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Ack! A cliffhanger! Oi! Trot out the next chapter!

Please and thank you very much. I\'m liking your story, in case you had trouble interpreting that negative reaction (it was withdrawl, not criticism). I like the premise of the diary, and I\'m hoping that Snape\'s proclivity for heroics (no matter how he despises them) will win over the urge to take up Hermione as a sex toy. I mean, I rather enjoy a steamy H/S scene, but it\'s better when his heart is moved as well as his bits.

Ch 9 - what!?! Why doesn\'t he tell her that it was LUCIUS, using Polyjuice to imitate Draco?? It might help her to feel more grateful to Severus, but more importantly, she should know how dangerous it can be to go alone outside when Voldemort wants her as a potions ingredient. For her safety, she should know. And it would help Severus gain brownie points iwth her.... Okay, I\'m waiting for the next chapter!

I have read your most recent chapters, and they\'re very intriguing. I quite enjoy the moment that Hermione\'s illusions are dashed, as she brushes her now blond locks... Nicely done.

Wonderful story, I\'ve read it all in one sitting and will be adding it to my favorites to follow!

~Lisa

Brilliant i must say and need i crave more updates soon!

Ch 8 - ack! so Lucius is using Polyjuice to imitate Draco and kidnap Hermione for Voldemort\'s potion? I\'m glad Severus suspects something, but if he thinks he can be \"romantic, patient and gentle\" he should\'ve said something to her about he did not approve of Malfoy breaking her wrist. I do hope Severus rescues Hermione before Lucius takes her away. Thanks for the chapter!

This is a good story with an interresting plot. Very different kind of story and I\'m enjoying it. I like Lucius too! He seems quite in character so far and I certainly do appriciate that you aren\'t making Dumbledore into a matchmaker who\'s practically fluffing the pillows for Snape to bed a student.

Have a nitpick though... the \"<<\" things instead of quotation marks is very jarring and is interrupting the flow of an otherwise good story. Would it be possible to use quotation marks as quotation marks instead of the << >> thingies? Proper punctuation makes a big difference on how a story flows when one reads it and it\'s driving me a little nuts to get through it.

Ch 7 - ack! Your chapters always make me want MORE!!!!! Okay, so the secret Severus wants from the book can destroy Voldie AND the book also has a secret (another different secret?) that can keep Voldie alive. Has Severus or Lucius been the one making Voldie\'s Strenghtening Solution? So Lucius is going to make his own Polyjuice so he can go \"shopping\" to get a girl to donate an \"ingredient\" and Voldie does NOT want it from a Hogwarts

I really like the story, although I think the chapters are a bit short near the end. Poor Hermione. I seriously hope she won\'t be blonde throughout the story!

It\'s a bit strange reading with the European <<\'s, but i got used to it eventually.

I can\'t stand reading WIP\'s and I\'m glad this story\'s finished. How often do you update?

Woohoo! me lovies!!! Hee hee, Hermione as a blue eyed blonde, you have to love it. BTW, Epona was the godess of the horse and fertility.