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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person Poicale
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! I love how this little story that seemed so fluffy has gotten much deeper. I like Neville in this story and I hope Lavendar wakes up to how great he is. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!
person Nacha
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You keep the story interesting. The twist of events in the last chapter makes me want to know what will follow.

Will there be anything else or is it over?

Thanks
person Krystal
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to tell you that you have a great story. I hope that you continue to write.
person yaoi fanatic
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! pls pls pls write a lemon with harry and draco! update soon!
person Lisa
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful chapter! Very interesting, especially the scene with Dumbledore (that was the major scene anyway), and oo-la-lah, Lavender will have to give in to him eventually. The Goblet set that fate. Can\'t wait for the next update!
person Jenny
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent; please don\'t stop!! I check this at least four tiems a day to see if you\'ve updated; let tomorrow be the day that doesn\'t disappoint?!
person Lalo
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! I love the fic so far. It\'s so unique. You\'re not even doing the annoying cliches in Harry Potter fanfiction. I\'m very pleased with the story so far, and you should be too. I always fear before clicking on a fic that it\'s going to be god awful and I\'ll never be able to read whatever ship again...

It happened with a Hr/R story... terrible, just terrible and then I fell to the dark side where H/D is practically all I will read. Oh, SaberShadowKitten has you on her reccomendation list. That\'s how I found \'Sex Magic\' - I\'m sure you already knew that though. Anyway, I\'ll bookmark your author page because I\'m so pleased with your writing. Take care and keep writing!

Sex Magic probably wasn\'t mentioned in the books because JKR didn\'t want to scare the kiddies. (hahaha)

-Lalo
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeee
person Crazy Devilish Angel
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it took me a while to read all of the chapters, i\'ve been busy and not much online, but i always hope that when i do get online you\'ve updated this story! i just love it, please!!!!!!! update soon! xx Angel
person Jemi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. You took something that had the potential to be nothing more than a humorous, WIP/PWP and turned it into something so much more. You\'ve captured the awkwardness of \'exploring\' and \'experimenting\' between, not only two young men, but teenagers in general. You\'ve managed to mix in uncertainty about sex and romance, making it believable. I like your teacher, Rosemary Mason, she seems like such an interesting individual. I love this story. Until next time.

Jemi