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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person Miya Sparrow
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its interesting, please update. its also emtional...in a good way, but please update.
person Cinquefoil
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very enjoyable; the characters are well-drawn and the dialogue is witty, not to mention sexy.
Please add me to your mailing list if at all possible.
person duckeyedfool
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story, loving it, please update soon, and could you add me to the mailing list.
person Fefs
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was on the way to lose my mind waiting for your update you know... I love this fic! Is so original!! And those things people said about it are just wrong.. Of course harry would be forced to shag Draco like he was forced on the fourth year! And Neville my be calm, be those people are the worse when they get pissed with something, and that girl urhhh she is so infuriating so is completely in character for Neville to snap at her... If she say something like that to someone who is less calm then him that person would slap her!! I know i would...
Well, please update soon, ok? Oh.. and if this site don\'t make it (lets just wish that won\'t happen) please tell me if you are publishing this in any other site? Thanks! Hugs!
person Iza
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I LOVE your story!! hehe aww poor Draco and Harry...they must be really sexually frustrated by now ^_^ This story is awesome...it\'s very well written. I have a love/hate thing for the story though...I LOVE how you\'re taking time for their relationship to progress...but I also hate it for the reason that when the chapter is over i want more NOW!! ^_^;; anyways keep up the good work and HOORAY for Harry/Draco pairings!!!!!!!!!!

P.S can you add me to your mailing list PLEASE?? =)
person R
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have a couple things to say. First of all, please, please, PLEASE don\'t listen to those crazy people who are over analyzing your plot. I mean really who cares if Harry didn\'t put his name in the goblet, it ended up there and that\'s it (it\'s really not that big of a deal!) Besides, shouldn\'t the awesomeness (and smutty goodness) of the plot overshadow that silly little detail? And I stress the word awsome when refering to your plot, it\'s highly original which in itself is amazing because a lot of H/D fics that I\'ve read have very similar plots (I mean there\'s only so many times I can read about Draco being a veela and Harry being his mate, you know?). Secondly I would absolutely love to be added to your mailing list (it would make my day). My e-mail address is gaggle7938@yahoo.com.

Now on to more important things like how awesome this chapter was. When I saw that you updated I was so excited, and I must say this chapter was worth the wait. I can\'t believe Harry admitted he\'s starting to have feelings for Draco, I didn\'t think he would so soon, I thought he\'d be in denile a little longer (it was a pleasent suprise!!) And I can\'t believe Harry and Draco are ahead in the class!! Amazing chapter, I\'m looking foward to chapter nine! Keep up the great writing and PLEASE update soon (pretty pretty please?)!!!
person Closet Skeleton
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh man, I am *loving* this story! *happy dance*

I mean, seriously. I do. And I love the way Harry told Hermione about Dumbledore - that was freaking brilliant! And Draco and Harry having gotten farther in the class than everyone else? MWA HA! I am seriously loving this. I am.
person Duckie
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story. It is well written and seems to be well thought out. Please sent me an email when you get close to updating again. I check the site everyday, there are of course other fics I am reading but I\'d still like to know when to expect another update. Thanks bunches!!
Duckie
person Moon*Wolf
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic recently and I love it. If you can e-mail me when you update I\'d appreciate it. Thanks. And I can\'t wait to see what you have in store next.

Moon*wolf
person Mikke
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really one of those story where i get stuck on it, and can\'t keep my eyes away. In all it was really enjoyable to read. Nothing bugging me (which is saying something). And that scene with Dumledore was better than any other I\'ve read with him on this site. (I even got that impatient feeling when I read the last chapter and discovered that it wasn\'t finished.)
A good way to spend the night...