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for When Lines Are Blurred

by DivineAngel

person Narcissa Black
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The unpopular ending being with Justin, I presume? Sometimes the nice guy, the dependable one, who remembers to buy diapers and puts the toilet seat down so you don\'t fall in during the middle of the night, deserves to get the girl. I would like to read that.
person lilil
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been a long time since my first review! Im happy to read it again! REALLY GOOD! 4++ star
person slyswn
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still brilliant. rock on!
person Sarah123
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! God, you\'re good :-) More please! And please say it\'s not nearly over, you\'re so cruel.
person Shmee
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco sure knows how to kill the mood. Seriously, that was uncalled for. Then again, if he hadn\'t said that then Hermione wouldn\'t have done one of the best things I have ever seen. That was hilarious! I almost fell out of my chair reading that. me -> XD Well I am glad to see that the boys are starting to behave and that getting over the whole Draco factor. I can\'t wait for the ball.

-Shmee
person slyswn
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah sometimes dragon\'s gotta vent,lol

loved it !
person slyswn
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How I love it when this couple is in denial

keep it coming
person bob
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oOOOOOo He wants her BAAAAAAD!!!!
I gots no clue where this one is going, to be honest, I usually figure out what the end of a story will be before the end.
For some reason i\'m all clueless.
I kinda feel bad for Ron, I really think he loves her, but I dont see why he would care so damn much about whether they do it again. It is her choice afterall.
update soon!
-bob
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah that\'s great. I loved it. I\'m glad you updated, this chapter was worth the wait. I can\'t wait for another one. Don\'t disappoint me girl!! ;)
person libby
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao cute end to the chapter, i liked it.. :D

update asap! hehe

take care


lib