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for Sex Magic

by velvetjules

person bishounen2528000
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude your story rocks!!! But please continue writing!!! I\'ve been waiting forever for an update. I wanna see if Draco stops pretending that he doesn\'t like what Harry does to him and what happens in their next lesson......... So please update!!!! T.T I\'ll even give a bag of cookies!!!
person Lady Claire
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on this wonderful fic!
When I first read a summary of your story, it sounded like it was one of those \'get-Harry-and-Draco-together-at-any-price\'-fics, that have no storyline whatsoever and often don\'t even try to be just a tiny little bit believable. I don\'t even know why I started reading your fic! But I am really glad that I did, because it\'s simply great. You managed to write a HP/DM that keeps there personalities, reactions and thoughts somewhat believeable and in character. Also by adding Dumbledore and the war, you added a believeable storyline to it, and did not like so many fics just assume that Voldemort decided to hibernate until Harry suddenly remembers him. You kept your focus on the relationship, of course, but you didn\'t just ignore everything else.
One doesn\'t find such good fics very often. Thanks for writing one!

Waiting impatiently for the next chapter,

Lady Claire

PS: Could you send me an e-mail (si_21122_ha@yahoo.com) when you update? Thanks.
person amanda
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic could you like send me a mail when it is updated
person Kordula
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story.
The intensity between Draco and Harry
and the emotions between Neville and Lavender
are perfect.
Hope you plan on finishing this.
I can\'t wait.
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Please don\'t have given up on this story...please be out there somewhere.....do it for Us, the readers...we\'ve waited so long, please? *cries some more*....
person Draeconin
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a winner, here. Good premise, believable interactions, etc. Not sure I can really see Pansy and Goyle together, but since they don\'t really show up anyway... *grin* Looking forward to seeing more of this fic.
person jess
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please say u havent given up on this story because you havent updated for aaages and i have to keep going back to re-read the \'harry gives draco a handjob\' bit because im so desperate for you to post the next chapter.
person LadyRose
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Please update!!
person windssong
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is realy good i love the dinamics and plus its hott please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A truly original, well-written story that operates flawlessly inside the canon. PLEASE!! update soon! Could you add me to your email notification? Thanks!