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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person Lisa
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, i liked it a lot. I\'ve been obsessingly checking my mail waiting for the next chapter, and you didn\'t disapoint me!
person Demon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so HOT!!!! update soon!!
person ura
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter!
person Sarah
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love this story! Like its not only smexy as hell, but its kinda funny, and realistic to...its not like other fanfics that contort the characters so badly you can\'t read it...this one feels like it could be part of the books...except mucho better. lol, can\'t wait for update!
person Tre
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good work!

I\'ve been reading this for a while, and constantly checking to see if its been updated yet. From the first chapter onwards ya had me hooked, and I can\'t help but come back to see what happens! You\'re diong an awesome job, and I\'ve enjoyed reading every word of it. Please keep up the great work, and if you\'re ever in need of a beta for any of your stories, don\'t hesitate to ask!

person Zeraphine
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, great idea with that class. and lavender / neville is also very cute.
put me onto your mailing list? thanks, Zera
person Alison
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.... Yummy. :) Wish it was longer, but it\'ll have to do. Please update soon? This is so absolutely wonderful, and it actually looks like you might have an actual story, instead of just lotsa snogging and shagging - which would also be perfectly fine. ;) Can\'t wait for more. :-*
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. Unlike so many others on this site, the story has a nice, well-constructed storyline, and a good developing plot. Keep it up! I can\'t wait for the next chapter...
person ali
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*faint* Update? SOON! This story is SO original. And I would know considering how many H/D fics I\'ve read. And so many of them are the same story, but this is truely one of a kind.
PLEASE KEEP IT UP AND DON\'T KEEP US WAITING!!!!!!!!
Ali
person Danyel
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Wow. I am sooOooooOoo happy you decided to update!!! I\'ve waited waaaaaaaay too long for that, but nonetheless...wow. You are amazing. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!