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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...needs more sex.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nah...this story seems angsty. Keep writing with it as long as you have inspiration!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oOo .... sounds very good! Since it was just an idea that popped into your head, I hope that you stay with it because it had caught me!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like it\'s going to be an addictive story! A fantastic start and a great idea. If you ever need anyone to read it before you publish it just let me know (I want to help but mainly I want to know what happens before everyone else ;) ) WELL DONE !!!!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pokes the EVIL PLOT BUNNY* MAKE HER WRITE MORE.... *gives plot bunnies lots of carrots and choclates and promises of being able to give them the world if they would make her write more///
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
I really thinkk that this is going to be
a wonderful story. Please update soon.
luna
I really thinkk that this is going to be
a wonderful story. Please update soon.
luna
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you\'ve got to update soon! I have to know what\'s going to happen. Can and will Severus help them? Please update! Great story by the way!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I have not read your other story yet, but I will. Because this beginning is excellent. Great job. Hope you continue it.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffie\'s. *g* Anyhow, this is a good start I can\'t wait to read more of it. Soon please.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for more of this story i am hooked already....please dont leave me too long. I would also like to thank your plot bunnies, this sounds like its gonna make a great story!