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I like the story and all but it tends to skip around and there was the thing with Ron being happy about the relationship with Snape and then later evicting him from the dorm because of him not liking the fact that it was Snape. Other than that, pretty good.

Umm... WTF! First of all James Potter would not try and stab his son... we know that much so HTF!

Wow! Fantastic story! Couldn't stop reading. However, although it seems the story has the potential to become a threesome H/S/D I really dislike those stories because I am a firm believer of being faithful to at least one person at a time. Threesomes never work, I don't care how much you care for people. Human nature prevents something like that being permanent. All it takes is one little incident of jealousy and You love him/her more than me or you ALWAYS do this or that with Him/Her more than me blah blah blah....I hate threesomes. Please keep it HP/SS or whomever ur keeping Harry with. Just not all three please...I'll enjoy the rest of the story more then. Thanks!!

Absolutely LOVE this story! Just discovered it and have read all you have done so far. Your characterisation is excellent, you've taken them out of their canon characters yet still managed to maintain a high level of belief in their actions. The interaction between them all is also interesting to watch, I love the way you have got Hermione and Lucius together!

Your plot line is good so far as well, though slightly more expansion on the reasoning behind the Gryffindor's actions would be good as well; at the moment they seem to be pretty much hanging in statis. Will be interesting to see how you continue to manage the unfurling of the plot, particularly, from my interests anyway, how you manage the final battle and in many ways more importantly, the aftermath. I look forward to reading more and if you have some sort of update notification list, please do add me.

All the best,

The Princess

I thought the christmas gifts were so cute!!! Update this soon!!!

I love this story! Please update soon!

This fic is brilliant! The relationships are well thought out and executed amazingly. I also enjoyed how you've allowed there to be conflict, it makes the story that much better. I can't wait to read more.

I like where you're going with this! Can't wait to see where Hermione ends up...

So far great.

Very good! Though Lucius/Hermione was a little out of the blue...it was still done tastefully. Wonderful! Keep writing.