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by velvetjules

person Loni
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry you idiot! Oh my god please update soon i HAVE to know what happens next! *runs around room of requirement yelling 'i need draco malfoy! bring him back!'*
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After not updating for so long (only teasing! I love your story) you then decide to leave on a truly EVIL cliffy?!?!?! Not fair! Please update soon!!!! Happy endings! Make them realize they love each other will ya?
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
person Sorceress14
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you FINALLY updated!!! I love this story to bits and I'm so happy it's back up and running! Well here's what I have to say about your latest chapter: OH NO! Poor Draco! *cries uncontrollably* I hope that Harry is somehow able to save him from wherever it is he sent him and that they will make up. It's neither of their fault's, it bloody Dumbledore's! I understand that he wants draco on the good side but he shouldn't resort to using the dark side's tactics to do it. He should have realized that something like this would happen! I feel so bad for Harry, feeling like his whole life, he's just a been a silly little part of the grownup's game. I hope that they show Dumbledore and everyone else that they are more and that they are proven wrong and left to apologize. This made me feel as though maybe Dumbledore should have died and that all my tears over him were wated even though this isn't really canon. And it all had to happen right after Harry caught Draco back up in the Room of Requirement, it was soooo sweet! I was also a happy to see that it was not fate or anything so cliche that brought Harry and draco together but their unbidden lust for each other (I remember at the beginning it said something like the people chosen to partner were meant to be together). And GO Neville, the sly dog!!! Finally, I just hope that everything works out okay! Please don't make us wait as long as the last time for an update, I really can't wait to see what happens next! Happy writing!

P.S. Sorry for the long review, I got a bit overexcited, lol.
person TotalFan
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Velvet Blood that was excellent. I read all the chaps non-stop, never stop writing. :) I about jumped up and down when I noticed you updated right while I was reading it, Lucky. This story is totally hot and now the intrigue intensifies, cool.
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want him back! I want him back! I want him back! WHERE IS DRACO!?!?!?!? Cool story, by the way.
person xx batboy
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AN UPDATE! THANK YOU!!! *scurries off to read*
person ura
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of, poor Draco. Harry has to control his temper no matter what.

Nice chapter.
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm Oops?

Well that can't be good now can it. Well then that was diffnelty worth the wait between chapters. Please continune writing this i love this story.
person Sahira
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!!! Update:)
person citizen
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! What happened to Draco?! Is he okay?! Poor Harry, he's probably going to feel like crap for that. Please tell me you're updating soon!!?? Please?