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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going with the updates...great story
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is so good. It fallows some popular plots (severitus, related to Voldemort and a not so good Dumbledore & his Phoenixes) but in a very diffrent way. I especially liked that Ron wasn\'t on Dumbledores side as he often is and I hope that the rest of the Weasleys isn\'t, with possible exeption of Percy (but he maybe is on Fudges side..). Please write more and post more soon. I\'m not very patient.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please e-mail me when ever you update soon!!!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE...love the story give it 5 stars, please update again real soon
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
be ware---it\'s beware...one word,
\"you need more PROVE\" it should be \"you need more PROOF\" ( just a different tense)
\"the dark lord has SEND for you \" it should be \"the dark lord has SENT for you\"
and desert should have two s\'s \"dessert\" okay, i hope that helps some. and i look forward to more chapter, i have read the 10 you have up. I liked it.
\"you need more PROVE\" it should be \"you need more PROOF\" ( just a different tense)
\"the dark lord has SEND for you \" it should be \"the dark lord has SENT for you\"
and desert should have two s\'s \"dessert\" okay, i hope that helps some. and i look forward to more chapter, i have read the 10 you have up. I liked it.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see an update! Poor Voldie doesn\'t have the knack of the whole relationship thing quite yet it seems. Can\'t help but do things through threats-poor guy. I think Harry will end up liking his birthday gifts very much! How could he not with a bag of sex toys from the twins & a new pet from Voldie! Can\'t wait for the next update! Priss
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! The plot thickens! I love evil Dumbledore and Hermione! Well... not really. But they make for very nice evil characters. I\'ve always thought that they are too good to be true.
I liked this chapter very much. Would have never thought of using both Hermione and Pettigrew in way you did. Great job!
I liked this chapter very much. Would have never thought of using both Hermione and Pettigrew in way you did. Great job!
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! The plot thickens! I love evil Dumbledore and Hermione! Well... not really. But they make for very nice evil characters. I\'ve always thought that they are too good to be true.
I liked this chapter very much. Would have never thought of using both Hermione and Pettigrew in way you did. Great job!
I liked this chapter very much. Would have never thought of using both Hermione and Pettigrew in way you did. Great job!
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Finally confrontation between old Voldie and Harry. I wonder when Severus make an appearance. So, keep writing.