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Wonderful! I almost didn't read this story as I didn't think it could be done well. You've prooved me wrong!
Thanks for the fun story! More please. :)

Mal

Damn! Nothing like a cup of coffee and a little slash in the morning to wake a girl up! Damn!

Please add me to your mailing list to be notified when you update. This is quite good. There were only a few spelling errors, so thank your beta for me. It's getting harder and harder to find fics in this fandom that aren't rife with those. The plot is good and you're doing a marvelous job of slowly moving the boys along. Kudos.

Hello, I'm enjoying your fanfic greatly! I hope to see the next chapter out soon. Keep up the good work. I would like to be on this fanfic's mailing list. My e-mail is: rdepressgurlml@aol.com . :) Toodles.

give up malfoy, you like him wanking you off... x3
update soon cuz this thangz rockin'

"Fuck you, Potter," Draco breathed heatedly.

"No, Malfoy, I don't think that's the way it's going to be." Harry told him, and watched Malfoy's eyes go wide with shock and disbelief.

i loved these lines within this chapter... x3

ugh, (headache) the kissing scene...
ARGH! i wish people could pay felton and radcliffe to shag each other senseless!
the kissing scene was awesome- you did an amazing job! x3

"I'm not gay," he told the thin air for the sixth time. "Maybe Ron's gay. He was so interested in knowing what kissing Malfoy was like..."

HAHA, Ron's gay!? NOOO~ only drawky and harry... no draky and ron... =D
jk~ loved this chapter... made me smile- a very naughty smile

oh la la...
sneaky. naughty, hentai-like harry... weeee~
x3 im looking forward to THIS "BERRY MUNCH"

Well, I must say that this fic is very unique, in a very good way!! The idea of sex magic is not one I've ever read about before. I really hope that you are planning on continuing to write this fic as I think it has a HUGE amount of potential. A suggestion I would make is that you make the chapters longer and go try to go into the characters thoughts a bit more. I'd like to know more about what Harry and Draco are thinking and feeling about the whole situation. The whole, " no I'm not gay response" from both of them is very interesting considering their reactions. And I think if I knew more what Harry was thinking I would like him a bit more. Right now he's a bit of an asshole to Draco, and I don't fully understand his character in your story. And your Draco is also a bit different then I've read in other stories, so I'd love to know more about his character in this story. So yeah, that's just my two cents. Despite what I said, I stil think your story is amazing! And I really would like to know how it ends!!