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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woahh... poor Sev... it must be very difficult for ihm, to be without his magic... but Harry takes care of him... that's nice... =)
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it... and at the same time i wanted to beat the OotP with a giant mallet... well dumbles would have been beaten with a giant spikey mallet XD hehe auditors breaking into snapes room.... snape vs IRS that would make a really funny fic XD
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just came back to review this after looking through the rest of your stories to find the sequel you mentioned at the end of this story, and I couldn't find one that would fit. Did you write one? I really would like to find out what happens next. I *so* want to watch Harry kick Dumbledore's and Fudge's asses over this. Harry and Severus need to make their own side in this war, and hopefully come to something resembling happily-ever-after. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI, Love the story. WHERE is the sequel!!!!????
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! please tell me where the sequel is please?! I can not find it what so ever! Please help!
e-mail address: angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com (MAIN)
-OR- angelgrl198816 AT yahoo DOT COM
-OR- norgeangel89 AT yahoo DOT com (mpreg)
either or -shrug-
Again you're great! I LOVE all your stories! Please update "Prefects Baby" I MUST know MORE! lol No really I must!
Please and Thank You,
Alexandra17
e-mail address: angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com (MAIN)
-OR- angelgrl198816 AT yahoo DOT COM
-OR- norgeangel89 AT yahoo DOT com (mpreg)
either or -shrug-
Again you're great! I LOVE all your stories! Please update "Prefects Baby" I MUST know MORE! lol No really I must!
Please and Thank You,
Alexandra17
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Story line jumps around like a competitions of leap frogs. Relax. Put more words in. Don\'t be afraid to make it longer. Also waaaay OOC (out of character). But some good ideas and nice writing. Keep writing. I see excellence in your future. :D
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was all so much, it was sad, and beautiful, and ADORABLE lol.. i LOVED it!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor sev! losing his magic...this could continue on, but i like it anyway! cute and steamy!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s a good premise, but extremely OOC. There is little buildup from them ending up in the house together to the attempted suicide to the sex. There were few enough gramatical errors that I did keep reading until the end, and it really does have potential, but part of me feels that this level of writing is that of a junior high student with potential. Keep working on it.