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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two (Three) review: Point of readability: Put a line between paragraphs; that will make it easier to read the story, and help break up the huge block of text you\'re ending up with.
Chapter Three (Four) review: Ahhh....you fixed the formatting; my eyes thank you! Ohh, now, Draco and Harry will be in close proximity...what will happen?
Chapter Three (Four) review: Ahhh....you fixed the formatting; my eyes thank you! Ohh, now, Draco and Harry will be in close proximity...what will happen?
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter, really brought it all out into the open.
I especially liked how you zoomed in on Ron\'s attitude of intolerance, a common situation in many fics. I wonder how it will come back to haunt him and Dean as well.
Great stuff, Please more?
I especially liked how you zoomed in on Ron\'s attitude of intolerance, a common situation in many fics. I wonder how it will come back to haunt him and Dean as well.
Great stuff, Please more?
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! and HAPPY CANADA DAY!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argghh!!! More!!!!:)
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Missy, it\'s McGonagall. ^_^
But other than that... I really like this story. Update soon?
But other than that... I really like this story. Update soon?
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read more of this. Please update it soon.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope for a threesome^^
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please write more
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please write more
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a refreshing and interesting story line! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Will Harry be in Slytherin? Will his relationship with Snape work out? How about his friendship with Draco? Hermione? OOOOOH... do continue onwards! Nifty stuff is all around.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should hurry up and get to the next chapter this story is great