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for Deeds and their consequences

by GothVamp

person Kyzz
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I absolutely love your story, it is so amazing, but I must say that I am dissappointed you left it there for what like almost 6 MONTHS (Ok so I just read it today but thats beside the point). Please Please PLEASE update as soon as you can because its an amazing story that should be for sure finished
person miko-chan
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute I love it
person pamma
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will you please update? please!??!
person Sindauviel
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait..so what was harry\'s dream about? 0o0o-good chappie!
person Pamma
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, yay! Yummy updates!! No, do NOT stop emailing me about the updates, because i\'ll never know when you have. I mean, i don\'t want to miss a chapter of this sexy story, it\'s too good to miss! I wish you would have more review..you truly deserve them..but since it\'s aff.net, there\'s not manny people around as much as ff.net. I could understand if you don\'t want to update in ff.net anymore, my friend\'s story got deleted too! It\'s so gay of them to do that. Please update soon, i can\'t wait till sex part!!!! Go GothVamp!!
person pamma
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will you please update before i get too old and die!!?
person Pamma
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is amazing, it siriusly need to bo update now! I would suggest you post you story in fanfiction.net, bacause that\'s the place where most people go, and you would get more reviews, reviews the you deserve. Put your story under Sirius and Harry, ok? I really like your story, please don\'t let this be the last chapter i will see. It\'s too good to end so soon. And please email me to let me know if you\'ve update. Please update!!
person Sindauviel
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! sirius is back!!!! yay! i was soo mad at j.k.rowling when she killed him!!!!! hm..btw- i love your story- \'two worlds\' its awesome...and \'behing your smile\'
great stories!!!!
person Christina
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you combined actual ritual into the story. This chapter could have gone on a bit longer, but maybe that\'s just me enjoying your story so much!
I also really liked how you had Harry calling for him by calling him a son of a bitch. That was entertaining. I mean, other than your typical cursing of the saints when they have seemingly failed, can you imagine any other sort of religious activity that it helps when you scream at the intended?
More, please!
person Sindauviel
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo...i hope harry brings sirius back...he should have killed bellatrix...what if she told someone? not that she believes him but...update!