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Hello I was wondeing if you actually have more of the story done or not.

I'm sorry to hear you're being plagued by virusses... I hope it's fixed soon, because you really, realy have to update this wonderfull story!!!!!!! I loved the first chapter and am dying to read what's going to happen next, so please, update soon!!!!

Hugs
K

OH, so sorry to hear about getting viruses from this site. That\'s terrible luck.

I like your stories and don\'t mind having them posted in sections. I see a lot of genius in your writing, it just has to be drawn out more. Please take your time with this and make it the work you want it to be.

If you don\'t get 10 reviews, I\'ll keep reposting until I reach that mark.

Again, please continue writing this story, it\'s really good.

Hmmm, toys......how about a feather? I liked the snake venom in the cuts, that must really hurt and would probably react in a way that would stun or get Harry drowsy and hallucinate. I\'ve always enjoyed the cock-ring used to limit orgasm. Seems like torture to me. Mind games....I\'m no good at thinking them up, but I love to read about them. Blind fold Harry and make him think about experiencing something other than what is really happening. Genuinely devious.

Please post soon.

interesting start you have here it seems to be promising hope to see more in the near future

Good luck ridding your computer of a virus! I like the start of this story. Please continue.

Hey, I like it so far. I think Harry seems a bit OOC but Draco doesn\'t. He should be a bit more Sadistic though. As for toys to use, if you do a bit of research on single tail whips and other BDSM toys and sex toys that would be cool. Maybe you could use different dildos on him(Harry). If I had a more definate idea, I\'d be more specific. Maybe a ball gag, blind fold, knife play, potions to hieghten the sensations for Harry. Like ones that intensify the feelings he\'s given. Ones that feel icy/frostbite like and the opposites-ones that make him feel intense heat. And if you plan for Draco to fuck him, maybe Draco could use a special lube/lubes that would cause different sensations too. One that perhaps intensifies pain, pleasure or burns a little, etc.

~Starwolf~

You could greatly improve on your story by adding more plot, more detail, and keeping the characters IN character.

Interesting. I\'d like to see more.

This story sounds promising, I hope you continue.

My first suggestion is to make the chapters a little longer. As far as the next scene, I think Draco\'s probably a ruthless, sadistic little fuck, so the more violent, the better. Maybe he should taunt him, also. You know, tell him in graphic detail what he\'s going to do before he does it. Errr....that\'s all I gots for now......Good first chap!