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awww that was a sweet story. nice work :)

Just finished chapter eight - you have a pretty good story here. You confuse 'except' with 'accept' a lot though - the first is an exception, something that doesn't usually occur kind of thing, the second is to welcome someone and take them in despite their differences; depending on your accent they should even sound different when spoken verbally. I wasn't too keen on how you glamourised self-harm at times to be fair, and it's unrealistic how *everyone* would hate Harry. However there's a lot of emotional imagery and good build-up, you're great at seeing into his emotional state and building empathy and understanding, and the slow pace of Severus/Harry makes it more realistic and romantic. So great so far :)

Really nice little story. =)

I really hope you share RON\'S views on homosexuality, and not Hermione\'s, because if you do share her\'s, then I REFUSE to read any more of this story, or any other stories that you have written.

I, am in no means a big reader of Snarry. But this...
my gods. It was amazing.
I really am looking forwards to reading more of your writing.

really abrupt ending =/ but i liked where it was going...you should have kept on...should have written about what happened between ron and harry, and hermione and harry and such...was an awesome story but it just ended really suddenly

Goodness I felt so bad for Harry in the beginning, I wasnt expecting that from Hermione, but whats odd is i can totally see that happening (hermiones reaction, and the way she handled Ron, which I didnt like but it played the story well). And I loved the Severus Harry relationship, it was so beautiful

Interesting story

AHHHHHHHHHHH! Wonderful! im off to read the next chapter!

Great! I couldn\'t stop reading till it was complete...and now it\'s 11 and i haven\'t done my homework and...sigh. I blame you and this wonderful story lol jk
-Stephanie