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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person amy
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pounces* thank you!!! thank you!!! thank you!!! thank you!!! I\'d almost lost hope that you would update T___T I like how you\'re making them both so insecure.
person Fred.
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. this story is good:D
*hypnotizes* uuupdaaate, you shaaaall uuuupdaaaaate!

I really like the idea:P and I think the teacher is acting supspiciously hehe I\'m onto her!

Fred. -Is a girl.
person Lady Vulcan
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m truly enjoying this story! Well done, m\'dear, well done indeed. I would dearly love to be added to that mailing list you mentioned. My address is sailorvulcan@hotmail.com Keep up the good work. You\'re one of the reasons I haunt AFF. ^^v
person Pamela
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I\'ve been waiting (very *impatiently*, I might add) for another chapter for ages (well, maybe not ages..but I tend to exaggerate)!!!! This story is absolutely wonderful and I can\'t wait for the rest of it! Update again soon^__^
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting better and better every time I read it. Please update soon. I can\'t wait to find out what happens between Draco and Harry next. This is really well done...thanks for the update!
person Savvy
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I saw you updated! I mean you have no idea! I was really thrilled! Keep up the fantastic work! This story is truly original. I look forward to the next installment!
person Zentiis
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squirms jitterly* update! need an Update!
person Shinigami Clara
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
albus!? the teacher is albus dumbledore!?? hahaha... crazy meddling old man :P i\'ll just continue reading, i thought that i should just express my amusment is all :P

~shinigami Clara
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooooow. hot. AND *good*. will you marry me?

or at least keep writing your wondrous story! my god, this is a treature. a smutty story with plot and character development and intriguing little ideas. i\'m looking forward to seeing what kind of power draco and harry can create... and how! mmm. i especially like that you don\'t skip over the difficult parts, particularly the finicky consent issue. god, leave it up to hermione to say \"that constitutes rape!\" you did a good job with the scene w/ mcgonnagal, i thought, but in the end, i don\'t *totally* buy it -- that harry would be forced to take a sex class he hadn\'t signed up for -- but then again it is the wizarding world and they\'re awfully quaint about their goblets and such. i guess i would have liked to see a little bit of harry thinking \"i could just not go...\" and then rationalizing his way out of it. also, i caught that thing with professor mason testing out the veritaseum on herself... did you decide not to go in that direction? (or am i reading more into that you meant?) i\'m confused. but you probably know what you\'re doing!

by the way, have you read Amanuensis\' Rituals and Traditions? actually it\'s not anything like your story and i\'m *definitely* not implying that yours is a rip-off in any way, shape, or form, but it does go into the sex magick idea (very nicely indeed!) i was reading a fic the other day that had something about that in it but i forget where it was... *sigh* stupid fics, always disappearing off into the ether... ohhhh. maybe i\'m thinking of ivy blossom\'s humor fic where d&h save the world... repeatedly ;-) heh.

so, in conclusion, THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY NIGHT and please, please, PLEASE keep working on this one. it\'s not everyday a fic like this one comes along, blending newfound lust and falling-in-love-ness and wit and humor so adeptly.
*kisses and chocolate*
-the pirate boi
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
p.s. that moment on the stairs... i think you have just given me my first weak-kneed Neville moment... !