rate_review Reviews

I vote for a continuation, definitely. Nice build up. now I need some smooches.

Okay, first made props for such an original idea of taking Draco and Harry out of the RJ rowling world. Very brave. Second, Draco seems very out of character. I can appreceiate him being in an AU but we all love Draco cause he\'s a pompus poof\'. I think if you change that too much it\'s more like your own story than a fan fic. Not that there is anything wrong with that. I dedicate as much time to the Origianl lists as the fan fic lists. Its just that when you got to Draco/Harry you want to read about Draco/Harry in all it\'s fic-y goodness. I hope this isn\'t coming across wrong cause I like the story lay out and the introspection of Draco\'s character but I just think that it seems out of place. but maybe that\'s what you wanted. Till your next chapter.

PS Your doing great without a beta. Feed back can be given by anyone however, good grammar and scentence structure is a gift from the heavenly writing gods. Feel forturate you are so blessed. It was very easy to read.

YES CONTINUE!!!!! and give it a happy ending!! please?

Continue! Why did they break up? What happened and what happens now?

I\'ve never seen the movie, but this beginning has me interested. What happened between Draco and Harry that they broke up? It had to have profound as much as Draco seems determined to leave it behind. I hope you will continue.

yes please continue!! I really like it so far. it\'s starting up good and leaves me wanting more.

YES! YES! YES!

yes but hurry up with it!!

Sounds like it\'s going to be good. Hope you choose to continue this.

Hey! Please continue this story. Its good and I think it would make an awesome story if you continued it