rate_review Reviews

It\'s a good story but the eight chapter neds to happen faster, if he\'d done it along the veins it would\'ve been moments to die and he\'d be long dead by the time Severus found him. You may want to change that, otherwise, keep up the good work and looking forward to more.

OHHH!

I like this one. Especially since Hermione isthe one in the snit. Usually it\'s Ron. Please Continue, i like this story very much.

Update! Now! Can\'t say I like concept of Hermione!Bitch, but it works in this story...

Update! Now! Love it! Can\'t say that I like the concept of Hermione!Bitch, but it works for this story:)

AWWWW!!!! This is cute. I do have a few suggestions though. If you don\'t have a beta reader, get one, they are very useful and help with plot and parts you get stuck at and they also check your grammar etc. Also, try to use som kind of marking i.e. italics, \'single quotes\', or something to show thoughts. I got confused when they were thinking and I wasn\'t sure if it was dialogue or not. BUt pretty good so far, I can\'t wait for the next part!

Awwww....Chapter 7 was beautiful. *grins* I really, really like this story! I also like the fact that Hermione is the one who\'s freaking out about Harry being gay!

more! more! more! i cry!
or i shall ahve to open a cage of cornish pixies into the potions dungeon just as harry and sevvie get into a kinky monkey game of \"detention with the potions professor\"

great for an ickle firstie. me likes it.... good on ya for making hermione a bitch. but i\'d like to see ron and harry being mates in secret or something... therye too good a pair to break up... i dont mean in a naugty way either.

ghellie

This is going to be a good story, I can feel it. Bravo, keep going!!