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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person jess
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! this is good and fun

poor harry and draco yet their lucky

hopefully harry will be able to change dracos side
person Chilly
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? I need something good to read now that i\'ve finished the halfblood prince! please please update, I love your story. Most stories with good smut like yours are totally unbelievable and jump to differnent parts too rapidly. Yors is perfect!
person Lena
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say, this is an amazing story and I have enjoyed it SO much so far. You\'re writing it in such a unique and original way, which is great and really refreshing. The characters are funny and believable, and so is their dialogue (which is HARD to do, and equally rare!) I haven\'t gotten a chance to review before this, and for that I\'m very sorry. But I\'ve reread what you\'ve written so far at least 4 times now, while I waited for the addition of chapter 11. So I really hope that you haven\'t given up on this story, because I think it\'s really spectacular and an update would make my day (possibly even my week if there was a hot Harry/Draco scene included!) Even if you have abandoned the fic, thanks so much for the enjoyment I\'ve gotten out of it anyways.
person Ayla
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really would wish you to update this story more often cause I love reading it...You actually make my day when I see that you have pu up another chapter....pleeeeaaaas can you update soon???
person Taylor
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God...I\'m thoroughly displeased with that little cliffhanger there. (Seriously, I was like, screaming the the computer moniter)
Okay, well, your are a great writer. I\'m actually shocked, really, because I\'ve never read any lime that was so well written. If It\'s no too outlandish, I\'d say that you\'ve experience in that certain \"area\", no?

Draco and Harry...hmm. Their flawless. I can actually imagine them all doing what I\'ve read already. Good Job. ^_~

P.S: Neville growing a backbone is hot.
person woof
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello?????? well????????? cliffies are not nice if you aren\'t planning on updating any time soon.
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person SillyHarriet
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on. please please please!!! update!
ARGH!!!

i think the number of exclamation marks says it all.
xx
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person sinheart
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goddamit!!! you HAVE TO write another chapter. i just finished reading your story twice now and i love it even more that the first time. please please please write another chapter if you do i will love you for all of time. please?
person Drays_girl1
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update this story. I absolutely love it. I\'m sitting here rocking back and forth staring at the computer hoping something will appear. *on hands and knees* I beg of you please. *points to others behind her* they beg of you please. * kiss your feet while still begging* Please update!!!
person Alaina
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeease hurry with the next chapter. i love this story soooooo much.
please please please hurry
oh yeah and thanks for a brilliant story, if you can\'t tell i love it
luv Alaina