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for When Lines Are Blurred

by DivineAngel

person Sarah123
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh so good! Thank you for updating. More soon please.
person LadyMalfoy
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... TMI (too much info) on Rons part... hehehe... update soon. i can\'t wait to see where this goes!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where is my update? come on love the story
person LadyMalfoy
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! Update soon! omg that was such a tease!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great great story!!! update soon
person Pinkpig
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This rocks! keep writing.
person me
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person LadyMalfoy
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRR! Omg i love this story!!! It\'s great! malfoy\'s actions are so hot! pressing her into him, pushing her onto the sink, his body almost touching hers. And OMG! The hottest part was when he was watching her and just the way you described his hand running down his stomach, into his trousers and grasped his hard member... i got chills! I REALLY hope you update soon!
person addicted
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great. I hate that it again was such a tease but ohhh so good. need more. update. please, update
person addicted
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great. I hate that it again was such a tease but ohhh so good. need more. update. please, update