rate_review Reviews

Well, this story has an interesting twist to its plotline; with Voldemort/Riddle (not Riddler) as Harry's Grandfather and Snape as his Father. While Snape/daddy has been done before, this combination is new...and now everyone is switching sides away from the evil, conniving Dumbledore. And it's fairly intelligently done, as well. I'm enjoying it thouroughly. Please do continue.

P.S. Congratulations on aquiring a Beta!

WHY haven

I like this story - although *sniffle* poor Ron. I can't wait for Hermione to get hers...

this is a really good story, i hope you are still working on it.

I love this story, and so far the spelling has not bothered me at all (mine is horrible) but when you say you have a Beta and things like " I have the utmost thrust on you, my son. " still appear it is a bit worrying. should be "I have the utmost trust in you, my son". Unless this is a more pornographic story that i realised. As thrust is a movement, often used to describe hip movements during sex.

It's great story. I can't wait next chapter. You will write next, RIGHT???????

The proper names are:
Riddle, not Riddler
Sybill Trelawney, not Sibil Trelaway
Narcissa, not Narcisa
Beauxbaton, not Beaux Battoux

Highly entertaining - and I hope you will dole out some more punishment for your readers' pleasure.

So this will be Harry/Draco? I would not be averse to that :D

I love this story just got finished with all 18 chapters and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

I am so glad that you have decided to get a beta. I do love your premise, and the story that you have written is very good (minus the spelling/grammar/name errors) and very interesting. Please go back into your story and at LEAST correct all the "Tom Riddler"'s to "Riddle" as soon as possible. That was the thing that got me aggravated the most, and I almost stopped reading because of that. But I'm so glad that now you have a beta to help point out those minor (but repeated) spelling errors. :D:D:D:D Love your story, love it even more now that i'll be able to go through it without cringing because of the spellings. I am sorry if this review sounds harsh, and I don't mean it that way, but I can guarantee that as soon as you fix up the chapters, you're gonna get a lot more hits and a lot more glowing reviews. Keep up the wonderful story!