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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m new to this story and after only 7 chapters I\'m hooked!!! This isn\'t like anything I\'ve seen before. It weaves so many different elements together as to almost be a new creation. I can\'t wait to read what else is written. Thank you.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can just imagine the household is in an uproar, but frankly I don\'t blame Cy. I\'d hide out from all of that too. ...in fact it rather amuses me that he has probably seriously freaked out/worried some of the other \"unflappable\" personalities. *amused*
It is so very, VERY wrong that I found that Dementor/Harry kiss so...lovely. And attractive. OOH, and they\'ve certainly turned into pretty beings- it doesn\'t appear to be permanent; is it, or not? Why did it fade off the other two and not the Dementor Lord; because he is the one who kissed Cy? It faded off him later... Can Cy make it permanent?
So Cy\'s arm will never be entirely healed? It\'ll still be somewhat fragile and sensitive to magic?
The Primordal Beings sure have quite the tale to tell, and quite a history. It is fascinating and wonderful to learn about. You\'ve created a fantastic universe and background. It\'s just incredible.
GO CY! I so love that he\'s not letting them think him a tool.
And Ascyltus/Harry is the hottest thing... But Voldemort is the jealous type, and I\'m such a Voldemort/Harry fan... I hope this won\'t cause a lot of rifts between them, and I can\'t help but wonder if Voldemort or Cy will say something about Ascyltus. And what would be said..? Are they going to break up (only to get back together later, of course, if that vision Cy had is true) or just fight, or even talk about it, or will it just pass by them silently? And is Ascyltus a permanent fixture for Cy, or temporary? *so curious*
This Keiran character is interesting! I like him already.
Cy is so proud, though I wonder if he\'ll be able to hide his one \"weakness\" from his, er, family, forever? Won\'t Morgan die? She has lived a long time by this point, and she is mortal isn\'t she?
\"Even blindfolded and drunk Cyriacus could take all of them with both hands tied behind his back and under the influence of a Befuddlement Charm.\"
...this just had me laughing hysterically. Oh god. GOOD LINE! *amused*
Keiran the vampiric Master is jealous? *grin* Cy just surrounds himself with jealous men, doesn\'t he? Makes me wonder if Ascyltus is the jealous type.
This was an absolutely fabulous chapter! I loved every facet of it. Every single letter and word. I can\'t wait to see how the Dark Congress works out. :D Wonderful work, unsurprsingly. And still always leaving me on the edge of my seat even when it\'s not really a cliffhanger.
Oh! I did get your email last chapter and did plan on responding (I still will unless you don\'t want me to). Sorry it\'s been so long. My email has kind of gone insane with large amounts of mail. *sheepish*
So much love for you!
Bryt
It is so very, VERY wrong that I found that Dementor/Harry kiss so...lovely. And attractive. OOH, and they\'ve certainly turned into pretty beings- it doesn\'t appear to be permanent; is it, or not? Why did it fade off the other two and not the Dementor Lord; because he is the one who kissed Cy? It faded off him later... Can Cy make it permanent?
So Cy\'s arm will never be entirely healed? It\'ll still be somewhat fragile and sensitive to magic?
The Primordal Beings sure have quite the tale to tell, and quite a history. It is fascinating and wonderful to learn about. You\'ve created a fantastic universe and background. It\'s just incredible.
GO CY! I so love that he\'s not letting them think him a tool.
And Ascyltus/Harry is the hottest thing... But Voldemort is the jealous type, and I\'m such a Voldemort/Harry fan... I hope this won\'t cause a lot of rifts between them, and I can\'t help but wonder if Voldemort or Cy will say something about Ascyltus. And what would be said..? Are they going to break up (only to get back together later, of course, if that vision Cy had is true) or just fight, or even talk about it, or will it just pass by them silently? And is Ascyltus a permanent fixture for Cy, or temporary? *so curious*
This Keiran character is interesting! I like him already.
Cy is so proud, though I wonder if he\'ll be able to hide his one \"weakness\" from his, er, family, forever? Won\'t Morgan die? She has lived a long time by this point, and she is mortal isn\'t she?
\"Even blindfolded and drunk Cyriacus could take all of them with both hands tied behind his back and under the influence of a Befuddlement Charm.\"
...this just had me laughing hysterically. Oh god. GOOD LINE! *amused*
Keiran the vampiric Master is jealous? *grin* Cy just surrounds himself with jealous men, doesn\'t he? Makes me wonder if Ascyltus is the jealous type.
This was an absolutely fabulous chapter! I loved every facet of it. Every single letter and word. I can\'t wait to see how the Dark Congress works out. :D Wonderful work, unsurprsingly. And still always leaving me on the edge of my seat even when it\'s not really a cliffhanger.
Oh! I did get your email last chapter and did plan on responding (I still will unless you don\'t want me to). Sorry it\'s been so long. My email has kind of gone insane with large amounts of mail. *sheepish*
So much love for you!
Bryt
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I offer to make a big fancy turkey dinner with all the trimmings, do you thik Smut!Muse would come visit? I love that Cy\'s feeding and eating at the same time! Will the convoluted craziness in his blood be a problem for Scourge? I love how things are setting up!! Will we be seeing Viktor\'s first overtures soon? Thanks for this amazing update-I eagerly anticipate the Oct. edition!!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. *hums happily* We see yet ANOTHER side of him and meet another new character as well. I\'m utterly pleased and can\'t wait for more. *slips you some rope to tie down the sluttiness muse*
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!! can\'t wait for more!!!!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!! Are you going to have Voldemort get on to harry for kissing the D.L.? I really do love this story. I hope you update soon. very good chapter , the best so far. I think. can\'t wait til the next one. please update as soon as you can.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!! Are you going to have Voldemort get on to harry for kissing the D.L.? I really do love this story. I hope you update soon. very good chapter , the best so far. I think. can\'t wait til the next one. please update as soon as you can.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello, good story, I love it, and poor Cy his life is really fucked up, I hope it end well for him, bye
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i think i may have reviewed this before, none the less, i am thoroughly enjoying this story. every chapter brings about a new twist, new surprises.