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for The Secret of the Malfoy Name

by Wickedmay

person thrnbrooke
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 16. Harry gets it. But man that\'s got to hurt. So what happens next?
person ice
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello friend. I really like your fic. I think that you have a really awesome plot and ideas to go along with it. But, you really need a beta. And if you already have one, get rid of that person, they\'re not doing a proper job. You have a tendency to confuse meanings of words. Like for instance you use the word sole, when you should have used soul. Sole is a bottom of a shoe, so be careful.

ice
person sallie
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor boys. I hope Luscious doesn\'t catch them.
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like Hera! Can\'t wait for chapter 15! Poor Draco. He is so confused and taking Harry along with him.
person warconq
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t expecting such a quick begining for Draco and Harry but then again Draco already knew about Harry and just had to get used to the idea. Hope to see more soon. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
person sallie
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draky kiss Harry NOW!!!....again.
person ura
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh they\'ve done it! They\'ve left Malfoy Manor. What will they do now? Can they protect Hera and keep her hidden? Probably should keep her away from Dumbledore too!
person warconq
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the buddings of love. I kinda\' wished that he has asked Malfoy to cut his hair every morning. I not a big fan of the Harry hair. Hope to read more. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! They\'re going to pull a Weasley and take Hera out of Malfoy Manor. But how? Will they succeed and where will they hide her? What happens next? Need chapter 13!