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January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This should really be in threesomes and moresomes since it turns into SS/HP/DM. Some people don't like threesomes so there should be, at least, a warning in the summary or the first chapter. I realize this story is really old but perhaps people will see this before they read it so they won' be offended.
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have enjoyed your story hun,
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant fic! You even managed to convince me of the Hermione/Lucius pairing.
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In response to the second chapter: Chapter 1 (Harry's night terror)
Just thought I'd make note of this, since the general public seems to be woefully misinformed on this topic.
IT IS NOT POSSIBLE TO SWALLOW YOUR TONGUE. Not while convulsing, not even by trying to on purpose. It is physically impossible. The act of putting something in the mouth of someone seizing is pure "Hollywood medicine" and shouldn't be done because it can wreck the person's teeth, not to mention the person trying to do so runs the risk of getting a very bad bite. It is likely that a person will bite their tongue while seizing, but it is much better to do that than to possibly damage your teeth. Not to mention, sticking something in their mouth makes it harder for them to breathe, and it is already hard enough to breathe while in convulsions.
Also, YOU SHOULD NEVER RESTRAIN A PERSON IN CONVULSIONS, unless it is an emergency. Restraining them usually makes them panic more, plus they are more likely to injury themselves if you hold them back. Not to mention, once again, that the person trying to do so will probably get a good whack.
As a person who has dealt with epilepsy, it is disheartening to see these malpractices continue to spread. I just thought I'd inform you. Sorry if I came off as kind of rude, but this is just something I feel strongly about.
Besides all this, I like your story thus far and will definitely keep reading.
Just thought I'd make note of this, since the general public seems to be woefully misinformed on this topic.
IT IS NOT POSSIBLE TO SWALLOW YOUR TONGUE. Not while convulsing, not even by trying to on purpose. It is physically impossible. The act of putting something in the mouth of someone seizing is pure "Hollywood medicine" and shouldn't be done because it can wreck the person's teeth, not to mention the person trying to do so runs the risk of getting a very bad bite. It is likely that a person will bite their tongue while seizing, but it is much better to do that than to possibly damage your teeth. Not to mention, sticking something in their mouth makes it harder for them to breathe, and it is already hard enough to breathe while in convulsions.
Also, YOU SHOULD NEVER RESTRAIN A PERSON IN CONVULSIONS, unless it is an emergency. Restraining them usually makes them panic more, plus they are more likely to injury themselves if you hold them back. Not to mention, once again, that the person trying to do so will probably get a good whack.
As a person who has dealt with epilepsy, it is disheartening to see these malpractices continue to spread. I just thought I'd inform you. Sorry if I came off as kind of rude, but this is just something I feel strongly about.
Besides all this, I like your story thus far and will definitely keep reading.
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love the relationships and issues in this story. Nice plot with wonderful twists. I would love to see a sequel. Please write some more.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful,and very well written. I do hope there will be more in the future because this is a story that I would really like to see more of.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. I hope there is a sequel. Even a small one, I would love to know what Fudge or Ron would have to say about Harry running for Minister. One thing- You bring in Ginny for all of five seconds when they are in the chamber but nothing else is said about her at all to the end of the story. It was random and didn't fit into the story very well.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful would love to see a sequel thanks for the reading
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No not fin! Can't be fin!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please...this is really good so far. So much for convincing Harry he isn't ready to face Voldemort.