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for Draco 1/2 - Completed

by hermy

person Megan Consoer
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person jonny j
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
flaming bag of poo
person hermy
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Carolyn, thanks for your honest view and interest. :)

I wrote prologue at the end, because it hints at being a beginning anyhow. Is not life a cycle, and does anything really end? If it gets a bit too confusing for more readers, I\'ll probably change it to epilogue later on. I\'ll be sure to credit that one to you, too. LOL

I\'m just happy my story is readable and enjoyable. :)
person Hanna Delacour
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Chapter six was hysterical. I can\'t wait for the rest of this story. Update soon, I will be reading!
person dragonsgirl
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I liked the part when hermione turned herself into a tiger.
person carolyn
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, ooh, coool. The last sentence explained it all. I was about to say- \"Prologue? Erm.. You must mean the epilogue surely?\"

The fic wasn\'t bad, it was short and sweet. Not short like a one-shot.. but short and sweet for novel-length fics. =) There were some grammatical/sentence structure kinks here and there, but nothing a beta or long-time writing experience won\'t fix. And to be honest, I was pretty relieved when Draco got turned back into his male form. Nothing like good ole\' D/Hr smut.

Thanks for posting the story! GL in future endeavors.
person hermy
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your reviews, Carolyn and Hanna Delacour: I have done posting the rest of the chapters. Enjoy!

I wish I could have explored more of the relationship between Ron and Hermione through the picnic, before going on to Draco... but I was afraid the story would be a bit more long-winded than necessary. I hope the prologue has taken care of this need, though. Let me know if there are things I might need to improve on. I had a different story under a different username here, and the title was Teaching Draco Malfoy-- but I lost motivation to finish that chapter by chapter. SO, that taught me to finish a story BEFORE posting it online. Otherwise I would have starved fanfic readers roosting my hide over fire! I know that feeling, too. lmao

With gratitude,
Hermy (the author of this story you\'re reading these reviews for)
person carolyn
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... A year. Holy crockers. So maybe it isn\'t so much like Ranma. Unless you know.. someone accidentally pours hot water (or was it cold? It\'s been a long time since I\'ve watched it.) on Draco and finds out that water has suddenly magical qualities!! Ooh lala.
The story is written well so far, please continue!