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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Voldie. When he learn about Harry... I look forward for more. Especially surprises you mentioned. Update soon.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, glad to see an update! This is getting interesting! I wonder who all is involved with Dumbledor\'s scheming? Lupin? Mr. or Mrs. Weasley? It seems that all these people genuinely care for Harry so it would be hard to imagine them in on it. I\'m glad that there will be no duplicates of the Snape nose! I can also say the I can understand what you\'re saying in the fic despite any errors in your english. And, I am enjoying your fic! Keep up the good work, you\'re doing great! Priss
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good fic so far. I like your Trelawney. I particularly don\'t like HarryRon shipping - it\'s just weird. Well but I wouldn\'t mind it if the story turned better at the end. So keep writing.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it Lily? Is Lily Voldemort\'s Daughter? Is this a story where Voldemort becomes good or something? Hope so. This story is great. Hope Snape is happy very soon. Looking forward to more.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and was fascinated by it. Quite interesting and full of surprises. Trelawny, specially, was the biggest surprise of them all. I love how you transformed her from a minor and ridiculous character into one full of powerful knowledge. Not to mention that I love evil-Dumbledore stories. Good job! Hope to see more of it! ^_^
Just a minor note: be careful how you use the word \"Thought\", \"through\", and \"Though\". I noticed you mixed them up a handfull of times.
Just a minor note: be careful how you use the word \"Thought\", \"through\", and \"Though\". I noticed you mixed them up a handfull of times.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your ideas on Harry. I hate seeing him get hurt. It\'s a great day when he kicks butt & takes names! And, lives happily ever after! This fic is very interesting! I like the inclusion & portrayal of Trelawny. The concept that she really is a very good seer adds dimension to her character. I wonder who is Lord Voldemort\'s relation(Harry?)? It must be a grandchild at this point. As for Harry, I assume that in reality he doesn\'t look like James Potter if he isn\'t his son. I hope that he has a true appearance that can be revealed. I think he should look like Lily - except for having Snape\'s black hair. Most boys do look like their moms. Besides, that Snape nose would be sad to see on his face! Will Harry have a romantic interest? How do the Malfoys tie in? Maybe a slash romance between Harry & Draco with mpreg? Pretty Please??? Please update soon! Priss
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. Look forward for more.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you definately got me interested in what the story is going to be about. Can\'t wait to see what is instore for the rest of the story.