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Oooh and the plot twists, Lucius and Hermione, i can't believe it, i've never read that pairing before and now i can't understand why as i can definitely see the possibilities. I'm so glad you decided to start working on this story again as i really enjoyed it when ya first started it, update soon please,
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Ella xxxxxx

Thanx for updating! It is good to see Lucius saving Hermione. She'll be so much better for him than Narcissa.

This is a wonderful story! Please keep it up!

I've been waiting for so long! Thank you for the update. Very good chapter.

Please update soon!


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good chapter, bye

I started reading this story late last night but when I tried to review, the server was temp. down. (shyly states: I fell asleep before it came back up *grin) I really like your story. It has my mind going in so many ways, trying to give myself answers that I KNOW that I will just have to wait for updates to get. I get the feeling that there just may be more between Hermionie and Lucius than we can see. Percy..a deatheater? I can plainly see that. After all, he is a pompas, social climbing, power hungry fool. What happens to the 3 boys now? They may have been under a curse to have done all they did to her but how much of the hate actually came from them? They could have also been under the curse when they treated Harry the way they did. *sigh So many ways of thinking and only your personal "Muse" knows for sure! Where is Ginny during all this? I don't think you have mentioned her at all, have you? hmmmmmmmm :)

Awesome chapter. This is one of the stories that I have been waiting on for a long time and I was so excited to see it updated. You certainly didn't disapoint. Keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon.

Ohhhh... I'm hooked on his story. Poor Hermione and Lucius, but thats nice that they're clinging together... I hope you update soon ^__^ (Oh, and you've been spelling McGonagall's name wrong- you spell it with a 'C', not a 'G' as it should be).

I'm only on chapter one...but the hairbrush thing made me feel like i should comment before i forgot. You should NEVER EVER put something in someones mouth if they are having a seizure or convulsions as you put it....they will NOT swallow their tongue and they or the person trying to put something in their mouth can be hurt. Please change that in the fic because it can be really damaging if someone in real life finds themselves in the situation and attempts to mimic what they read happening in your fic.
Please trust me on this one...

I really am enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I like the way you've written Severus, Harry, Draco, and Lucius. Keep up the wonderful work.~Sophia