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for An Apology As Good As Silence

by Laney

person Kaitlin
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot, I would really like to see the story continue. You\'ve already got me asking a million questions, cliff hangers, I love them only if the writer doesn\'t stop on me so you better not! And please not too many interuptions on severus not reading that note... don\'t kill me too many times! Oh yeah I like your story telling smooth without too much or too little detail. Well KEEP WRITING!
person Relicwitch
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I started to read your story today.
I loved it. It\'s very well written and it\'s intoxicating!
Bring the next chapter in, please! :))
See you soon.
Relic
person trish
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the second chapter Keep on writing the story is getting good!!!!!
person Ashe
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, please continue with this. I really really like it so far, and it\'s very intriguing. Very original too.
person mel
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story. You HAVE to continue.
person Ladynight
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the story so far is very good. i actually went \"NO!!!!!\" at the end of chapter one. Please say that Sev reads the letter in chapter 3?? and you have to tell us whats wrong with Harry? Or is it just that he has to live near Sev?
person Laurel_runes
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. The brigade of letters oddly reminiscent of Harry receiving his Hogwarts letter. The ending seemed a bit sad but still hauntingly beautiful...another part would definitely be appreciated. Your work is spectacular.
person Akitso
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaah!!! no!!!! *tears* no fair.
no fair. he HAS to find the letter!!! *even more tears*
awsomely good tho, keep it up!!!!
person Papaya
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that if you\'ve got an idea for another chapter to this story you should go with it! Don\'t get me wrong, I think it\'s great as it is! But my theory is to never let a good idea go to waste. Looking forward to seeing what you\'ll do with it, and thank you for the great entertainment!