rate_review Reviews

Bravo! I\'m ashamed of myself for not reading this story sooner. Anyway, I -have- to tell you, dahling, that this is excellent work! Your writing is absolutely -brilliant-! I shall definitely review future chapters avidly! -is definitely going to keep her eyes on this wonderful morsel of fiction-.

Excellent! My favourite charactor is Lucius and you have written him so well. You made Narcissa a well structured charactor as well. The whole story uses language brilliantly. I hope there is more to follow, its been ajoy to read so far.

Very well written and equally riviting. And a very good read, I couldn\'t stop after the first chapter. The darkness and depth of Narcissa is fascinating, you have done an excellent job in fleshing out the characters. I eagerly await the next installment. Thanks for sharing your talent!

I read and review a lot of fanfics, and very few win words of my praise. I usually end up bored or amazed by an author\'s inability to find a point, but for once I actually find myself getting involved in a story and enjoying it. Pity you have recieved so few hits, when \"noddy says hi to Jenny\" recieved so many. My only word of wisdom: balance. Don\'t draw out your tale more than you need to. Some things can be left unsaid so long as you reach some similance of denoument.

I just wanted to let you know that I really, really, like this story. Besides Luscious and Narcissa being devilishly attractive, I can connect with parts of it. Thank you, and keep writing please!

I really like this fic. I\'m not usually a fan of the Lucius/Narcissa pairing (for some reason, I usually only enjoy reading pairings from the future of the books, not the past--I guess it seems to kind of ruin the fun for me if I know how it\'s going to end), but I really like the way your versions of them. They\'re both three dimensional, interesting characters who have both good and bad sides (though you\'ve certainly left enough hints to indicate that in the end the bad sides will prevail). There are a few grammar mistakes--nothing a good beta couldn\'t fix, and if you want one, I\'d be happy to oblige--but otherwise this was very well-written and engaging. Thank you for posting, and please continue to update!

Lovely!!! The writing is excellent, and the charcaters are completely canon! Keep it up

I absolutely enjoyed your story and am eagerly awaiting more. The pairing is so dark and deliciously beautiful.