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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person Priss368
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you updated! This fic not only has lots of sexual tension, but I find it to be hilarious as well! Those two boys crack me up with their constant bickering! Please update soon as I can\'t wait to find out their reactions to the book (or to the next part of their classwork)! Priss
person TheWayTheWorldEnds
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is quite.. different to say the least! i like it so far; can\'t wait to see where it goes
person Yanic
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At first when I read about this fic. I thought: Well, it might be good. But after reading it, I have to tell you this story is AWESOME! I love the plot and your characters are *beleiveable* I can totally see them acting the way you have them behaving. And it\'s so original, too! I can\'t wait to see how they handle their first kiss! Excellent story can\'t wait to read more
person y0urotherleft
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo update soon!! damn, i really like where this is going, please update soon!
person kaesaku
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update! update!
\'love ur plot~ ;p
can\'t wait for their class\' next topics..
bwahahahahaha.. ;p
person bananagirl
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m such a pervert! I read the line \"Harry felt something indescribable tug at him at the other boy\'s obvious humiliation\" and thought that meant that he got turned on by humiliated!draco :D
person scrptedending
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally implausible.... but amazing so far! keep it up! def. one of my favorite stories for the moment.
person eve/roarke
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this supposed to be funny?????????? You are forcing Malfoy and Potter to be gay encluding anal etc.,
in front of a audience of fellow witches and wizards.

Do you honestly think this is not sick. Not funny and in my mind the story does not work, if someone has
not applied other persons applying can not count, especially on such a personel subject.

I\'ve no problems with slash, with Harry and Draco stories, this just does not ring true, perhaps you got
Dumbledore out of the way knowing he would have not allowed it.
person -Damaged-
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! i\'m certainly getting addicted to this story! i URGE you to update soon! i\'m dying for more!

-Damaged-
person CiraArana
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... interesting. I like those few, simple sentences where becomes obvious that neither of them feels as much aversion to the whole thing
as they say. So, I\'m really looking forward to what comes next. What has Harry read in the book? (yes, I can imagine, but my imagination is...
erg, let\'s leave it at that, \'kay? *g*). And why does Lavender hate Neville?? I hope you update soon. :-)
Cya, CiraArana