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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far i like the story its interesting and shows harry as a powerful but not purely good character. Also i like the concept of him indulging in dark arts in order to accomplish something that isn\'t inherently evil.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story at all. Shall be interested in seeing what happens. What are the consequences I wonder? Do keep posting.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a wonderful writer, your ideas are wonderfully original, and this story has a great tone to it.
You want a review? I\'ll give you one.
I am supposing that much like the rest of the planet you have read Anne Rice. If not, bully, but since you most likely have, I want to tell you from the bottom of my heart that your descriptions are phenomenal, not drawing on for chapters at a time- see, Rice goes overboard, telling you very plainly precisely how everything looks, smells, tastes, feels, sounds, particullarly in \"Interview.\" She is my prime example of how not to write descriptions. You wtite beautiful descriptions.
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You want a review? I\'ll give you one.
I am supposing that much like the rest of the planet you have read Anne Rice. If not, bully, but since you most likely have, I want to tell you from the bottom of my heart that your descriptions are phenomenal, not drawing on for chapters at a time- see, Rice goes overboard, telling you very plainly precisely how everything looks, smells, tastes, feels, sounds, particullarly in \"Interview.\" She is my prime example of how not to write descriptions. You wtite beautiful descriptions.
For example, you write: