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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person jkrocksmysocks
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! *phew* god i thought ud totally forgotten about this whopper of a slash fic. I am totally loving it. PLEASE dont leave it that long before you update again! Tah xx
person niamh
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
about time u updated!! thank u it was gorgeous. pretty please update soon!!!??!!!!!
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far
person emmeline_vance
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

Seems like it\'s been ages since the last update, and I was almost salivating when I saw the update reminder in my e-mail inbox. Thanks for kindly telling me, and for the wonderful chapter! I absolutely loved the heated contact at the end, and was slightly upset when Draco left suddenly. Yup, Harry\'s got a lot of work to do! I can\'t wait to read another chapter of sexually-charged arguments and heated snogging. Thanks for the great adrenaline-fuelled piece, and hope you\'ll update again soon. Peace!

Love, me.
person Drays_girl1
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you update. I\'m so happy! I adore this story. Do update soon please!
person swissmiss
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY GOOD! i am wholly impressed! this is going on my favorites list straightaway!!! please update soon!
person Aunt Bijou
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum!! Oh please, update soon! This is going marvelously, and I am so enjoying it! More, please!!
person RissSta
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh em gee, update sooooooon! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(if you have a mailing-list set up to let peopel know about updates, if it\'s not too much trouble, you can add mine. i love your story.)
person Lena
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT was good. That was amazing. That was 10 million times more satisfying than J.K. Rowling\'s writing! This update was well-worth the wait! Hopefully though, we won\'t have to wait as long for the next one, or I will plunge myself into the pits of despair! Seriously though, great chapter. I love how you write Harry and Draco (specifically Draco, who is hard to write and too often painfully out of character). You manage to keep him in character though, which is quite an accomplishment. I loved how you illustrated the defeat of his pride near the end of this chapter. Sheer brilliance! I\'m hoping for another update soon *hint hint, wink wink* Thanks so much for the great writing!
person Reyn
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! He broke Malfoy in! Now the fun can really begin! ^_^