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for A Birthday

by MontanaDan

schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A perfect birthday.
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is cute, and hot. I love their banter and love play.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg 2 funny ^_^
person sly pantera
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how cute. Nice story. I thought the end was absolutely hilarious. ^____^
person Jet
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that because I can so see harry doing that...............Jet
person Klee Louise
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was good! Haha made me laugh and not many fics do that - hmm or maybe I just read the wrong fics (well to me they're the right ones *grins wickidly*)
*sigh* Sev, Harry and lots of moaning - Darl you just made my night ;-P

Klee
person Darya
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*_* that was SO good :P
i love your stories ~!! your writing is so good, and your Harry and Severus are so real. i just love it!!!
hehe, it's Harry's birthday... then why the hell didi he made breakfest for Severus?? didnt get that bit.
anyway, it was awesome!!!
Darya~~
person Joey
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very sweet. Smutty in a good way. Loved the ending.
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Coolsa.
person sethian
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ending ^.^ I really love it, the idea is great. AweSoMe SlaSh :)
Sethian