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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person eve/roarke
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant rew chapter, I like the way you go from low lemons to just talking
with Neville and Lavender, they are really sweet together. More please?
hopefully soon. Best wishes.
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must I say how much I love this? Because I love this. :D
person Lenny
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH!!! IT WAS GOOD YET TOO SHORT!!!!! I WANT MOOOORRREEEEE!!! ...ok ignore my greedy side. it was really a good chapter tho i was kinda disappointed at the lack of \"action\"...but thats ok!!! ^_^ i loved it!!! and i thought it was pretty cool cause i was reading the other chapters yesterday, wondering when you\'d update...and you updated today!!!!! hehe well i must be going...but again GOOD JOB!! and sugar quills to you!!! please update soon!! i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
person Reyn
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL. Poor Malfoy is such a virgin...kind of interesting how Potter\'s ready to try and bend the rules tho.
person sbkar
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Flames should be ignored! I read all the way to Chapter 10, and find this story entertaining,
and sweet. Sod the ignorant...Write for those of us to actually enjoy a good read, hmmm?
person Demon
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good i like the way that the plot is going
person Yanic
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God! An update! and now you leave us hanging again! Damnit Draco and Harry need to have some extracurricular fun!
person Mistress Titania
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am just loving this story! It\'s great that there is smut with plot. I can\'t wait to read about more of the lessons. I\'ve always seen Draco as more of a submissive type, with a father like Lucius he would almost have to be to survive. Keep up the wonderful writing! I look foward to the next update.
person Danielle
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story. The sexual tension is making me hot, lol! The story has humor/sex and it still has a plot. Loving the Neville and Lavender coupling, it soo cute. Can\'t wait to see what happens next in the next lesson. Update soon.
person tilly
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know there is a reason for draco being submissive but i think it would be even better if harry was the submissive one. it always amazes how fanfic writers have harry being the virginal shy guy but then have him as a dominant. it makes no sense. at least to me. i\'m sorry if this sounds like a flame, it wasnt meant to be one. i still love the concept of the story. :)