about Vernon then, and probably was he dead already... and if what happenned with his uncle was after 7th year, it means Voldy died already, rendering the Death Eather attack in Surrey impossible (unless we're talking about strays), plus Harry was of age by then. So I dunno, maybe you could make up a timeline of the events in the next chapter, it's kinda confusing :S

Also.... strange that Sev knew that both Harry and Draco were alive, but failed to share the info with them. At least, learning about something like this Harry and/or Draco(who I agree isn't thinking staight right now) would at least blame Sev for not telling.

Soooo need chapter 12!

...-_-...cliffhanger!!! Cruelty. so finished with chapter 12 yet?

This story is awesome! Please UPDATE!!!

So want chapter 11!

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YOU BETTER BE UPDATING SOON, YOU HEAR?!?!?!? I like this story! Ohhh, so good! Please update soon; I want to know who is there!

Slashy Snitch

P.S: Where has your story been?!?! I haven't seen it before...but now I'm glad I have!

Oh I've gotta have more! I thought I had lost this story!

Whoooooooa. What the heck?

MORE PLEASE!

Yoor story is the first story from this site, that I actually took the time to review. Its really good, and when you get chapters ten and up please e-mail me, cause there is nothing more I hate, than a cliffhanger. Thanx